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KUCH PAL WITH ANGINI

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
hie guys i am back with some more interesting poetry related to some scenes of angini
 
at divorce scene from anmol to ragini
 
                                                       sun liya hum ne faisla tera
                                  r sun kar udas ho baithey
 
                                                 zehn   chup  chap  ankh  hali
                                  jaise hum kainat kho baithey
 
 
in a scene when anmol was wondering abt the rain scene
 
                        yadein jab yad ati hain barishon  ke  mosam mein 
                 ankhein bheeg jati hain barishon ke mosam mein
 
when anmol leaves the house because he was upset from ragini to amol standing in the rain waiting 4 anmol
 
                        hum to samjhey they ke bhula dein ge unko
                        kia hua aj  phir  ye  kis  baat  per  rona aaya
 
                                  kis ke liye jeete hain r kis ke liye marte
                                  uthe jo ye swaal to yer swaal pr rona aaya
 
anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
 
                                     is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
                                     tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum
 
 
ill continue with some more shayri on thi topic but now i am going its urgent see u tomorrow
 
 
 
 ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;as i had promised the mystery breaks and guys my name is isha;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;Wink
 
 
                                    

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
@isha...at last you reveal your name..
 
btw  isha a beautiful name ...Smile
 
well its amazing your post..love the shayrana andaaz for each scene of angini..
 
really lovely and so aptly penned down for each situation.
 
"is dil ki haar dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum"
"tum kya jano hamare liye kitne kaas ho tum"...
 
these lines are so true ..we did witness his genuine feelings for ragini and how dear she was to him in his heart....
 
 in the end he did say she was his life and how he loved her more than himself..
 
one  more wonderful post and keep it up...Thumbs Up
 

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
 
                                     is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
                                     tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum
 
I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha  bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon Smile

Please keep continuing !!

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shanti05

Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
 
                                     is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
                                     tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum
 Please keep continuing !!
I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha  bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon Smile

 
 
actually it is really hard to make a separate verse 4 every situation but ill continue writing more
and also think to write an ff
also thanks 4 liking my name
Please keep continuing !!


Edited by anmol2 - 11 January 2011 at 10:20am

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Very Well Done Pal! Made for Gr8 Reading...I cam imagine Anmol mouthing shayaris to his Ragini, while Ragini blushes...

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
I LOVE YOU Hug

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
FantasticClap Clap Clap Clap,This was simply great IshaBig smile Clap Clap.Your Shayari's were so perfect for AnginiBig smile,Write more.Big smile

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Nice to know about your name , Isha and I don't understand Shayari but it was amazing to watch and hear  powerful Hindi words coming from Apurva's mouth, I was rather amazed and hoping we might find Anmol mouth shayaris to his beloved wife someday Day Dreaming

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