Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani


Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

~my first ff~"Eternal Love"2st part updated on pg3

~Serendipity~ IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 December 2010
Posts: 5280

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
hey abhiyans...
after reading all ur superb ffs....i have decided to give myself a chance and write an ff.....hope u all like it....and as it is my first ff..plz forgive my mistakes......
                                                                      "ETERNAL LOVE"
PIA SHARMA~played by sukirti kandpal..
a 17 year old girl.....she is simple, sweet, very charming!!!!! pia is d only daughter of her she is loved by everyone!! she has a reserved nature. believes in family values & she maintains a reasonable distance from boys! she is a resident of delhi but currently lives in dehradun to complete her studies in mount college!

ABHAY RAICHAND~played by vivian d'sena..
he is 18 year old... heartthrob of d college...character reveals as d story unfolds....
ANWESHA RAI~played by priya wal...
she is fashionable girl ...every boy go crazy her...she is one of pia's best frnd....she belongs to a rich family...

KAARTHIKA SEHGAL~played by jennifer winget..
she is bubbly & vivacious loving...she loves to play pranks on everyone...

AANCHAL JAIN~played by panchi bora...
she belongs to a middle class family of dehradun..she is an ambitious girl..very shy and conservative...

its a love story of abhay and pia...inspired by d show..its not a regular love story...u have to watch for end...
its also revolves around their frnds....
plz do tell me if u like d story background....Blushing

Edited by maaneet_devina - 14 January 2011 at 5:01am

The following 15 member(s) liked the above post:


pratsy IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 20 February 2009
Posts: 41185

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
wow. .m lukng 4wrd 2 read more. .continue asap Hug

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


pallavisarkar Senior Member

Joined: 30 November 2010
Posts: 981

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged

its nice n interesting i guess
do continue

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


dmg_roks_antara Goldie

Joined: 14 January 2010
Posts: 1493

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
hey luking forward 2 ur story cont soon n pm me on d nxt prt

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


-Humaira- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 March 2007
Posts: 5622

Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Hello! =D
Nice start. Big smile
umm...try including MiYa in it too.. if u can..
like parallel to AbhIya .  :-)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


tanya.dsouza Senior Member

Joined: 29 September 2009
Posts: 476

Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
soundz awesum..! aiting for u to start..! cn u plz PM me ur updates..!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


..-Niru-.. Goldie

Joined: 06 October 2010
Posts: 1460

Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
write sooon !!loved ur concept !!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


~Serendipity~ IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 December 2010
Posts: 5280

Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
hey abhiya/miya fans....i am here with my ffs 1st part....hope u all like it....
                                                              ~Eternal Love~
                                                                                  Part -1
 first day at college....
pia and kaartihka(kats) enter d college...
kats-hey bhagwaan ....pia itna bda college..apan toh full on masti krenge...yaar iss saal toh bahut maze ayenge.....
pia- voh toh thik hai kats lekin .....
kats-mujhe pata hai  tera vahi old "i am so scared"drama....hai na...
pia-vo baat nahi hai...mujhe sahi me darr lag rha hai..pehli baar itne bde college me...yahaan par sb kuch naya hoga...
kats-yaar pia take a chill pill...itna darne ki kya baat hai...jb kats tere saath hai..
pia-ab tu kya saari baatein yahi kregi....chal andar chalte hai ..pehle din class miss nahi honi chahiye...
kats-tere rehte mai class miss krne ke baare me soch bhi kaise sakti hun...let's go inside...
after entering d college..they attend their class...
in their break...
kats- pakaa dala yaar...pehle din bhi nahi choda....
while kats was talking to ultra mod girl wearing a dazzling skirt-top approached them..
kats saw her...& immediately told pia
kats- hey out...koi fashion disaster yaha aa rahi h..
anwesha-hey...i am anwesha..people call me ashi...what abt u?
pia-nice to meet u ashi i am pia..
kats-i am kaarthika...u call me kats... did u like d college?
kats and pia said together...yes we did...but d class was little boring!!
while they were talking they saw...a simple girl coming who was centre of attraction of d college...not in a positive way rather it was negative...b'coz she belonged to a middle class family..she was ananya...
3 of them felt really bad for they all moved forward to talk with her...
kats-hey..u can join name is kaarthika u can call me kats..
ananya-hello...i am ananya...u all can call me anu...
pia and ashi also introduced themselves.....
ashi- so u have taken ur rooms in hostel??
pia-not yet...
ashi-u better rush babes ...otherwise d best rooms will get reserved....
kats-yes we shld leave for d hostel now.....
the 4 of dem got mix up easily...
ashi leaves for home meanwhile rest of dem go to d hostel...
in their rooms...
kats-yippie!! anu u will be my partner i am glad to know it....yaar ab toh aur bhi zyada maza ayega!!
anu-i am happy too...aur pia tera room mate kaun hai??
pia-i guess koi achcha hi ho...i will take d keys from warden and let u know....
pia takes d keys from warden....but after entering room she felt like hell...
pia-oh god...yeh kaisa room hai yaar...i think my partner is too dirty!!!
anu and kats-hmm.....we also think d same...don't worry pia ..
pia-i hope ki sab thik ho...aur meri partner bhi achchi ho...her first impression was bad enough!!
to be continued........
abhay's entry to college....and fight between kats and abhay!!!

criticism and suggestions r most welcome...
hope u all like d 1st part....
                                         thank u!!!


The following 13 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index