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Okay I just start reading this FF and the starting is brilliant Mani Clap ClapThe concept is preety different but indeed a really nice one dear StarSo Sajan are having a son as well whose name is Adi...Aww that,s really cute EmbarrassedI,m really liking the character of ther son.and Sajan,s marriage is going to take place> well am excited to read it further will comment on the rest of the parts tomorrow Big smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
hiii dear ...
maine promise kya ta na ki
ill comment..so here is my comment
read the parts
aaaaaawwwwww
all were tooo lovely
ritual traditions 2 wedding
awesome part
finally sajan ki shadi ho gayyy =)
i loved sajan+adi scenes a lott
n sam's line "muje ek choti si pyari si gunjan chayye.."
hhhhoooooowwwwww januableeeee!!!..hehehh
sooo sweet of him!!
waiting 4 next
seee yaaa
love uuu
mmmuuaahhh

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Awesome.. Waiting for your next update... But technically, Samrat's mom is Aditya's Daadi and Nani would be Gunjan's mom.. I guess it slipped off your mind!
Anways! I really loved your after-marriage scenes! Samrat is so naughty .. I loved his line "Mujhe ek chhoti si, pyaari si, gunjan chahiye"...
Aditya's KABBAB-MEIN-HADDI is Samrat!!
Loved it to the core..
PM me when you update the next part!
Waiting for the family moments!

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
waiting for ur update
take ur time

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Hey Guys!
 
Im Back with another update! Fast huh?LOLWink
 
Ok.. Now a small recap before the update..
 
SAJAN got married the previous night and the next morning Suhani and her mom leave for london.. And now SaJan with Aditya enter their new LIFE!
 
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Samrat was awake. He didnt want to get up. He wanted to stay in bed and wait for his lovely wife to come and wake him up. As usual, Samrat Shergill never left a single oppurtunity to flirt with his wife. He dreamt of gunjan blushing.. her cheeks burning as he encircled her waist with his strong arms. Caressing her cheeks and looking into her deep eyes. He sighed every now and then waiting for Mrs.Shergill to come upstairs.

Where as Mrs.Shergill was busy preparing breakfast. She looked at her watch. 9:30am.

"Adi.. Adi..." she called out to her son.

"Yes mom, I am ready. When do we leave?" he asked.

"first go wake your dad up! And ask him to get ready.." she said.

"he is still sleeping?" adi asked in shock!

"Yes. Go wake him up.."

"Ok mom.." adi said as he went upstairs..

Gunjan again got into making breakfast and kept blushing every now and then thinking about the previous night. She couldnt get that out of her head. It was one of the most beautiful nights of her life.

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Samrat face the other side as he slept.. Adi came from behind and shook him..

"Get up..!" he said.. trying to be calm in waking him up.

"Uhmm" samrat groaned.. "Let me sleep!" he said..

Adi shook him harder and samrat caught hold of his hand and pulled him into bed.. he turned around and went over adi and then opened his eyes to see his 12 year old son staring at him in disbelief.. His dad was shirtless and lay almost over him..

"AAAaaaaAAAaaaaaaAAaaAA" both of them screamed in chorus!

Gunjan who was downstairs jumped as she was freaked out and ran upstairs to see what was going on..

As she entered the room she saw both the men sitting on the two ends of the bed looking in opposite directions. Adi ran and hugged gunjan.

"Mom.. dad has gone mad!" Adi almost yelled!

"ADI!!" she scolded. "he is your father! Dont talk about him this way!"

"Mom, you have no idea what he just did—

And obviously adi couldnt say anything more as samrat's hand immediately covered his mouth and he pulled him along with him...

"Adi.. its ok.. whatever happened has happened.. now go down and SHUT UP!" he said grinning at him.

"Adi.. what happened? Tell me!" Gunjan ordered. She wanted to know what dad and son were up to early in teh morning..!

"Mom, I think dad can explain better..." he winked at Samrat.. "Ill go down and get my things ready for school!

Aditya left the room.

"Samrat, what did you do to him?" she asked angrily.. She loved her son alot.

"Umm.. actually.. chashmish.. i thought.. I mean I thought you had come to wake me up and I—

And before samrat could finish his line gunjan burst out laughing. Samrat made an evil face and he pulled her towards him and held her against his bare chest.

"Samrat, tum , aise, abhi?" gunjan paused after every word as she blushedd..

"Laugh? What happened.. Laugh.. laugh.."

"Ok baba.. sorry! Now leave me!"

"No. I wont." Holding her tighter..

"Why?" she asked..

"I want a kiss.." he said shamelessly.. Gunjan planted a kiss on his cheek..

"Now leave me!" she demanded. "No. I didnt say I want a kiss on my cheeks!"

"SamraaaaT!" she scolded him..

"until my needs are served I am not letting you go.."

"Oh, really?" gunjan said naughtily..

"Yes, Mrs. Shergill"

"So.. fine ill give you what you want." She said winking at him.

"That's like my Chashmish!"

"Close your eyes.." she whispered..

She took her hands over his eyes and he shut them.. his grip became loose and gunjan felt that.. she inched closer to samrat and whispered in his ears.. "We are out of stock now!"  and she tried to escape.. but samrat was faster.

"Uh Uh.. No cheating Mrs. Shergill.. Im far better than you at this!"

"Too bad, I have to go now!"

"Only if I let you go.. that is.."

"Samrat.. please." She said in her sweet voice.

"Mom we are getting late!" adi screamed..

Samrat left her and for two seconds she wondered why he did that.. but the next second she was running down the staircase..

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Samrat took a bath and came downstairs for breakfast.. He was already late for office. Gunjan quickly served the breakfast and all of them left together.. Samrat went to office and gunjan drove adi to school.. Today was his interview in Bombay Scottish school and he was quite nervous. Gunjan saw his son sweating with nervousness and placed her hand over his..

"Relax adi.. why you getting to worked up sweetheart!"

"Mom, Hope I get in. My marks are not that great and I see no reason why they would want a boy like me!"

"Adi.. why do you always talk so maturely! Your just 12.. Kids of your age dont think so much! Relax.."

Adi smiled at his mom.. He somewhere still liked taking care of his mom, but he didnt show it as now.. there was someone else to do that job. He sighed as he entered the building. Gunjan smiled as she put her arm around her son.

Adi was soon called in and gunjan shut her eyes and prayed.. It somehow seemed that he was going for his first job interview already! Gunjan laughed at that thought. After about 15 minutes she was called inside. The principle sat in front of the desk and greeted gunjan. She sat down next to adi, eager to hear his decision..

"Maam, Aditya is a very bright boy, though academically weak, but I am sure we can work on that.. Im sure he will make us proud!! He is accepted!"

"Thank you so much sir!" Gunjan said as she smiled..

"Our new session starts in a month."

"Thank you!"

The principal escorted them to the door and Aditya hugged gunjan. He couldnt believe he got into the best school in mumbai!

Everything was going so well in their lives.

"That calls for a treat adi!" Gunjan said..

"Mom, how about ice cream?" he said , excited..

"Ok.. but only if you promise to go have warm water after that!"

"yeah mom!!!"

Gunjan and adi went to Barista and shared a Banana Split with four scoops of ice cream! Aditya was so happy as he finally got to spend some time with his mom.. Gunjan smiled seeing aditya eat with such eagerness. He was his soul and their bond was very strong.

Gunjan gave the good news to samrat.. even he was very happy and he congratulated his son! He was indeed proud of him already!

On reaching home aditya called sameer to talk to him and gunjan started to settle the house and arrange all the things in order.. there was alot of work and very little time. Once samrat was back.. he wouldnt let her work!

While preparing lunch gunjan's phone rang, it had to be samrat.

"Hi Chashmish!"

"Samrat?! Kya hua?"

"Kuch nahi.. hona kya hai?"

"Then why did you call?"

"I was missing you jaan!"

"Samraaaat ... please concentrate on your work. Bye!"

"Par –

The phone was already cut!.. Samrat sighed and was back to work..

Gunjan made lunch and sent Samrat's lunch to office..

"Adi.. Come fast! Lunch Time!"

Adi came in a moment..

"Im very hungry mom!"

"good! I made aloo gobi for you!"

"Ohh! Thanks.. yumm.. looks delicious!"

They sat and ate lunch..

"So mom tell me something.." aditya said..

"hmmm"

"Why do you love dad?"

"What?" gunjan asked.. she was confusedd..

"I am just asking, why did you fall in love with dad?"

"I dont know.." Gunjan said.. Aditya hadnt expected this answer.. "please mom tell me.. you always tell me everything!"

"Well.. I really dont know.. It just happened, We were good friends and slowly we came closer to each other.. Thats it!"

"Reallyy? How coool!"

Gunjan started laughing.. "Adi.. you wont understand all this now! Your too young.. sit quietly and eat your food!"

"Mom.. im not a kid ok!"

"Reallyy?" gunjan teased aditya!

Both of them had a heartily laugh..

"How about watching a movie?" Gunjan asked.

"Sounds fun! But I wanna watch, The kings speech, not some hindi movie!" Aditya exclaimed.. now he could do what he felt like.. because gunjan was happy and now aditya enjoyed teasing her.

"No.. please.. I wanna watch Patiala House!" Gunjan said.

"No mom.. Not any more of Akshay kumar.. he over acts.. He is annoying!"

"No he is not!.. Ok maybe a little bit.." gunjan admitted..

"So done.. we are watching Kings Speech!" Aditya Announced.

"fine.." gunjan groaned..

Aditya smiled..

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At 7:00 pm.

The doorbell rang.

Gunjan opened the door. As expected. SAMRAT! Gunjan looked at her watch.. "Its just 7 samrat?"

Samrat looked shocked and then his expressions changed and he became suspicious.

"Aren't you supposed to be happy that I am home early?" Samrat said.

"Yes, I am. Go change and come down.. are you hungry?"

"No.. not now.. What are you doing..?"

"I and Aditya are playing chess. Wanna watch?"

"Yeah.. ill come in five minutes.."

"Ok.."

Gunjan went back to continue their game.. She was winning.. Aditya wanted to play dominoes.. but since the movie was his choice now he had to bear with chess..

Samrat came down and entered the room to see A sulking adi and an excited gunjan.. He laughed at teh contrast..

He sat next to aditya..

"hey Champ, congrats!" Samrat said..

"thanks dad.." he said glumly..

"Whats wrong?" he askedd.

"I hate CHESS!" aditya announcedd..

"Hi 5!" samrat said..

"Samrat!! Your supposed to encourage him to play chess!"

"Chashmish, chess is a game for geeks.. Dudes like us play basketball & Video games!" Adi grinned ..

"You called me a geek??!!" Gunjan got angry!

"Any doubt?" Samrat asked aditya.

Aditya laughed..

"Hey adi! How about a game of Car Racing on the XBox?" Samrat asked..

"Sounds great.." adi said.

Poor gunjan.. both father and son got up and went away.. leaving a frowning gunjan behind..!

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Precap: Son & Father had to pay for the disrespect towards The BOSS of the HOUSE!

 

Hey guys,

I will be ending this SS in probably another 2-3 updates.. please dont mind.. There is not much to write in this one..

And this is my board year so it will be difficult for me to handle too many FFs..

So I am gonna start cutting down on my FF/SS...

Please rate & Comment!

Love,

Manjari

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