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GulaabiAakhein. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Originally posted by SajanRox11

Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Hi MANJARi, First I want to say  SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

How can I forget it??AngryShocked Embarrassed Please!Punish me for my this mistake...Nahin toh main bhi GHAJNI's AAMIR jaisa ho jaaoongaOuchLOL


OK.Now Come to the Update.It was AWESOME Part.U stole my heart with some actual 'cute' scenes and Convo. Just like,
SAM-GUN food discussion , Pheras and Promises (ClapClapClap),"Joota-Stole" & neg sceneThumbs Up (I knew it,Tum Glz,koi chances jaane nahin dogiAngryLOL But,I M more anger to MAYANKAngry Woh kar kya raha tha??) and Yes! Last SUHANI and Cute 'Rasm'scene.
Day DreamingI M Dead,almost.

So,I think this is The Best "SUPERB" UPDATE ,till the date of this FF.ClapClapClap (Yaa 'Haldi Rasm' Update was also Good).

Now,My Rating is -StarStarStarStarStar/5.

-S O H A M.


*Still,I M waiting 4 my Punishment.CryWink
 
Hi Soham.. Gosh..
PUNISHMENT TOH MILEGII!
lol.. u want one ryt? so here it is..
U have to update ur SS by tomorrow!!
{this is a punishment for all 3 of ull because none hv commented on my Update! mean ppl!}
And Ill be waiting for it!
 
and btw, thanks a TON for the lovely comment!!
and yeah.. mayank.. lol..
 
and I agree ur becoming like ghajini.. hahah! lol!
Get a haircut done in that style! hehe!EmbarrassedBig smileLOL


OK.I agree...this is my another mistake,Mujhe Reply toh dena thaAngryLOL Its my fault so,I accept your PunishmentWink Next Day!Definitely,I will Do. And That UPDATE,is dedicate to U. Now,HappySmile ?? Yaa aur kuchh??Embarrassed 

And,U want to see me in GHAJINI's AAMIR lookCryCryCry YaakkkkkkAngry LOL Actually,My hair is very Valuable Property 4 me,believe meWink."Baaloon ko Mat Chuoo Naa..." (in MAYANK Style) type care karta hoon.
Embarrassed

Anyway,I submit my comment there also.wait.

-S O H A M.

Embarrassed
 
hahah.. THANKS!! im glad ull update tomorroow..! yay!!
I really wanna read more!
and hahah.. mine too.. I love my hair.. and I din know U were like mayank.. Men are usually not possessive abt their hair! lol.. Okayy!
 

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
heyyyyy manjiiii

awwwwsum updateeee
simply mindblowngggg
loved it compltly
n d shoe thng was realyyy funny
n den d car scene of sajan n adi was also nycccc
n den d end part was 2 cuteeeee

cont soooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
hey manji
wow awsome update loved it so much
hahaa poor samrat every body took all his cash
love the part where he wasnt eating causs gunjan wasnt it was very cute sceen
and then the pehras were well written
finally marrige done and now they are mr and mrs shergil ya!
and love ending seen where he lifted her and walked away to room
continue soon
cant wait for more parts
 
love ya
tanzeel

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
so so beautiful marriage n hehehe offocurse aditya willl look cute to u as u lyk aditya now hehehehee n awwww sammmy is perfect hubby so caring n alll awwwww n wowwwww sajan leaving in delhi oye hoyeee wen monaya will get married dey willl also do rituals on delhi house only naaa hayeeeeeeeeee me dreaming now do continue

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Thank youu sooo much!
Love reading all your comments & will try to reply to all you guys personally!!
Love yaa!
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
woww fantastic update....surely matched the expectations.....waiting to finally see sajan adi as a family.....i am missing adi gunjan scens........continue soon......

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Beautiful update Manji Hug, one of the best updates of this FF! The wedding was amazingly described!
 
Continue soon(:

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