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U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic) (Page 2)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
HEY..JUST READ IT...
 
LOVED DA CONCEPT N PART!!!LOVED DA NEW RIDZI....
 
CONTINUE DEAR N PM ME ALSO WHEN U UPD8...
 
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
nice part.
Thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
hey nice part bt it was short.........
waiting 4 a long update
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
hiiii guyzzz luv u all... thnkx for the luvly comments & likes....... luv u all muahhh!!!!!Embarrassed nd do keep likin n commentin..hahaLOL...
PART 3
riddhima and the gang really enjoyed... ridzie's company and soon ridzz became a part of dem...
ri:thnx guyzz..i really needed some support after 2day's "welcome" in the morning!
mu: shutup!!! kya yaar 1 to dost bolti hain upar se sorry...
ri: accha no sorry!!!! ab to man jao... nywayzz tum log mujhe college nai ghumao ge kya??? i no canteen tumhara fav. spot hoga bt guyzz i wana see oder things also in"india's best college"....
ni: ok baba but main atul aur ye abhimanyu tumhe company nai de payenge... we've got a class to attend(make a sad face)
ri: toh kya hua!!! chill yaar ab toh hum frendzz hain jab chahe saath mein kabhi aur chale jayenge...
mu: arre aise kaise.. main hun na main tujhe dikhaongi...
ri: muski i dont think-
mu: chup!! hum jayenge to jayenge..
now ridzz cudnt say a word so she just simply nodded...
they all leave for their respective work...
ridz and muskaan decide to go to the bb court as ridzz insisted and it was gettin late...she decided to see the other things later...
on the other hand,
anjie is waiting for ammy and rahul in the bb court...she's a bit worried...
she jumps when armaan comes and scres her from behind...
ar:hahaha.. are are baby darr gayi..
an:VERY FUNNY RMAAN MALLIK!!!!!!!!
ar: ii no...
ra:gosh stop it u 2..... anjie wer's sapna???
an: she's gone home.. anoder guy cumin 2 see her... so she decided 2 go early 2 make an alternativ plan...with amit!!!!!
ar(takin a bb shot):who's amit???
an: armaan wats rong wid u? amit.. childhud friend of sapna...
ar: oh her bf... grinnin
ra: god!!!!! a girl n a guy can be friends u no ammy...
ar: wen did i say they cant???? but if they just cant almost u no... stay widout each oder den dey arnt frends...
an: watever.. anywayz guyzz gotta go.. last class i hav to attend dis...
armaan rolled his eyes..
ar: anjie pls yaar mere-
an;notes bana dungi..bye.. she goes
ar:thnx babes..
ra;kab tak hum pe depend rahega yaar????
ar:huh?
ra: ntn chal ghar chaltein hain.. its gettin l8!
just then muski and ridzz enter the court...
mu: and this is our...chachundhar... TU!!!! he bhagu kya paap kara tha jo end of the day iski shakal dikh gayi..
rahul and armaan turn, armaan is angry,irritated and shocked to see ridzz..
rahul was happy to see ridz(and muski ofcourse)+irritated to hear muski call him names...
riddhima was hell shocked to see rahul there and happy to..+was angry to see him wid armaan..
ri:TUM!!!!! urggghh...Angry
muskaan den realised dat AR wer face to face!!! muskaan started praying and rahul's eyes wer now wide...LOL
ar:gosh! madam y dont u understand mai tumme interested nahi hun pls mera picha chod doLOL...

ri: shutup! u stupid moron,jerk,idiot,fool,cheap a**hole,dog,pig,mad,crazy man witha useless head!!!! u gali ka gunda,weirdLOL-
ar,ra&mu:BAS!!!!Big smile
dey all wer hell shocked... firstly, a girl saying so many bad adjectives to ARMAAN MALLIK secondly... this girl shit in one breath how many bad words could she say...
ar: tumhe na gaaliyon ka school kholna chahiye...im sure kafi acha bussiness hoga...
ri:agar tum samne hoge na den paka se hoga!!!!
ar: lisen u-

ra: STOP IT!!!!
ridzz lukd at rahul and widin secs huggd him, muskaan armaan wer shocked to see her reaction!!!!!!!!
rahul hugged her back..
ra: hey basketball!!! dude vaisi ki vaisi hi hain no change in ms.riddhima gupta..
ri:ya and mr.badi..tumhara to naksha hi badal gaya hai...
ar:rahul i dont believe dis..
mu:neieder do i..
rahul and riddhima looked at each other.. and winked...

guyzz this was part3 pls leave ur valuable comments and likesBig smile luv u all!!!!

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged
nice one.

Thanx 4 d pm.

T.c.
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
gr8...
 
haha ridz's swears.....lol
 
loved it..
 
thnx 4 da pm
 
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Haha!
Ridz was awesme!
Thanx 4 pm
cont soon
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
PART 4
rahul and ridz winked at each other, now ammy n muski got more confused!!!LOL
ra: u see guyzz...me and basketball r old school friends.. like brother and sister!!! n now we r back again after a year...
ri:n we r gonna hav  blast 2geder now rite????
ra:rite!!! 
they both give a hi5 to each oder,
mu: ridzie tu isko mere over chose karegi... how rude of you...is chachundar ko!!! urgh! iska to kaam hi hain purane frendz ke saath rehna bachpan se hi mera picha nahi chod raha!!!
ridzz was shocked to no that MUSKAAN was actually rahul's muski...
she then gives a wicked smile to rahul...
n he just signal's her to pls keep quite!!!
ri: arre nai muski tu bhi na... main tujhe kaha chod rahi hun...
ar: exactly!! cause ye rahul ko chod rahi hain...
ridzz turns to face him...
ri:xcuse me???
ar: xcused!!!
ri: main na to rahul ko chod rahi hun aur na muski ko...its none of your business!!! understand...
ar: it is my business madam...he's my best friend n i cant let him hang around weirdo's like u!!!!
ri: oh just shut your bloody mouth!!!!!!
ammy shocked to see a girl abuse to such limits...in anger he bangs the bb in his hand not realising it hit riddhimas foot very hard!!!!!
ri: aooowww!!!!!!!!! shit.. crap.. you a**hole!!!!!
she bends down...
mu: omg! ridzz tu theek to hai... 
rahul(helping ridz):armaan bb khelne ke liye hota hai na ki marne ke liye!!!
ri(standing up):kya kare rahul kuch logo ko to khelna hi nahi aata!!! to aur zariye dhundhte hain...
ar was aleady pissed n now was boilin cause ridzz got BASKETBALL in b/w!!!
ar: wat did u say??? mujhe khelna nahi aata 2 min bhi mere samne tik nai paogi samjhi...
ri: oh really!!! then lets see... picks up the ball n throws it at him...
ar: done!!!!! agar main jeeta to tum rahul ke aas paas nahi dikhogi-
ra;armaan ye tu-
ri: ok!!! agar main jeeti to pur 1 hafte tum mere gulaam banoge!!! manzoor??
armaan was shocked but then nodded...

mu:rahul ab kya karein???
ra: ab hum nahi jo karna hai bhagwan hi karega...
the match begins...
first ridz gets the ball & widin secs scores a point...to armaan's disbelief!!
they decide the match to be of 5 points...
after ridzz 1st basket she dribbles but b'cos armaan winks at her she loses a point!!!

ri: khelna nahi aata to cheatin to mat karo!!!
ar: kya kiya maine...
ri: tumne mujhe...mujhe...urggh!!
armaan smiles and rm look confused..
they start playing again armaan goes for another basket... the score goes on 2-1 with ammy leading for quite some time when ridzz scores the basket at last!!...
armaan sighs n ridz smiles...
armaan then dribbles with ridzz besides him tryin to snatchLOL...they carry on like that for sum time when ridz suddenly pretends to go rite...n ammy turns left but then ridzz bein smart as she wasWink turns left grabs the ball n shoots...ammy cud not for a moment wonder wat just happened!!! n then got back to the game...he bein quite frustated now seein wat a tough competition she was thought"gosh!! never seen any girl play sooo well..no wonder rahul calls her basketball...her name shud actually be basketWink.. she is also 1LOL..hahaha ammy ur 2 coolLOL"he then sumhow gets the ball shoots n shows a thumbs down to ridzz

ri: takes the ball n dribbles...game abhi khatam nahi hui hai...game point..
ar: ur rite sweetheart!!!
ridz turned back shocked wid his remark... n then ammy grabs the ball nd is about to shoot when ridzz cums in front of him!!)
suddenly armaan drops the ball staring at her...she looks up and realises how close they wer...their lips just inches apart... ammy felt a shiver run down himEmbarrassed... he just stares at her sumwer lost in her eyes...
she just widin sec's steps back and takes the ball and shoots...
rahull didnt really realise wen ridz won!! he was busy starin at muskaan!!!
ri:yuhooo!!!!!!! so mr.super cool!!nonono mr.gulam..
ammy comes out of his world and then realises wat happend...
ar: take it as a gift!!!Wink
ri:watever!!! kal se 1 hafte tum mere gulaam hoge...best of luck!!!LOL
ar:to u 2!!! 
they both leave from ther wid rm following them....
ridz-muski wer waitin 4 nikki abhi n atul...
mu:ye log bhi na uff... kya kahoon... i think ghar chale gaye honge but... ma..main kaise ab mai-maine nikki ko bola bhi tha...god ab main kaha jaon...(almost sobbing)
ri:muski!!!! are u f9??/kya hua??? is evrything ok??
mu:mere hostel main ab 1 skool khul gaya hain... kal tak ki deadline hain...i hav to vacate my room...they need the place for the school now...wer will i go now???CryCry
ri: god!!! itni si baat...
mu:itni si baat?? ye tumhe choti si baat lag rahi hain..you no im gonna be on the ro-
ri: shutup!!! tum mere saath mere ghar chalo vaise bhi akeli rehti hun...main to vaise bhi koi rommmate dhundh rahi thi...muski tu bhi na.
mu:tere parents??? but main kaise-
ri: uff!!! chup..my mom and dad are not togeder..mom in delhi dad in paris...ye humara purana flat tha...tum mere saath rehna na...kya problem hai isme???
mu:oh sorry!!! but tujhe mujhse ent lena hoga varna main nahi rahungi...
ri:but-
mu: no but no if's...
ri:ok baba!! ab chale..Big smile
mu:theeke...
they both smile and leave...
whereas armaan and rahul are at armaan's place...
ar:nahi nahi nahi......
ra:dekh itni tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hain yaar...
ar: zaroorat hain vo mujhe mar dalegi!!!!LOL college mein meri rep kharab kar dgi...gosh no no!!!! i cant do anythin rahul?/
rahul nodded...
ar:im dead!!! .............idea...wohoo armaan ur gr8!!Wink
ra: wat happend??
ar:kal dekhna.. ms basket ap ka hukam salankho pe!!! hahahahahaLOL
giving a naughty smile....
so guyzz dis was the part do tell me how its was comments suggestions likes all are welcomed....Smile


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