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Hamari Adhuri Kahani (RP):Part 2,pg.6(28/03) (Page 4)

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweet-Lioness

ab tujh se toh hamesha main ek weird concept hi xpect karti hun...kya karun...tujhe achhe se janti jo hun...achcha..??hmm...ab agli baar koi sidha concept uthaungi...tujhe galat saabit karne keliye...WinkLOL LOL

 
short fic...ka idea achha tha...aur jaise ki tune mujh se kaha tha...ke is fic ko tu apne sare fics me se BEST bana kar rahegi...toh tujh se umeedain badh jati hai...!!! ayeeeeee !! maine aisa kab kaha ??Shocked Shocked Shocked\\
 
kyaaa...tujhe yaad nahi ke tune kab kaha tha...??? thik hai nahi yaad hai toh koi baat nahi...par mujhe yaad hai...isiliye tujhe toh ise BEST banana hi padega...priiiiiiiiii !!!! you are toooo much !!! LOL
 
 
 
toh hum abhi FB me hain...achha hai na...!!! andhere se ujale ki taraf badhte hue achha lagta hai...!!! par yeh kya...ujale me...matlab present me raj oops...rohit ko itna dukhi kar diya...!!! vaise bhi yeh main tujhe kyoun bol rahi hun...yeh toh teri purani bimari hai...jis ka koi ilaaz nahi hai... heyyy !!! bilkul nahi haan !! ST...H mein dekh ! Raj dukhi hai kya?? waha toh usne sabka jeena haram kar rakha hai...Ouch fir bhi mujhpe aisa label lagati hai...Cry Cry jaa katti !! well....actually tu poori tarah se galat bhi nahi hai...TongueLOL
 
 
aaksh...Shruti...LS couple...!!! LS ki starting kafi achhi thi is fiction ki...bich me main so gayi thi...phir end hone se pahle jagg gayi thi...!!! kuch samjhi...
nahi...kya samjhana chahti hai?Confused 
 
rohit ko akash aur shruti baht respect karte hain...!!! karne bhi chahiye...hai koi aur raj jaisa kya...??? vaise Shruti ke crush par hassi aayi...!!! yeh bhi fishli na raj ke cuteness par...he he heLOL
 
 
haan...mummy ka role sirf Kiron kher hi kar sakti hain...khaash kar ke mummy jab aisi ho toh...!!! bete ki present past sab discover karna chahti hai...
 
vaise yeh tejal ki kya mystry hai yaar...!!! kahani ke suru me alag kar ke rakha hai tune...aur naam rakha hai...'hamari adhuri kahani'...!!! warning samjh le...ya phir dhamki...par kahani adhuri nahi rahni chahiye...rohit aur tejal ko milna hoga...aur duet bhi gana padega...aur yeh sab tu karegi...samjhi...kya kaha??? mujhe kuch sunai nahi deraha ! Wink
 
hadh hai...aaj kal bina dhamki ke koi kaam tu karti hi nahi...lollzzzLOLLOL
 
ab next ud kab hoga...doc...!!! next week...next month ya phir next year...sochke batati hoon...Tongue

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayadika11

awesome........
fab.......
liked the concept..
cont.soon......
thanx for the pm........
thnxxxxBig smile
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhara_s

Shockerrrrrrr........Dusht kahin ki....main tujhe tang nahi karti fone pe ya anything yeh soch ke , ke madam ke exams hai...jiju kaafi hai distract karne ke liye.....aur yeh ladki updates bhi kar rahi hai aur new fic bhi post kar rahi hai...of course I dont have a prob...lekin tera har PM mujhe surprise kar deta hai.....!!!! arey yaar...main dusht nahi hoon !! ab kya karu...tension aur pressure itniii badh gayi hai ki kya batau...ab movie ka option nahi hota kyun ki 3 hrs movie and 2 hrs jaana aana...etc etc...total 5 ! now can't afford to waste that much!! aur waise bhi sabhi crap movies aa rahai hai......and dont you call HIM a distraction...WinkTongue

Did you know mujhe RP fics zyada achi nahi lagti...???? mera interest half reh jaata hai when I see character names as not Raj/Naina.... whaaaaaaaaaaattt??Shocked Shockedi dint know that...i just thought ki kuch naya karte hai...
 
lekin tune pehle hi pic dikhadi...and I cudnt just stop myself from giving the new concept a shot.....n I liked Aakash n Shruti from LS toh enjoyed them here as well...!!!


Is it ok if I say update soon...???? ya ya...IT's ok ! WinkLOL
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dazzling_glory

Hey
Wow a new FF....i am excited already.
The concept is very hatke. great start.
Rohit is helping his co-workers with their love and work life.
And for the first time he is sharing his personal life with some one.
please continue soon
thanks nisha Smile
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Mana 
Nice to see u back with all the new updates and OS..Smile You are the ONLY one whoz just plain happy and not shocked !  LOL
 
The title itself is very interesting..I like this song very muchBig smile mee tooo!!!
 
agar kahani adhoori hai to woh end mein poori bhi zaroor hogiLOLLOL Let's hope !
 
I like Mishal and Payal since LS days..They make a very cute pairBig smile
 
So Rohit is a Doctor who has a very depressing past..OuchOuch he was so sadCry and yet he was so happy to see his subordinates fighting like kids..he cud always imagine him and Tejal in their place..Wat went so wrong in their relationship???
you'll come to know...Smile
 
His mother was really super cool..bete ka past present future sab pata karke rakha hua thaLOLLOLLOLWink..he didnn't had any excuse left..bechare ko dhoke se roke ke liye le aayi..Even his dad was with his mother in this scheme.LOL
Poor Rohit!!
Wat will happen now???
STAY TUNED di !!! Wink
 
Pls continue soon
Bye
 
 
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

it sounds totally interesting
but plz try to update it regularly
nahi to sabhi RN or Rp fics ko update hue mahino  ho jaate hain aur jab finally koi update karta hainto story kaha hain kuch idea hi nahi hota
it really interrupt the flow of fic
plz try to update this regularly and dont mind me its just my feelings
sumtimes i got so irritated and frustrated waiting for the fic to update but that dont happen

but nice concept
and do continue it soon
 
hi prerna !! thanks  a lot for liking the concept and story...
and i can understand dear...coz even am a reader of other ficsand sometimes it gets on my nerves too...
but even we have other commitments...profession...family and what not....issliye delay hojata hai...i hope you'll understand bear with me Smile... but believe me woh padhkar mujhe bura nahi laga...balke achcha laga yeh dekhkar ki you DO wait for my fics...and tumne pehli baar itna bada comment bhi kiya...LOL(dont mind haan..jus kiddin...)
and keep reading....Big smile
luv,
mana
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khushi909

loved it mana
thnx for the pm
thnx khushiSmile
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really good
so raj ke mon raj ko uske birthday ke din uske roke ke liye lee jaata haai aur becchara raj woh itna irritate ho raha haai par yahan toh dulhan khud exam mein busy haai
anyways lets see ke aakhir in dono mein kya hua hoga jo yeh dono ek dusre se allag ho gaye
plz cont soon and pm me
thnx ria

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