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U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic) (Page 18)

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged

hey,sorry for late comment....nice part..so simple but made me smile....thanks...love ur ff....

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PART 16
 riddhima's back was towards armaan....
armaan was slowly walking... towards riddhima... mean while she was just murmuring to herself hoping that armaan would have gone by now.....

slowly she turned....
"tum chale gayye kya???" she said while turning with only 1 eye open...
she sighed with relief....
"thank god chala gaya..." she turned back to leave but only to bump into a rock-like structure....
ARMAAN was standing right behind her...
she was shocked and starting moving backwards because he kept taking a step near hear....
ri: armaa...n..ma-main..
armaan just kept staring at her without any word...moving towards her....
ri: de...dekho tum...ye ..ma..mat....

but before she could say any thing further she realised that now she could no longer step back...

her body was pressed against the wall.... and she couldnt find any space to rescue herself from amaan!!!!

she tried moving but armaan layed both his hand on either side of the wall...

their lips were inches apart...armaan slowly bent towards her...she closed her eyes tight...he bent towards her ear...

ar: tum bahot bolti ho! 

she quickly regained senses and her mouth flung open...

ri: tum na...

but as soon as she opened her mouth armaan kept a finger on her mouth...

ar: ssshhhh!!!!!! kaha na chup...kabhi-kabhi apne baare mein bhi socha karo riddhima...main janta hun ki tumhare isshard behaviour ke piche 1 soft riddhima chupi hain...atleast ab voh riddhima ko bahar aane do...bahut jee liya dusro ke liye ab tumhari bari...

he move his hands away trned back... and went straight... to the washroom....(yes! he was still wrapped in a towel!)... leaving a dazed riddhima behind!!

riddhima senselessly walked back to her room...tooo shocked to say anything...tooo numb to feel anything....she headed straight towards the bed...and dropped herself on it like a stuff toy closing her eyes and swaying in her own world!!!!!

*NEXT DAY*
it was already the forth day for the gang staying here and now they had vey little time to unite AR!

ra: abey yaar...u no armaan kuch ajeeb sa behae karne laga hai...
mu:i no aur...ridz bhi...subah se 1 word nahi bola hai usne...can u imagine???
ni:chill! guyzz aaaj 4th day hai...humare paas bas 2 aur din hai...
ab: ye lo...chill! bolkar khud tention...


arnikki hits abhi lightly on the shoulder...

just as they are talking AR enter together...
all of them stop chattering!!!!!
ri: hi guyz
ar:helllooooozzzzzz!!!! watssssuuuuup???

evry1 was shocked!! mainly because...
1.riddhima's hi was sooo LOW& armaan's was so GOOD!!!!
2.riddhima looked exhausted and tired whereas ammy was happy and cheerful...

they shocked to see both of them like this...usually it was the opposite but today everything changed!!
at: arrey bhai ammy...kya baat hain bahot khush lag raha hai?????: haan yaar champ!! just general...aaj ka din bahot acha lag raha hai!!!!!!!
an: realllyyy??? iski vajah??
ar: haan hain na...vo kya hai na ki r...

he stops when he gets to know that  he's about to say riddhimas name...

ar:r..rahul aur mu-muskaan ladai na...nahi kar rahe...
and then he laughs sheepishly...
evry1 except riddhima & muskaan laughs....

ni: ridz r u f9???
ridz who was lost in her own thoughts suddenly looked up...
ri: huh...ha-haan...ummm chale...
ra:haan we're gettin late...
mu: chalo...

they all leave for the village...

*IN THE VILLAGE*
armaan was very irritated...riddhima didnt speak to hi since morning...all she was doing was work...meanwhile our clever riddhima set out a plan...she wanted to know that why did armaan do that to her yesterday...so she avoided him...cause she knew that if she did so he would himself come up and tell her...

after 2and a 1/2 hous of tolerance he couldnt take it any more...

ar: WATS RONG WID U???
he almost shouted at her....riddhima who was quitely doing her work...suddenly looked at him with wide eyes along with other people....
ridz looking left-right trying to hide the embarassment he caused for her...
"armaan...hehhe dheere bol sakte the..."
ar(angry): TUM PAGAL HO?? BEVKUF LADKI!!!
riddhima was now more embarassed so to hide that she held his hand and took himto a corner....leaving evry1 in the surrounding i utter daze!

ri: kya hain?
Armaan looked at her then...


soooo guyyzzzz this was my part...sorry 4 the late post....
pls tell me hw it was!!!!!!


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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
hey first one to coment so happy
lovely part
amazing
cont soon


Edited by AR-kash - 06 April 2011 at 5:07am
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
hey
luvd d part
n m greedy 4 more
cont sooooooooper soon............
tc
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
hey nice part
cont soon
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lovly lovly part cont soooonnn
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged

wow luved it....

specially ridz ignoring ammy....

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
hey nice part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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