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mn ff...Ehsaas (updated, last part) at page 127 (Page 4)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie12

hey yr it ws really nice
hmm quite interesting....mayank ki entry in da next part wonder wht he wud b lyk....waitngDay Dreaming 
thnx for da pm n do add me in ur list for further updates....Smile

thanks so much dear.....
and ofcourse you are in the pm list

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
amazing tafisaaaaaa 
nice job thanks 
for the pm 
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

amazing tafisaaaaaa 
nice job thanks 
for the pm 
hey ginny thank you so much
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged

i am angry at u

u didnt even told us tht ur planning n FF
 
ClapClap gr8 start tasfia...really gr8...
A...its difrnt as it talk abt simple thng like oldi marriage proposal system..aur as i say larki parde..nupur's mom is behaving perfectly like a MOM...n nupur's dialogues were perfect....LOLWinkLOL....
 
B. nupur is a balance of modern n contemprory girl....
C. sami already maried...n i thnk mayank's frnd....love to read sajan as married couple
 
D: when u start defining adhiraj...i looked up to title again to confirm its MN ff n.....ShockedShocked..relived after finding it is LOLLOL
 
n if u dare ..nt to pm me....thnnnnWink


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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

i am angry at u

u didnt even told us tht ur planning n FF
 
ClapClap gr8 start tasfia...really gr8...
A...its difrnt as it talk abt simple thng like oldi marriage proposal system..aur as i say larki parde..nupur's mom is behaving perfectly like a MOM...n nupur's dialogues were perfect....LOLWinkLOL....
 
B. nupur is a balance of modern n contemprory girl....
C. sami already maried...n i thnk mayank's frnd....love to read sajan as married couple
 
D: when u start defining adhiraj...i looked up to title again to confirm its MN ff n.....ShockedShocked..relived after finding it is LOLLOL
 
n if u dare ..nt to pm me....thnnnnWink
hey fiza.........
oh my god you said so much .........first thanks ton for such a lovly comment
yaar maine aaj hi ff plan kiya aur likh dalaLOL
and dont worry it a MN ff only.....LOL
and about adhiraj.......well lets talk about it latter......Wink
mai to dar gayi.....LOL..dont worry .......you are in the pm list janaSmile



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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Nice strt
Update soon
Plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Nice strt
Update soon
Plz add me to ur pm list
thank you so much
you are in the pm list
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
hey guys thanks a ton for such a warm response.....
now i can continue........Smile.....and guys i know you all must be thinking that if adhi and nups are getting married than what about mayank?,...but dont worry.mai hoon naWinkLOL..and some havent added me in their buddy list....pls accept it..that will be easy for me to pm you guys
again thanks a ton


part-2




adhiraj was in his room...when someone knocked on his door....kya mai apko disturb kar sakta hun?
adhiraj was more than happy to see the person....
a-mayank....god mera yaar...and hugged him tightly.....
m-are aram se....and he also hugged him back

mayank sharma,25 years old...his parents died in a accident when he was 6 years old..from then he stays with his mama- mami..mr and mrs khanna...adhiraj, samrat and mayank had been always more than brothers...mr and mrs khanna love him as much as they love adhi and sam...he's image is a choclate boy....his one smile is enough for 100 girls to fall for him...girls drools over him..but he is in wait for his "true love".......

a-i missed you like hell...itne din lagane ki kya jarurat thi...jaldi nahi asakta tha....
m-yaar mai to ana chahta tha...par factory me kuch problem hogayi thi..agar mai wapas chala ata to mama ji ko jana parta...
a-to wapas ajana chahiye tha na...atleast hitler to mere sar pe nahi baithta
m-adhi....
a-ya i know..i know his my dad..and i should respect him and all....
m-ab kya huya tera dimag  itna kyun garam hai...he said taking a seat in the bed
a-are yaar dad ne phir se ek ladki dikha di.....
m-to problem kya hai.....???????....
a-what do you mean.?......mujhe shadi wadi nahi karni hai.....
m-did you like the girl?
a-what do you want to say?
m-look adhi...one day or the other day you need to get married so why not today?..i have seen the girl photo..she's beautiful man....
a-oh!!! to tu kr lena usse shadi....
m-just shut up......
a-but.....
m-just give it a try......ok?
a-are you sure..?
m-ofcource
a-fine!.....
mayank was happy for adhiraj.....he hugged him
m-congrats!!!! man
a-yah..yah..i know....
he smilled at him....now sleep ok....
a-yah good night..
m-good night....
mayank closed the door and saw samrat standing there with a questioning look in his face....he gave a thumps up to him...and winked at him....
m-its done bro.....
s-you are too good.....hugging him...
m-tell me something i dont know.....
s-now its late...go and sleep.
m-yup...good night...

next day.......

all of them were sitting in the breakfast table......
am-adhi beta your dad must be coming........
a-i know....
s-all the best brother....and chuckled with mayank and gunjan....
a-haan haan uda lo mera mazak....
mr khanna came and took his seat..
ad-so adhi bataiye hume...apka faisla......
a-i am ready for the marriage.....he said looking down...
ad-he smilled at his son....he knew he wasnt happy but he believed everything will be fine soon......i am really happy son...you took the right decision ......
everybody was happy....samrat smilled at mayank and thaked him in heart.....

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mr khanna called mr bhushan.....and informed them .....
the whole bhushan house was dancing with joy......they were so happy as nupur was their only daughter and she will be married in such a respectine family...it was their dream which came true.......but nupur's dad isnt so selfish so he decided to ask nupur first.....

nd-nupur kya mai andar ajaun.....
n-haan papa...aap puch kyun rahe ho.....
nd-beta mai jyada ghuma phira ke baat nahi karunga....isiliye sidhe sidhe puchta hun.....tumhe adhiraj pasand hai na....
nupur wasnt sure what to say....not that adhiraj wasnt a good prson...but still...
n-papa ap logone agar mere liye kuch socha hoga to sahi hoga...
nd-kya mai yea haan samjhu?
nupur faintly smilled and nooded.....nupur's dad kissed nupur's forehead....and left....he also informed khanna's....both famylies were really happy.....

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nupur was sitting in her room thinking about her decision....did she do the right thing?....she still dont know anything about adhiraj....and marriage ?......she took a deep breath and think this is right....what is happening is for good....she was lost in her world of why?..what?....when suddenly someone broke her chain of thoughts......

d-yahi teri dosti yahi tera pyar.....shadi ki baat fix hogayi aur hume doosro se pata chala......
n-diya.....and hugged her tightly....
d-chor mujhe.....mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni......
n-are baba sorry....sab kuch itna jaldi hogaya ki....
d-bas..bas...aur kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai.....
nupur smilled at her friends anger and held her ears......
n-ab bhi maaf nahi karegi......????
dia looked at her from the corner of her eyes and smilled....and hugged her
d-i am so happy for you.......

dia,nupur's best friend since chilhood...she's the one and only person who understand nupr completely...may be better than nupur's parents......

d-ek baat bata tu khush to hai na?
nupur looked down and said nothing.....
d-oh god tu khush nahi hai....
n-pata nahi dia.....meri kuch samajh me nahi araha hai yaar......
d-dont worry everything will be fine.....
n-i hope so.....
sensing the seriousness dia decided to lit up the mood....
d-shopping chalien?
n-shopping?
d-haan baba shopping.....
n-umm...to intezar kis baat ka hai...chal na
d-pehle change to karle.....
n-oopps abhi ayi......

dia smilled at her friend....nupur was a master piece..she was shy..nervous...clumsy in some time.....but she was also strong...bubly..and fu loving...for only those who could know her closely......
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gunjan came running in mayank's room......
g-mayank.....mujhe tumhari help chahiye..
m-gunjan.....dont tell me tumhe phir se koi dress return karni hai?
g-please mayank......chalo na samrat bhi office chala gaya....aur adhi ka to tumhe pata hi hai.....
m-gunjan......this is the 3rd time in this week that you want to return a dress.....tum kharid ne ke time pe check nahi karsakti kya?.....
gunjan made a baby face and said...tum meri help nahi karoge?
m-dont make this puppy face ok....
gunjan looked down and started going when mayank said...
m-i am waiting for you in the car ...come soon
gunjan looke up and smilled
g-just two minute.........
mayank smilled at her silly act

mayank and gunjan being same age....and class mates became best friend...even he was the one who helped samrat and and gunjan in their love marriage.....gunjan was mayank's true friend...though sometime she irritates mayank with her silly acts but still mayank respects  her a lot......


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