One Shot: Somersaults of the Heart - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by .Divya.


nicely written Kanky.. though I dont see PKYEK... from wht you have written... its very nice..


Thanks, Divya. The show wasn't my fave too, lately. But now its all I watch. :D
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by natashu


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There are no two ways about it. This OS, like many of your other writings, was awesome! (:
And even though it was your first take on Abhay-Piya as a couple, you still managed to capture both of their characters beautifully.
 
He seemed so immensely normal that moment. My normal, a normal person's normal.
...This line really got me. I like how you've presented the entire idea surrounding 'nomal' through this OS. Your normal could be different from mine. What is 'normal' in the sense of the word? That is psychology all over. =P
 
One request though, you had this happening from Piya's POV. Could you do one from Abhay's POV?
 
I would really like to read that.
Once again, good job done!
 
Thanks for the PM!

Normal like mostly all other fundamentals are perceived differently by different people, I second you on that!

Abhay's POV, this is actually fascinating me. Sure, I will write. Thank you so much. 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by 0o.Leah.o0


Excellently written. Rarely do I see a FF where the feelings are captured so beautifully.

Its amazing how you managed to write all that in a beautiful flow.
For some very odd reason I loved this line of yours - My normal, a normal person's normal.
Incredible.
 
Leah


This line was a real spontenous one. And thanks a lot for the comment, you're really encouraging. 😃


Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by -Humaira-


OMG, that was beautifully written! 😳
It had some awesomely explained emotions. 
We have some.. not some...MANY brilliant writers here! 😃



Thank you, I'm elated. And am glad you consider me one of those! :D
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by DulceAmor


Hey Kanky, thanks for the PM. Though I stopped watching PKYEK ages ago, this was really good and i thoroughly enjoyed it. You made Abhay seem so mysterious and captivating and you expressed Piya's attraction to him really well. You have a good knack for characterisation. You should be proud of this piece.


You should resume watching, its better than before. Thats why am still hooked. 😆 And hey, thanks a lot. I kind of enjoy putting my feet into somebody else's shoes and write, so that's that. 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Julybaby22


aawhh that was really well written 👍🏼

Thanks, Mandy! 😃
Posted: 13 years ago

kanks it was awesome

i love the way you use words to describe things.....

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by arti_4ever


kanks it was awesome

i love the way you use words to describe things.....



Thanks, Dua! 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
You know what Kanky, there should be a love button on the IFs. I just loved it. Beautiful expressions, beautiful capture of feelings, beautiful thoughts. Just amazing. I re-read the whole thing today to write the comments.
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Ritz93


You know what Kanky, there should be a love button on the IFs. I just loved it. Beautiful expressions, beautiful capture of feelings, beautiful thoughts. Just amazing. I re-read the whole thing today to write the comments.
Dint know you commented! 😲

Anyways, thank you very much - I am honored. 😊

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