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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
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Heyy manji!!!

Ok I am here with my comment…

Firstly, I really enjoyed reading this ss……although I did not comment on every part,

Yet I loved it!!

Aditya has always been the source of fun and entertainment in this ss for me (don't take it in a wrong sense please)

Of course SaJan are the central characters, but aditya was equally important for me in this ss.

Samrat…….well if I start writing about him, then I would end up nowhere…….sachchi!

So it's better if I keep quite…..as you know that how much im crazy for him…. (ahem ahem)

And gunjan…..ummm….she was ok……..but I disliked her in previous thread as she misunderstood samrat……but it wasn't her mistake.

 

But the most important thing is that your writing style makes a reader to love the ss or ff!

 

The ending part was very well written!!!!! Hats off to you!!!!!!

(you make me feel proud……..as im your bestie……lolllzzzz)

And yes I was expecting aditya to be like his father…..genes ka asar……

But you forgot to mention one thing……….who did aditya got married???? (ahem ahem)

Ok…..koi bhi ladki ho, mujhe isse kya?

Par wo ladki jo bhi hai use hume shaadi mein invite toh karna chahiye na??? *puppy face*

 

Ok I end my bakwaas here.

Since this ss is finished, so now im expecting some more ss from you……..obviously when you get time!!!!

 

Love you!!!



Edited by ria_lovesajan - 05 April 2011 at 5:58am

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editing my rp on pg 65


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a beautiful ending!!
really very nicely written!!
i will miss this ss!!

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
AWWWW...Manji  L O V E D  ur UPDT!
it was fantastic yar ..............awesome part
u described n wrote it superbly  Clapluv d all scenes Heart
ending was wonderful gosh ..gonna 2 miss dis SS...
thanx 4 sharing beautiful ss  Hugkeep write more !
luv
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ria_lovesajan

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Heyy manji!!!

Ok I am here with my comment'

Firstly, I really enjoyed reading this ss''although I did not comment on every part,

Yet I loved it!!

Aditya has always been the source of fun and entertainment in this ss for me (don't take it in a wrong sense please)

Of course SaJan are the central characters, but aditya was equally important for me in this ss.

Samrat''.well if I start writing about him, then I would end up nowhere''.sachchi!

So it's better if I keep quite'..as you know that how much im crazy for him'. (ahem ahem)

And gunjan'..ummm'.she was ok''..but I disliked her in previous thread as she misunderstood samrat''but it wasn't her mistake.

 

But the most important thing is that your writing style makes a reader to love the ss or ff!

 

The ending part was very well written!!!!! Hats off to you!!!!!!

(you make me feel proud''..as im your bestie''lolllzzzz)

And yes I was expecting aditya to be like his father'..genes ka asar''

But you forgot to mention one thing'''.who did aditya got married???? (ahem ahem)

Ok'..koi bhi ladki ho, mujhe isse kya?

Par wo ladki jo bhi hai use hume shaadi mein invite toh karna chahiye na??? *puppy face*

 

Ok I end my bakwaas here.

Since this ss is finished, so now im expecting some more ss from you''..obviously when you get time!!!!

 

Love you!!!

 
hahah!!ROFLROFL Omgg!! I make You proudd!!ROFL Lol.. I am happy to hear that!
And awww thanks for all the shocking compliments!!!! haha! Shocking because tu jaldi se meri taarif kabhi kartii nahi hai! ROFLROFLROFL
Thank youu for the lovely comments! Love youu toooo!!

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