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U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic) (Page 15)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged
PART 15
Riddhima looked at armaan in a weird way...
and then smile and nodded... they left...

The gang just smirked and left...

riddhima and armaan reached the spot where they were doing the check up...
ri(looking here-there): arre.. yahi toh tha mera bag... kaha gaya..
she started tossing and turning things...
ri(looking at armaan with a sarcastic smile):
aur mr.armaan mallik... agar apko aitraaz na ho..to bahot badi kripa hogi aapki...agar aap meri...thodi si...madad karenge...mere sabse hot bag ko dhundhne ka...
ar(getting up 4rm his daydreamimg): huh, ha-haan.. ya..
he starts searching for the bag...

AFTER 15 MINS

RI(her eyes wide wid happiness) : OMG!!! my cuchie doochie-dooo.... awww how are you babyy...thnk god i found you...i was sooo worried...
armaan who was standing behind her was totally confused as to what has happened to her..
" badi ajeeb ladki hai...apneaap se batein karti hain...mein iske saath aur kuch din raha na...to pagal hp jaonga..." he thought..


ridz suddenly while toking looked at him..and caught him staring at her... she just looked at him...and their eyes met...they were so lost into each other's eyes that...they didnt realize when they stopped walking and were standing face-to face...

After about 10 Mins...

suddenly armaan realises that they're not the only ones in the world...and turns his face the other as soon as he turns his face ridz does the same...
ridz to herself,
" OMG!! he was staring at me!!.. i dont believe this... jo bhi hai... ri-ridz t-tu dekh.. tujhe... ye sare.. ajeeb-ajeeb weird feelings bahar nahi ane deni hai... ok.. just gt it... u have tocontrol urself.."

whereas armaan,
" hey bhagu, please koi... bhi idea de do yaar... ye akhir ho kya raha hai mujhe???
pls... main pagal ho jaonga!!"

they both walk without looking at each other... slightly embarassed!!
A-R(2geder): Vo... tum...
they again look at each other...
and then turn away.. A-r(again 2geder): Tum Pehle...
 now again they look at each other confused...and after a while ridz bursts out to laugh! armaan looks at her and smiles...
it had been over 20 mins since they started their walk...and now it was getting dark...and windy....
Ridz who was feeling cold wrapped her arms around herself in a frown and looked at armaan...smiling away in his own world... (who was actually recalling ridz's memories...)
ridz thinking 2 herself..." stupid...apne aap bewajah smile kar raha hai...urrggh!! i so hate him...1 baar bhi nahi socha...ki apni jackt mujhe de de... dikhta nahi hai ki mujhe thand lag rahi hai...urrgh! films nai dekhi kya kabbhi isne???...stupid non-romantic admi...khadoos kahi ka..."

Armaan who was grinning away recalling ridz's dance 2day...faced to look at her...and was confused to look at her frowning...he then noticed that she was feeling cold...
" ladkiyon ko...1 carind,kind types ladke ache lagte hai...agar main ye jacket riddhima ko de do...to vo bhi mere baare aisa hi sochegi na.."
Armaan suddenly started removing his jacket...and in a very macho style held it in his hand and put his hand forward to ridz...
ar(in macho style): ye lo...tumhe..thand nahi lagegi...isse pehen lo...
after that he smiled, "ab to riddhima mujhse impress ho gayi hogi...huh..well done ammy.." he thought...
riddhima angrily pushed his hand away...leaving armaan's mouth open..
ridz: NO THANK YOU!!! bol to aise rahe ho jaise koi ehsaan kar rahe ho...aur haan bahot jaldi yaad aa gaya tumhe ki mujhe thand lag rahi hai...
ar(innocently): but maine..toh tumhe jacket thand na lagne ki wajah se hi di thi...
ri(closed her eyes and opened dem): tumhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aata...
she then started walking ahead of him...stomping her foot...
armaan, toking to himself: ab mainekya kiya...ajeeb ladki hai..ab aur kya samjhu yaar...RI-RIDDHIMAAAA>>>
he shouted while walking behind her trying to catch pace...with her..
Ar: but ab maine kya kiya hai?
ri:; kuch nahi aap to kuch karte hi nahi hai na???...
ar: tum itna naraaz kis baat pe ho rahi ho...
ri: tum andhe ho dikhta nahi hai kya??? kabse mujhe thand lag rahi thi... aur itni der baad tumne jacket offer ki woh bhi itne...ghamand ke saath...idiot...aur smile kar rahe the..pagal ho apneaap me hi smile karte ho..
ar(embarassed): v-voo... ma-main..ac-actually...
ri( more angry now): ye bakri ki tarah kya main-min laga rakha hai...
ar: tum chila kyun rahi ho yaar...
ri: to kya tumhari aarti utaarun... and you noe wat.. you're...
AAAhhh OOuuuCHHH!!!

armaan looked at her...and then looked down... she collided with a brick and hurt her foot while walking...
armaan," uff ye ladki...dekh ke bilkul nahi chal sakti kya??"
ri: ooUUcch.. mama..aahhhh..(she held her foot..)
ar(holding her foot): mujhe dekhne do...
ridz just took her foot back...
Armaan now irritated just grabbed her foot...
ri: OOuuCCh..ladki hun armaan atleast dont be that harsh...
Armaan looked at her,
ar: sorry...but tumhe ismein thode dino ke liye crape banage lagana padega... you've got a sprain.."
ri: arm-armaan i dnt think ye dino ki baat hai u no...ill be f9...
She tries to get up and as soon as she stands..she loses her balance... and is about to fall...when ammy holds her... 

they look at each other for a while...and then...ridz realises that she's suppose to be angry with him...
ri(struggling to get rid of his hold):ch-chodo mujhe...mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni...
ar(irritated): do min chup nahi reh sakti...bak-bak-bak...
ri(her mouth flung open):  you...i said leave me...
armaan ignored her and just picked her up in his arms...she just couldnt believe it...and kept staring at him in disbelief...whereas he just looked straight...
ri: armaan i said leve me...
he looked at her with straight eyes...and dropped her and held her again from fallin...
ar(with a sadu face): mil gayi tasali...happy now...pls thodi der chup rahogi to bahot meherbani hogi...
ri(irritated but scared to say anything): F9..but tum y-yeh mat samajhna ki m-main tu-tum se darti hun...vo to bas ainvayi...
armaan just shook his head and resumed walking...
armaan who was still carrying his jacket on his shoulder...
ar: meri jacket shoulder se utaro aur pehen lo....and pls zyaada bhav khane ki koshish mat karna...and ya 9th cloud par bhi mat pahunchna..
riddhima's mouth was open but she daren't say a word so she did as she was told to do...

soooo guyyzzz this was my new part....pls tell me how it was all sorts of comments accepted...

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
oh my god....
ridz followin armaan's orders...
u know itz impossible...

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
hey nice part......wow i was surprised......ridz actually listened to him
it is so funny the way they argue with each other
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Very nice part buddy.
Cute ar moments.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
hey  dATZ SO CHWETTTTTTTT
cont sonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
hey
luvd d part
der fights r soooooo cuuuuuuuute.........
cont soon
tc
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
luvd d part
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
very lovely part dear.....and your hindi is too good....its expressed AR's feeling much.....plz.cont soon..
punam

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