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*There Is Always A Chance* (Page 45)

-CreativeSoul- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
hey manji
wow awsome update loved it so much
hahaa poor samrat every body took all his cash
love the part where he wasnt eating causs gunjan wasnt it was very cute sceen
and then the pehras were well written
finally marrige done and now they are mr and mrs shergil ya!
and love ending seen where he lifted her and walked away to room
continue soon
cant wait for more parts
love ya

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JanuableSanu IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
so so beautiful marriage n hehehe offocurse aditya willl look cute to u as u lyk aditya now hehehehee n awwww sammmy is perfect hubby so caring n alll awwwww n wowwwww sajan leaving in delhi oye hoyeee wen monaya will get married dey willl also do rituals on delhi house only naaa hayeeeeeeeeee me dreaming now do continue

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GulaabiAakhein. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Thank youu sooo much!
Love reading all your comments & will try to reply to all you guys personally!!
Love yaa!
MagicLantern IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
woww fantastic update....surely matched the expectations.....waiting to finally see sajan adi as a family.....i am missing adi gunjan scens........continue soon......

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saniya.x IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Beautiful update Manji Hug, one of the best updates of this FF! The wedding was amazingly described!
Continue soon(:

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GulaabiAakhein. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Hi Friends,
I know you must be shockedd that i updated so fast! =P =P
But this ones on Aashi's request.. hope you like it..
It isnt very long but enjoy reading..
and hope I didnt disappoint you!

Samrat placed gunjan gently on the bed and they both stared at each other... They were married.. FINALLY! Gunjan and Samrat smile at each other and samrat held gunjan's hand..

"Chashmish, Finally hamari shaadi ho hi gayi! Mujhe laga tha ki yeh moment kabhi nahi ayega!"

Gunjan smiled as she saw the excitement in samrat's eyes but she felt weak. She hadn't eaten a thing since morning and now it was almost 2:30am!! Suhani & Samrat's Mom were leaving the next day.. she would have to wake up early.. but putting all things aside she hugged samrat.. her head on his chest..

"Samrat ab hum kabhi door nahi honge, Hamari baaki ki life hum ek saath spend karenge!"

Samrat hugged her tight.. And before he could say something there was a knock on their door.

Samrat sighed and opened the door and say aditya run into the room and suhani and the other girls stand outside with their hands on their hips..

Samrat realised they had come for money !

"Chashmish main 5 minute main aaya!" He said and he left the room to sought out the money thing with the girls!

Aditya hugged his mom.. Gunjan hugged him too..

"Adi go sleep sweetheart! Its almost 3!.." gunjan said in a soft voice..

Aditya sat next to gunjan and looked at her.. she looked weak.

He put his hand into his pocket and took out a huge chocolate.. He opened it and fed gunjan some..

"You must be hungry na!" he exclaimed.. "Ill send some food for you!"

Gunjan smiled and caught his hand before he could run off..  She kissed his cheek ..

"No baby, its ok.. you go sleep and thanks for the chocolate..!"

"Ew Mom.. dont kiss me like that.. your lipstick marks are all on my cheek now!" he said rubbing his cheeks.. Now he could become a child again! He could have some fun with his mom, who was always cheerful these days!.

Gunjan gave him a fake angry glare and they both ended up laughing.. Samrat came in and saw them laughing heartily..

"Why are you both laughing?" he said.

Aditya turned to look at HIS version of KABAB MAIN HADDI! This was a phrase he had learnt from his Mayank Masaji.. Whenever Gunjan entered their room Thats what he mumbled! Aditya laughed at the thought of that..

"yeh Hum dono ki beech ki baat hai! Right Adi?" gunjan said..

"Yes mom! Good Night!" he hugged his mom and went towards the gate.. samrat stood there holding the door open..

"Good night dad.." he said hugging him.. and adi whispered to him. "Mom is hungry.. make her eat something please!"

Samrat whispered back.. "Already done.. suhani is getting it.." and he winked at adi!

Aditya smiled and left the room and gunjan kept wondering what these two men were talking about!

"Kya baat kar rahe the?" she asked feeling left out.

"Yeh Hum dono ke beech ki baat hai!" Samrat said teasing gunjan back!

Gunjan giggled..

"Main change karke aati hun!" she said as she went towards the bathroom..

Samrat caught her hand from the back and pulled her towards him..

"Abhi toh maine apni nayi dulhan ko achhese dekha bhi nahi hai!" he said in her ears..

Gunjan Blushed and samrat turned her around to face him.. he caressed her face and inched closer to her... he cupped her face with one hand and kissed her lightly on her cheek.. Gunjan blushed harder..

"You look gorgeous chashmish!" he mumbled while he rubbed his nose against hers..and before they could go further.. Another KNOCK!

"Uff.. yeh log bhi na.." samrat said shaking his head.. "Tum change karlo.. thak gayi hogi!"

Gunjan nodded and went in..

Samrat opened the door angrily and saw suhani bring in the food and the milk for samrat.. he clamed down and asked her NOT to disturb him any more!

She giggled and ran down stairs..

Samrat drank the milk and called for gunjan.. She came out wearing a maroon night gown and taking off all the jewellery..

"Chalo chashmish kuchh kha lo.." he said.

Gunjan went and sat next to him on the bed and forwarded her hand to take the mouth watering food! She had never felt SO hungry in her life! Samrat took the plate away from her..

"Samrat.. please do na.. bohot bhook lag rahi hai!"

"Nahi.. uss waqt tum ne mujhe khilaya tha.. ab meri baari.." samrat said as he took a piece of the roti dipped it in the dal and gave it to her.. Gunjan happily ate it. Samrat just looked at her as she ate all the three puri's suhani had given from samrat's hands and drank some water.. She was stuffed and went and washed her face..

"Thanks.. mere liye khana mangwane keliye!" Gunjan said rubbing her tummy..

"Your welcome.. but mera khana bhi tumne hi kha liya!.." he said making a puppy face.. " Suhani ne hum dono ka khana ek hi plate main diya tha!"

"oh! Sorry! Mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi .. ruko ruko.. main.. main tumhare liye kuchh khane ke liye le aati hun!" she said as she got  up to leave..

Samrat caught her by her hand while saying.. "Tum kaha ja rahi ho!" and made her sit on his lap!

He caught her by her waist and rubbed her nose against her shoulder, snuggling into her.. Gunjan laughed and said.. "tumhe bhook lag rahi hogi samrat.. main kuchh.."

"Shhh.." samrat said.. "Mujhe bhook nahi lag rahin.." he smiled at her and carefully made her lie down on her bed. She was tired so she turned over to the other side.. Samrat put the blanket on both of them and hugged her from the back, kissing her on her neck while he turned her around to his side..  Gunjans hands slid under over his arms to his back and he dug his face into her neck and she clutched his sherwani.. his hand were around her waist and shifted her hair from her face.. his fingers caressed her lips and then her eyes and her cheeks and then slowly flicked her nose..

"Chashmish..." he whispered..


"Mujhe ek chhoti si.. pyaari si.. gunjan chahiye.." he demanded..

 Her lips grew into a smile and she shut her eyes and samrat kissed her.. the kiss was long, passionate and romantic... They didnt give up for long and then finally gunjan pulled back gasping for breathe.. samrat continued with his exploring and felt her up by her arms and smiled naughtily at her... and then gunjan shut her eyes and the moon hid behind the clouds..


It was 8 am when gunjan opened her eyes.. She checked the clock on their side table and jerked up.. She looked around.. samrat was holding onto her hand.. Suhani and Mom were leaving at 10.. she slowly released her hand from samrat's hold and went to the bathroom to get ready..

Gunjan came out wearing a lovely pink silk saree and went down to check on the preparations.. Suhani and Mom were in the living room checking if everything was ready.. Gunjan touched her mother-in-laws feet and she blessed gunjan saying.. "Sada suhagan raho!" Gunjan smiled..

"Bhabhi, humme nahi laga tha ki aap itne jaldi uth jaoge!" Suhani said grinning at gunjan..

"Jaldi? Main toh late hoon!"

"Nahi nahi beta, your not late..!"

"Main kuchh help karoo?" gunjan asked suhani who was trying to close her bag..

Gunjan helped them pack and set everything for their departure..

"Samrat toh abhi bhi so raha hoga?" Mom asked. It was more of a statement than a question..

"Ji.. woh.. main usse uthaoo?"

"Nahi nahi.. chodo.. waise bhi humme abhi nikalna hi hai!"

"Par nashta?" gunjan said..

"Humne savita ko bola hai.. woh bana rahi hai!"

"Main dekhkar aati hun.."

Gunjan went and helped her make breakfast and then she sat with suhani and mom to have breakfast.. they discussed about Gunjan's pagphera and all the other ceremonies.. they felt very bad that they had to go before the reception..

Gunjan kept looking at the staircase praying that samrat would wake up!! He was such a lazy lump!

At around 9:30 when they were ready to leave aditya came down the stairs to bid his Naani & Bua goodbye!

Mom: Tum samrat ke bete nahi ho sakte! Woh kabhi bhi jaldi nahi uthta! Usne mujhe bachpan main bhi bohot pareshaan kiya tha...

Suhani: aur mujhe bhi! Chhoti behen thi na..

They all shared a small laugh.. Gunjan's mind immediately flickered to what samrat had told her last night..

"Mujhe ek chhoti si, pyaari si, gunjan chahiye" and she blushed at that.. and mom and suhani left.


Precap: Family Moments!! =)

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged


Edited by deepti_mohit - 12 February 2011 at 3:46am

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Manjari, Lovely & romantic cute. Pls update soon.

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