U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic) - Page 5

Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...nice part..but very short na.....plz ud a long part......
punam
Posted: 13 years ago

PART *8*
ridzz excited jumped and hugged him...

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ammy just jerked back due 2 the sudden push!! he felt sumthin running over him...

he enjoyed thehug!! wanted 2 stay like this forever...and ever..

armaan put his 1 hand and hugged her back...

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after a few minutes of their dream land

tridzz hurriedly jerked back...

armaan didnt realize 4 a min wat hapened and stood still...

he quickly looked the other way 2 avoid ridz's gaze and so did riddhima...

they both wer hell confused about wat just happened...

AR 2geder: umm vo main..

again speakin 2geder:tum pehle...

ridzz laughed

whereas armaan looked at her dreamily...

he then shook his head after a few seconds..

ri: to hum apne plan pe kal se work kare??

ar: ha-haan sure sure..

and he walked off in the other direction!

while ridzz just shrugged and went from there..

@7:00 RIDDHIMA's PLACE
riddhima was busy toking to ahul on the fone,convincing him to take muski out 4 a date 2day!!

ri:urggghhh!!!! rahul garewal since the past 1 hour i'm trying 2 convince u!! ur u-r such a-a FATU!! yup dats who u r!!

ra: wat? lisen dude yaar...vo muskaan hain mujhe kabhi bhi haan nahi bolegi vo...

ri:try karega to kuch jayega kya??? ask her for dinner...umm sayin dat u wanna tok about sumthing imp. nythin yaar!! nything dat only she noes and...u no!!

ra to himself: crap! y didnt i think of this b4...i can sk her for dinner 2day sayin dat i wana tell her wat happened wid ammy!! yes!! yo!!

ra: yup! dats coool!! riddhima hw much can u tok?? cn u pls iv d fone to muski??

ri:yo-you!! f9!!

riddhima gets out of her room...

ri: muskaan

mu turns back:wat ridzz??

ri:umm rahul wants 2 tok  2 u!

muski gets excited and quickly grabs the fone!

mu:ridz u mind...if i tok 2 him like personally!!

ri:OOOOooohhh! sure!

mu: stop it!! go now(blushin a little)

ri: hahaha! k..k

muskaan starts 2 tok...

mu: hello1 um rahul

ra: ha-han muskaan... vo main main soch raha tha ki main.

mu: uff kya bakri ki tarah main main kar raha hai...bol na! ab mujhse bhi sharamayega kya??

ra; nahi..acha kya tu aaj mere saath dinner pe chalegi???...pause...mujhe armaan ke baare mein baat karni hai!

mu(shyly):ha-haan..theeke tu mujhe 1/2 ghante mein pick up arne aa jaana!!

ra:wow!! yayy!! umm mera matlab thanks!! see u soon!! bye..

mu(controllin her laugh):bye!

muskaan keeps the fone down shyly & ridzz see's her...

ridz to herself:yes! im sooo gr8! abhi ammy ko fone karke...hold on maine abhi uss weirdo k-ko ammy bulaya!! uff!! main pagal ho jaungi inke beech rehkar!!

RAHUL's PLACE

armaan just enters his place and foun anjie sleeping(as usual! beauty sleep) and rahul worried!

ar comin from behind rahul:BHOW! hahaha

ra:aaargh!! tu uff!! yaar tang mat kar...already paresha hun...

ar:ohhoo to janab pareshan hai...

ra;armaan..tu chahta hai teri pole khule...

ar: chill yaar! tu to serious ho gaya!hehehe!

ra:shutup yaar ammy...dnt irritate me...1 toh upar se pata nahi date pe ka pehne upar se--

ar:WAT? date?? kab? kiske saath?? 

ra:usi ke saath yaar...shyly

ar(thinks its ridz):wat? tune use date ke liye puha??(all sad)oh! umm congo bro..lookin the der way...

ra:thnx yaar!! u noe i reaaly reaaly love her...

ar(a bit angry): tu aise kaise kar sakta hai?? tune kaha tha k tu muskaan se pyaar karta hai fir basket...


ra: HOLD ON! tujhe laga ki maine basketball ko date ke liye pucha??OMG armaan maine muskaan ko pucha hai!!

ar(happy):wat? dats dats gr8 bro...

ra(to himself):so ammy was jealous...hmm muski we're gonna be full of toks tonite aweetheart...

After !/2 hr muskaan and rahul leave for their date!!

AT RIDZ PLACE

ri:yes! finally...i think mujhe uss armaan ko bolna chahiye iske baare mein...

starts calling him...

ar:hello

ri:umm ar-armaan..


soooo guyzz this was part 8...

hope u enjoyed it!1 luv u all 4 ur precious comments!! luv u all!! keep liking!😉


Posted: 13 years ago
lobed it...
 
thx 4 da pm
 
AMOON
Posted: 13 years ago
superb
awesum
fab
luvd it
thnx 4 d PM
cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
PART *8*
ar:hello?
ri: hello umm ar-armaan?
ar:BASKET! TUm?(gettin xited + shocked)
tumne call kyun kiya?sab theek to hai na?koi problem hai to main aun?itni raat ho gayi hain..kisi ne tumhare saath...
ri:ar-armaan...
ar:gosh! main abhi aata hun!(all worried)
ri:ARMAAN! stop it! mujhe kuch nahi hua!mujhe ky ho sakta hai?? maine to R-M ke liye call kiya tha!!
ar:oh..ya as it is i shud ask"Basket kisse thok diya?"..

ri(her mouth flung open):SHUTUP! god! lisen mein tumhe na...sirf R-M ke liye tolerate kar rai hun...so pls BeHaVe urSeLf!
AR(tryin 2 control his laughter):o-ok...ba-batao k-kya keh-kehna hai??
ri:urggh!! i just wanted 2 tell u dat R-M hav gone 4 a...
ar:DATE! i no dat madam...
ri:huh/ how did u get 2 no??
ar:i hav my SOURCES! 
ri: gosh! watever...ab humein apne next step ke baare mein sochna hai....
ar:aur vo kya hai??
ri: "realisation OF LOVE!" 4 muski!!aur apna plan mein tumhe kal bataongi!!! gudnite sweetheart!! (she laughs n disconnects the line!)
ar:par...kat diya?nd sweetheart?
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RIDHIMA's PLACE
RIdz was on the couch readin her book...& she just doozed down to sleep...not even realizing it!!

*TING TONG*


*TING TONG*

ri(gettin up wid a jerk ):huh..huh!! oh shit!
she goes...openis the door...
ri:whoaa!! muski back wid her ROMANTIC DATE!!
mu(blushin slightly):uff! ridz stop it! nd koi date nai thi vo!
ri:ya rite! jab 1 ladka nd ladki...akele jate hai na bahar...DINNER pe! usse date hi bolte hai!
mu:god! watever!
ri:oooHHooo! atleats u agree dat it was a date...
mu:Ridzz shutup! aur bahot raat ho gayi hai...so go To SLEEP!!
ri:hmm...rahul se baat jo karni ho gi!!!
muskaan runs 2 hit her...but she goes from there...muskaan laughs after she goes and goes inside the bathroom 2 change!
ridz cums out from behind the wall wer she was hiding...
ri:accept to tumhe karna hi padega MUSKAAN CHADA...dat u luv rahul!!!

THE weekend for all of them was quite good...
armaan,rahul wer mostly at each oder's place(ammy was givin rahull tips 2 impress muski!)
riddhima was makin muski realise her love for rahul!!(by tellin all gud-gud things bout him!)
and poor atul! was ther at rahul-anjies place doin all of anjies COrES!!
abhi-nikki>>well der's a story comin up 4 dem!!
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*NEXT DAY*
It was 11:00 'o' clock in the morning...
armaan was at the BB court!(as usual)
ridz,rahul,muski and anjali wer in their economics class! 
Abhi-nikki wer still out of sight!
AFTER THE CCLASS>>>
the whole gang is in the canteen....
ri:yaar! ye abhi-nikki kaha he?
at:haan yaar! maine unhe call bhi kiya tha weekend mein dono mein se kisi ka bhi response nai mila!!
ra:i no...OMG!
ar:kya hua abey??kyun chimpanzee ki tarah mu lkholke beth..(b4 ammy cud say nythin rahul turned his face towards the side he was starin!:O
ar: WAT THE>>>
ri:lo! aur kehta hai mein galiyan bakti hun..
ar:Shutup! aur udhar dekho...
evry1 looks at the side he was ponting! 
ALL WER SHOCKED 2 SEE...


ABhi-nikki we actually...holdin hands and walking towards dem...a big smile on their faces...
AB:hey guyzz!
ni:hiiii
mu:nikki ye sab kya hai??
ni: oh! we're dating!
ALL:wat?
ab:wat sooo sh-shockin y-yaar hum py-aar nai kar skte kya?
ar:DAts..dats..sooo coool...umm..c'mon guyzz lets congratulate dem..
ammy was tryin 2 take all f them off dei shock mode!
after a moment all of dem we smilin all wer happy 2 see dem 2geder1!
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sooo guyzz dis was the part...do tell me if u like it or not!!!



Edited by dmginmyheart - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part!!!
 
loved it...
 
thnx 4 da pm
 
AMOON
Posted: 13 years ago
read all parts in one go....superb ff..please keepp writing
Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome ff
i just read all the parts in one go
love the concept and the new ridz
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 9
It was almost 1-2 months since riddhima had joint college & AR's "mission RM Milao"was successful at last...But 1 thing didnt chnge AR NOK-JHOK's!!!😆
At The Canteen
All of them wer sittin in the canteen's corner table...& it was almost time 4 college to get over...
R-M & A-N wer busy wid deir own "ROMANCE"...
Ar:urrgghhh! im irritated nw...guyz(lookin at r-m and a-n)
can u 4 stop it!! i mean room ki cheezein public mein kyun kar rahe ho?? and ye sab sirf is BASKET ki wajah se hua hai!!
ridz who was about 2 sleep suddenly stood uprite...
ri:wat? meri wajah se y cos of me?
ar:tumhara idea tha na..."armaan rahul and muskaan ko milatein hai"(imitatin her)!..ab dekhlo ye log to lage he and hum bore ho rahe hai!!
ri:agar nai milana tha to haan kyun bola?Jerk! 
ar: lisen u-
*ANNOUNCEMENT*
"all 3rd year students are requested to please come near the assembly area"
All wer glad that atleast sumthin broke AR's fite...
ar:abhi kyun bulaya hai?
ri:i no...
mu(tryin to make evry1 move from der):guyzz chalo...varna princi aa jayega..
ALL assemble at the area...
(P for princi...)
p:o.k. so ye sab hain jo bunk kar rahe the....
all confused!!!
p: armaan mallik! ofcors aur kaun...
all eyes towards ammy! ridz giggles..ammy glares at her...
ar:sir, apne sare 3rd yr students ko yaha bulaya hain...
p: oh ya ! sorry..sorry..acha to students apko jaana hain Dhantewadi gaon...yaha se 7hrs ka raasta hai..military camp ke liye!
all stare at the princi...ammy puts hi hand on the head!
a peon reminds the princi that dey hav 2 go 4 a medical camp...not a military 1!
p;ha-han! umm medical camp ke liye! aur haan yaad rahe...girls..pure kapde pehen ke jana (lookin at ridz) aur ladkiyon ki tarah... thode suits carry kar lena...
all girls are in SHOCK! ridz was about to faint wen rahul held her!
p:ye camp...6 dino ke liye hoga aur kal hum sab niklengr iske liye! @ 9:00 a.m. sharp! thnku!
Ridz who was still in shock...was walkin in her own land...
ri:s..ss...suit..muski main suit...
mu:ridz yaar chil maar...mere paas hain na...ill give u!
ar:vo suits hone ki nahi pehenne ki baat kar rahi hai! life mein kabhi bhi usne indian kapde nahi pehne...huh! firang!
anjie hit ammy on his shoulder...
ar:oooOOch! wat?
an:shutup! ridz dont u wrry! evn i dnt hav dese simple type suits...we all will go shoppin rite now!
nikki who was busy wid abhi all dis while suddenly got excited o hearin the word"shopping"
ni:YES!!
mu:WONDERFUL!
ri:THNKUUU!
an:ur welcum...
ALL BOYS; Oh no!!!
Girls:Oh yes!!!!!!
after 3 hrs of deir shopping the girls finally went at thei places wid guyzz carrin deir bags!!
*NEXT DAY*
all the boys,anjie and abhi wer waitin for muskaan and riddhima at the entrance of the college...
ar: gosh! im sure ye basket ki wajah se l8 honge its almost gonna be 9! actually isme uski bhi kya galti...1st time suit jo pehna hoga!(the guyzz started to laugh)
an:SHUTUP! im sure vo hum sabmein se sabse pretty lagegi!
at:nahi anjie tum bhi bahot khubsoorat lag rahi ho....
she rolls her eyes wereas oder laugh!
armaan looks to his ritewhile laughin when suddenly his eyes fell n the world's most prettiest girl! IT was RIDDHIMA...he just stared and stared at her while she was tokin 2 muskaan...
"wow! she looks amazing! i just feel like hggin her ssoooo tight..hold on...armaan e tu kya soch raha hai?..she's basket yaar..not ur love..."armaan thought
rahul saw armaan like dat! he was damn sue now dat ammy is fallin in love wid ridz...


ri:hey guyzz! (she looked at armaan and passed a little smile!)
ar"OMG! she'll kill me! riddhima.."
ra:hey basketball! lookin cute...
mu:oye! mujhe to tune kabhi cute nahi kaha..
ra:ha-haan cos tum to sexy,hot,pretty sab kuch ho!
muski blushed..
an:ok guyzz we're gettin l8...andar chalein..
at:haan haan..
all go inside and sit in the bus...
*IN THE BUS*
A-n sat 2geder, R-M sat 2geder and Atul quickly grabbed the seat next to anjie...
so A-R had no choice but 2 sit 2geder...
all started playin antakshri...xept ridz..
ra:c'mon ridz khelo na!
ab:haan yaar khel na...
ri: seriously guyzz..mujhe nai khelna...
mu:chod na! kyun usse tang kar raha hai rahul! acha...armaan cha..teri baari hain..."A" se gaana ga!!
armaan started thinkin...
ar: "aajkal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zubaan par(looks at ridz), sabko malum hai aur sabko khabar ho gaye,to kya,"
ridz lowers her gaze...
all clap...after sum time dey all stop playin and sit down on deir respective places...
ridz was readin a book and suddenly got distracted wen ammy sat nxt 2 her...his hand accidentally touched her's...both of them took deir hand back immediately...and got a bit embarassed..
ri thinkin"god! ye mujhe kya ho gaya? aisa laga jaise current laga ho! i mean hes also a human only yaar...gosh! riddhima gupta! tu pagal ho gayi hai"
ar thinkin"man! ye ladki mujhe pagal banake hi chodegi! god ammy focus..focus"
after a few minutes ridz fell asleep...she unknowingly kept her head on ammy's shoulder...
armaan who was lookin out of the window, suddenly noticed ridz and a huge smile came across his face...he 2 rested his head on her shoulder and dey went off to sleep..

little did they now dat rest all of them(the gang!)was watching them...
ra:guyzz...im tellin u! ye dono 1 dusre ke liye perfect hain!
an:ya i think ur rite u no!
ab:so wats next!
at: mere paas 1 dhaso plan hain...
all glare at him
at:plan tha!
mu: so listen...
muskaan tells dem the plan...
ni:meaning ye 6 din mein humei inki setting karani hai...
ab:u cud hav used a better word...
ni: tum to..
an: stop it! is evry 1 on...
all: yes...
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so guyzz dis was the part.... pls tell me how it was...


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