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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
hey abhiyans...
after reading all ur superb ffs....i have decided to give myself a chance and write an ff.....hope u all like it....and as it is my first ff..plz forgive my mistakes......
                                                                      "ETERNAL LOVE"
                                                                          ~CHARACTERS~
PIA SHARMA~played by sukirti kandpal..
a 17 year old girl.....she is simple, sweet, very charming!!!!! pia is d only daughter of her family..so she is loved by everyone!! she has a reserved nature. believes in family values & she maintains a reasonable distance from boys! she is a resident of delhi but currently lives in dehradun to complete her studies in mount college!

ABHAY RAICHAND~played by vivian d'sena..
he is 18 year old... heartthrob of d college...character reveals as d story unfolds....
 
ANWESHA RAI~played by priya wal...
she is fashionable girl ...every boy go crazy her...she is one of pia's best frnd....she belongs to a rich family...

KAARTHIKA SEHGAL~played by jennifer winget..
she is bubbly & vivacious girl...fun loving...she loves to play pranks on everyone...

AANCHAL JAIN~played by panchi bora...
she belongs to a middle class family of dehradun..she is an ambitious girl..very shy and conservative...

STORY BACKGROUND~
its a love story of abhay and pia...inspired by d show..its not a regular love story...u have to watch for end...
its also revolves around their frnds....
plz do tell me if u like d story background....Blushing




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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
wow. .m lukng 4wrd 2 read more. .continue asap Hug

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged


its nice n interesting i guess
do continue

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
hey luking forward 2 ur story cont soon n pm me on d nxt prt

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Hello! =D
Nice start. Big smile
umm...try including MiYa in it too.. if u can..
like parallel to AbhIya .  :-)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
soundz awesum..! aiting for u to start..! cn u plz PM me ur updates..!

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
write sooon !!loved ur concept !!

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
hey abhiya/miya fans....i am here with my ffs 1st part....hope u all like it....
                                                              ~Eternal Love~
                                                                                  Part -1
 first day at college....
pia and kaartihka(kats) enter d college...
kats-hey bhagwaan ....pia itna bda college..apan toh full on masti krenge...yaar iss saal toh bahut maze ayenge.....
pia- voh toh thik hai kats lekin .....
kats-mujhe pata hai  tera vahi old "i am so scared"drama....hai na...
pia-vo baat nahi hai...mujhe sahi me darr lag rha hai..pehli baar itne bde college me...yahaan par sb kuch naya hoga...
kats-yaar pia take a chill pill...itna darne ki kya baat hai...jb kats tere saath hai..
pia-ab tu kya saari baatein yahi kregi....chal andar chalte hai ..pehle din class miss nahi honi chahiye...
kats-tere rehte mai class miss krne ke baare me soch bhi kaise sakti hun...let's go inside...
after entering d college..they attend their class...
in their break...
kats- pakaa dala yaar...pehle din bhi nahi choda....
while kats was talking to pia....an ultra mod girl wearing a dazzling skirt-top approached them..
kats saw her...& immediately told pia
kats- hey pia...watch out...koi fashion disaster yaha aa rahi h..
anwesha-hey...i am anwesha..people call me ashi...what abt u?
pia-nice to meet u ashi i am pia..
kats-i am kaarthika...u call me kats...
ashi-hmm...so did u like d college?
kats and pia said together...yes we did...but d class was little boring!!
while they were talking they saw...a simple girl coming who was centre of attraction of d college...not in a positive way rather it was negative...b'coz she belonged to a middle class family..she was ananya...
3 of them felt really bad for her...so they all moved forward to talk with her...
kats-hey..u can join us...my name is kaarthika u can call me kats..
ananya-hello...i am ananya...u all can call me anu...
pia and ashi also introduced themselves.....
ashi- so u have taken ur rooms in hostel??
pia-not yet...
ashi-u better rush babes ...otherwise d best rooms will get reserved....
kats-yes we shld leave for d hostel now.....
the 4 of dem got mix up easily...
ashi leaves for home meanwhile rest of dem go to d hostel...
in their rooms...
kats-yippie!! anu u will be my partner i am glad to know it....yaar ab toh aur bhi zyada maza ayega!!
anu-i am happy too...aur pia tera room mate kaun hai??
pia-i guess koi achcha hi ho...i will take d keys from warden and let u know....
pia takes d keys from warden....but after entering room she felt like hell...
pia-oh god...yeh kaisa room hai yaar...i think my partner is too dirty!!!
anu and kats-hmm.....we also think d same...don't worry pia ..
pia-i hope ki sab thik ho...aur meri partner bhi achchi ho...her first impression was bad enough!!
to be continued........
PRECAP-
abhay's entry to college....and fight between kats and abhay!!!

criticism and suggestions r most welcome...
hope u all like d 1st part....
                                         thank u!!!





                                                              

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