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U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic) (Page 16)

Crazyy_Fan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Gr8 part...plzz updt longer partz if possible....

dmginmyheart Newbie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged
ar: meri jacket shoulder se utaro aur pehen lo....and pls zyaada bhav khane ki koshish mat karna...and ya 9th cloud par bhi mat pahunchna..

riddhima's mouth was open but she daren't say a word so she did as she was told to do...

Now it was more than 40 mins and ammy was still carrying took them a while 2 cover the distance as he was carrying her! 
riddhima was now irritated as she had no idea struck her and she purpously blew armaan's jacket that she was wearing....
armaan didnt noe that this act was intentional...
ri(acting): oh no!!! armaan dekho na jacket ud gayi...
armaan looked at his jacket and then looked at riddhima angrily...

ar: uff! tum toh ho hi ek panoti....ek jacket bhi nahi sambhal pati kya???
ri: oh hello! lecture badme dena....pehle mujhe utaro aur jacket lo....

armaan was quite angry so he did not have time to question her and put her down....and then walked a few steps back to collect his jacket...but as soon as he turned....

ar:riddhima dekho ab-
ar(shocked): riddhima!! ri-riddhimaaaaa!!! hey bhagwan!! ab yeh ladki kaha chale gayi??? iske saaath rehkar main doctor ki bajaaye patient ban jaonga...riddhimaaa!!!


the whole gang had freshened up...and were now sitting in the had now been over an hour for A-R to have not joint them....sooo...obviously the gang was worried now....u see as AR are as dreadful as tom and jerry at times.....

mu(hastily): chalo...jaldi chalo....rahul maine kaha na chalo...
ra: mus-muskaan...pls yaar...chilll.....tu itna kyun ghabra jaati hain????

muski now angry...

mu:acchha??? to ab main ghabra jaati hun....dekho ji...suno...main ghabra jaati hoon...abhi kuch der pehle  kisne kaha tha "yaar...agar un dono ko kuch ho gaya to???"
ni: ufff!!! muski yaar...chill...and pls tum log ye apna jhagda na...kahi aur kana....
an: ya!! nikki is rite....i mean gosh guyzzz we are tokin about Armaan-Riddhima here and you guyz...
at: ha-haan haan anjie ek dum sahi bol rahi hain...main sahi keh raha hun na anjali??????

anjali just rolled her eyes...

ab: okay...guyyzzz so humein ab kya karna chahiye???
ra: ammy-ridz ko wapas lana chahiye isse pehle ki voh dono 1 dusre ka khoon kar de....

they all laugh and leave the cottage....


riddhima was walking fast so that armaan doesnt come behind her....and she was walking on the same road.... that led to the cottage......she spotted an ice-cream stall there and couldnt control herself so went there....

ri: bhaiyyya...1 ice-cream de do...
she spoke 
like a child....even making the ice-cream guyy smile...  
guy: konsi vali chahiye bitiya????
ri(thinkin): chocolate!!!
guy: abhi ruko!!!

just then a group of 3-4 children came running towards riddhima....

children: ice-cream!!!ice-cream!!!
guy: arreeyyy!!!!!!! jao...jao...khane do inhe...jao...
ri(smiling): nahi...ruko tum logo ko ice-cream chahiye na??? main dungi!!! par promise karo sab abhi chup rahoge....varna pata hai...yaha pe ek saphed colour ki shirt pehne.... 1 admi ghumta hain....vo sadu aur khadoos hai!!!... uske haath mein 1 jacket bhi hain....vo ake tum logo ko bahot marega!!!!

the children got a bit scared... at the fact that he would hit them...little did they know that ridz was referring... to armaan in her whole new story!!!!
Just as all the kids and ridz got their ice-cream... some1 tapped ridz at her shoulder....

ri(totally engrossed in her ice-cream): kya hai ab ice-cream di na maine...ab kya hua???
the person still tapping...
ri: KYA HAI??? maine kaha na jao!!!

ridz's heart was in her mouth when she heard the familiar husky voice....
slowly...gradually she turned...and the kids who were engrossed in their ice-cream... turned with her...

ridz closed her eyes b'cos she thought ammy would slap her....and within seconds...she heard screaming noises of children....who were shouting....

children: khadooos,sadu.....marega!!!!! bachaooooo....bachaooooooo

armaan who was totally confused as to what the ruccus was about....suspiciously looked at riddhima....who in return showed him an innocent face....

The ice-cream guyy didnt even miss 1 scene....he in fact was laughing...and AR both looked at him in a have-you-gone-mad look....

guy: sahab, aap yahi soch rahe in bachon ko aapse darr kyun lag raha hai????
darasal...apki biwi shayad aapse naraaz thi....isiliye...aapke baare mein aisa kaha bacho ko....

NOW AR both were shocked....

AR: BIWI!!!!!!!!!
guy: haan...ismein itna kya baat hai?????
ar: yeh...yeh pagal meri biwi nahi hai...
ri: wattt??? haanji bhaiyya...aisa saddoooo khadooskism ka insaaan mera pati nahi ho sakta....
guy(smiling): acchaa bhai theek hain...par jhagda to mat karo...

AR both smile at him and leave....

ar: tum na...pagal bevkuf ladki...kho jaati to kya kehta main sabko???? crazyy...upar se per pe bhi chot aayi hain....R U MAD????
ri(holding her ear): Listen pls....chila kyun rahe ho??? sunai deta main aur kya karti...utha rakha tha mujhe....bachi hun kya main???? godi utha rakha tha jo???....upar se ye sadu shakal banayye ghum rhe the....
ar(angry): thank god!!!!! PAHUNCH GAYYE!!!!! varna tumhaare saath aur kuch time bitaata pagal ho jaata...

Ridzie's mouth flung open...and she stopped while ammy walked in...
ri(to herself): Ho jaate pagal...kamsekam dimaag to na khate...uff ye sadu bhi na...

she starts walking back....

they both reach inside....and find none of their friends there....

armaan entered his full anger...and straight away went to the bathrooom...
Armaan was thinking while having a sshower...
" uuurrrggghhh!!!!!! ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi....bu jo bh ho....she's no no...armaan dekh...abhi ke liye 4 godsake uske baare mein mat soch...."
he came out in his towel wrapped around his waist and another around his shoulder...
and to his astonishment....just after a few seconds riddhima entered....


 labbering while entering): rahul is muskaan...AAarrrGgghhh!!!!
armaan looked at her...and then realised he wasnt in clothes....he was embarassed but then....
a naughty thought struck him...

sooooo guyyzzz do tell me about the part.....

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qt4ever Goldie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged
first to comment
nice part
thnx 4 pm

Edited by qt4ever - 24 March 2011 at 8:35am
shaaz_91 Goldie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
luvd it
m even more excited 4 d next part now
cont soon
Amoon.88 Goldie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
lobed it...
thx 4 da pm
Crazyy_Fan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Great update :))
Continueee sooon :))
-wild- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Hey sweety awsome to see AR bickering but now eager to know AR naughty scenes
thnx4 d pm
ilyasesha Goldie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
love thiz....

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