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mn ff...Ehsaas (updated, last part) at page 127 (Page 121)

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 7:31am | IP Logged
part 11+ 12
awww Gunjan told everything to Samrat
becuz she called him back and Samrat waz mad at her for that
and then Mayu loved Nupur from when she waz 14 and he even hit the stupid guyzzz for her
awww cho cute
but Mayu waz mad @ G for telling S that
and Samrat sed sorry to him
and then MayUr at the res
and then Adhi comez n she waz going to tell Mayu
dat she loved him !!!
yeahhh she finally admited it
and lol mostly everyone knew that 
        Mayu loved n lovez Nupur even dia
but not N
anywayzz Nupur suggested Mayu to tell da girl he lovez
his feelingzz na
just can't wait to read the next part :
-Linu

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
part 13 !!!
wowoowow wat a partClap
in the ending Nupur sed he will stop the marriage and Mayu shocked confused scaredROFL
OMG I am so addicted to this FF lol
so Nupur finally tellz Mayu that she loves him
and he sed he doesn't
and then they both sad :(
n Adhi iz so mean
he knowz dat Mayu lovez Nupz
but he still want to marry her Angry
anywayzz I can't wait for the part when they r getting married so Mayu stopzz it LOL
-Linu

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part 14
OMGGG I just loved thiz part
after reading thizz!!
suddenly she stopped and called out mayank's name' "mayank?"'mayank also stopped' "haan bolo"' he said trying to avoid any eye contract with her' "suna tha humsfar uo hota hai jo apke saath chale aur apko thame rakhe'par mera humsfar to age nikal gaya na"'she said tauntingly' "aur jisne thama uo to ajnabi nikla'hai na?"' she said trying to look at his eyes'this time mayank looked at her..directly in her eyes' "jaruri nahi jo haath thame uo humsafar ho..kabhi kabhi kuch insaan ajnabi rahe uahi behtar hota hai"' nupur laughed a little' "tum bhool rahe ho mayank'ajnabi hi sabse bada humsafar hota hai"' "nahi nupur'har ajnabi humsafar nahi hota'saath chlana aur humsafar hona'bohot fark hai in do lafzo mai"'nupur's eyes got filled with tears' mayank kabhi aaknon aur palko ka ristha dekha hai?'mayank gave her a confused look'nupur smilled and said.. " agar palak kuch der na jhapke to aankh ro deti hai aur agar aakhon me kuch chala jaaye to palak tadap uthati hai'shayed humara rishta bhi kuch aisa hi hai'tabhi to jise mere liye rukhna tha..uo age nikal gaya'aur jise meri taraf dekhna tak nahi tha'uo chote se safar me haath tham raha hai"''mayank gave her a pitiful smile' "sapno se bahar niklo nupur'haqeekat ka samna karo"' nupur smiled' "same to you mr Sharma"' and she left inside leaving a helpless mayank behind'
 u r an amazinGGG writer!!!
feeling soo sad for MayUr na
I dunno why Mayu doesnt admit he lovez her !!!
I mean he knowzz she lovez him then y ruin her life marrying Adhi???
but amazing part loved it
-Linu

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part 15

ROFLROFLOMG I love diz part
so Mayur+Adhi in the restaurant and
I love how Nupur emotional blackmailing him to come and using phcology on him telling him dat if he doesnt come he is scared
 
and then in the restaurant Nupz jealouse when Aahna comezz
and then she getzz drunkzzz
and tellz Mayu to say ILY yo her
and Adhi sed he will
and he runzz away l;eaving poor Mayu to drop Nupz home
 
and the convozz they have in the carROFL
Nupzz iz like R u kidnapping me?? and we r going to run away n get married???ROFL
or
u r jealous of my intelligence
or
Mayu saying she haz none and he started to laughLOL
and then Nupur wanting ice cream
like a kid
!!!
and then Mayu getting her
and then raining
ufff
thiz partzzz just da bestest !!!!
and then da danceDay Dreaming
and then Mayu dropzz her to Diazz house
and she iz like
"bye bye bye bye"ROFL
Oh my god thiz part rockzzz:)
-Linu
 

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part 16, haha the last part
…and problem was actually in his door..!
LOL
so Dia told eveyrhting to Nupur !!
yeahhh love her 4 dat
n Nupur tellz her parentz dat she doesn twant ot marry Adhi
and her dad trusted her and sed ok
and then on the other hand
Mayank his new job, and his new flat, !!!!
hezz da bestest !!!
I love independent people
and awww him putting a pic of Nupz next to his bed !!
I just wish that he tellz her how much he lovez her !!!
anywayzz gr88 part
kant wait to know who iz @ da door lol Nupur Bhushan LOL
-Linu

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part 17
u know sachi mein Tasfuuu Nupzz character
she comezz in his house and tellz him
 "arey ajao andar!..tumhara bhi hai ghar..ajao ajao!"…
ROFLROFL
Tasfuuu
the entire part I waz laughing
for a sec I thought Nupur waz going to kill herself
and she grabbed the knife n told him dat she will kill him if he didnt say ILY
wat a girlROFL
and hez like kill me at least I'll be with afsaara
and he came closer to her
and took away knife from her pinned her to the wall
and then hezz like abb kya kiya ja i ye
and u already had ur chance to kill me
and Nupzz like I have a big heartROFL
cant actually believe I read all 17 partzz in just yesterday night, and right now.
I love love love thizz FF na sis
do contineu soon
and plezzz
zzz add me to ur pm listy
love yaHug
muahzz
-Linu
em dieing to read next part !!!
Mayu talking with Nupz parentz

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I just started reading your FF Tongue.
 
You are doing a fab job Thumbs Up
 
Please add me to your PM list.

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
KAHA THA KAHA THA BHOOL JAO TU YAAD DILA DAYNA MAGAR NHI
 
khair any ways
i nevr expected this moment will cum like this ...but surly it was a pleasent surprise...
her fears his frsutations,,
n i love the line..whispere in ear wali...too good
 
lovly update pls update soon
 
lov ya
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