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Hamari Adhuri Kahani (RP):Part 2,pg.6(28/03) (Page 2)

dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Wow a new FF....i am excited already.
The concept is very hatke. great start.
Rohit is helping his co-workers with their love and work life.
And for the first time he is sharing his personal life with some one.
please continue soon

suhana.dixit IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 October 2007
Posts: 3816

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Hi Mana
Nice to see u back with all the new updates and OS..Smile
The title itself is very interesting..I like this song very muchBig smile
agar kahani adhoori hai to woh end mein poori bhi zaroor hogiLOLLOL
I like Mishal and Payal since LS days..They make a very cute pairBig smile
So Rohit is a Doctor who has a very depressing past..OuchOuch he was so sadCry and yet he was so happy to see his subordinates fighting like kids..he cud always imagine him and Tejal in their place..Wat went so wrong in their relationship???
His mother was really super cool..bete ka past present future sab pata karke rakha hua thaLOLLOLLOLWink..he didnn't had any excuse left..bechare ko dhoke se roke ke liye le aayi..Even his dad was with his mother in this scheme.LOL
Poor Rohit!!
Wat will happen now???
Pls continue soon
prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 April 2008
Posts: 17176

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
it sounds totally interesting
but plz try to update it regularly
nahi to sabhi RN or Rp fics ko update hue mahino  ho jaate hain aur jab finally koi update karta hainto story kaha hain kuch idea hi nahi hota
it really interrupt the flow of fic
plz try to update this regularly and dont mind me its just my feelings
sumtimes i got so irritated and frustrated waiting for the fic to update but that dont happen

but nice concept
and do continue it soon
Amor. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 27 August 2008
Posts: 41175

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
loved it mana
thnx for the pm
ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 November 2008
Posts: 16646

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
the up is really good
so raj ke mon raj ko uske birthday ke din uske roke ke liye lee jaata haai aur becchara raj woh itna irritate ho raha haai par yahan toh dulhan khud exam mein busy haai
anyways lets see ke aakhir in dono mein kya hua hoga jo yeh dono ek dusre se allag ho gaye
plz cont soon and pm me
Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 43329

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:59pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

The title is very interesting and it seems that Rohit and Tejal's story is not a happy one for now!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

I hope unki adhuri kahani puri zaroor ho!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rohit is busy in a project and happy to be busy so that her thoughts would not trouble him!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

He seems to have a depressing past and he is so sad!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

When her beautiful face appeared in his thoughts, he smiled!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Akash and Shruti are his subordinates who fought a lot and he found them adorable!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Shruti is mad about Akash talking to Saniya!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Rohit has to handle them like school kids and explained to them the importance of trust in a relationship!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Finally the project was submitted and they had come to Shimla for it!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Shruti finally asked him about the picture on his desktop!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

So Shruti also had a little crush on him!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Rohit started telling Akash and Shruti about the girl he loves, Tejal!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Akash and Shruti could feel his pain and Rohit felt that they would understand him!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Rohit loves Tejal so much, so what went wrong in their relationship??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Great casting for Raj's mom seeing that you got Bollywood's current favourite mom to play it!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

His mom is too funny and she is actually taking him to Delhi on his birthday!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Uska mom uska roka karwane laayi hai and now his only support, his dad is not supporting him!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Rohit said he loves someone else to avoid this from happening!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

But his mom is no less and checked his mobile, wallet, laptop, diaries, etc to see whether he has a girl in his life or not!!!!Cool Cool Cool Cool Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

His mom is too much aur bete ka past present sab pata karke rakha hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Poor Rohit did not have any excuse left!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Rohit's mom is really super cool and was very understanding when she found ke unki honewaali bahu exam dene gayi hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rohit is upset that he is getting married to a girl who he hasn't even seen!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Finally he got to see Tejal's photo!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Waiting for his reaction and Tejal's entry!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile


Edited by Shaina_b - 17 January 2011 at 4:10am

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golu_1677 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 August 2005
Posts: 4315

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
nice beginning......

Loved it....

waiting for more....  cont soon
RiddhiB Groupbie

Joined: 06 November 2010
Posts: 156

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Lovely beginning!!
So story would move on in  flashbacks..not bad! I loved it!
And Akash and Shruti concept into Raj..Naina...I mean Rohit and Tejal's story..
Idea is very nice..I am looking forward to this FF..
Cont. soon!

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