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NEW FF RAAT KA NASHA page-18, part-31 (Page 4)

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
ohhhhCry
superbly written... plzz continue soon

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PART-7

In MM HOUSE: {Ahem Room}

In the room gopi bed par bihosh padi hui hai...Sab bahut pareshan huey padey hai....Ahem bi bahut pareshan hai.... Doctor gopi ko dekh raha hai...
Tabhi Doctor bahar aata hai... ahem doctor ke pass badta hai...

Ahem says " doctor ab gopi kaisi hai...."
Doctor ssys "dekhiye unhey shock laga hai..lakin mey aapko ek baat batana chahta ha hu... unhey kisi bi terha rulaana hoga...Tabhi woh normal ho paayegi.."

Sab pareshan ho jaatey hai ki gopi ko kaisey rulaaya jaaye.... Ahem thinks aur woh aagey badta hai....Kokila sees this...

Kokila says " ahem dikra kaha ja rahey ho..."
Ahem says "maa meri patni ko meri zarurat hai..."

Kokila listen this and feels happy....

In Jigar Room:

Rashi is sitting and think about her childhood time....Jab jeetu bhai usko choclate lekar detey they.... Usko dulaar kartey they....Ghumney jaatey they.... Rashi roney lagti hai...Tabhi jigar room mey aata hai...

Jigar says " rashi sambhalo apney aap ko....tum aisey kamzor padh jaaogi toh maa aur gopi bhabi ko kaun sambhalega....."
Rashi says Cry "jigar ji papa yu aisey humhey chodhkar chaley jaayengey...mainey toh kabhi sapney mey bi nahi socha tha....ab kya hoga jigar ji......{again she start cryingCryCryCry}... she hugs jigar....

In Ahem Room:
Ahem goes to gopi.... He tooks jeetu bhai photo with him.... Ahem sits besides gopi....He looks at gopi....she is sitting like a statue....{sad background music starts}.....

Ahem says " gopi mey jaanta hu ki tum apney mamaji ko bahut pyar karti thi woh tumarey liye sab kuch they.... hum sabney sapney mey bi nahi socha tha ki mamaji aisey chale jaayengey....."
Gopi listen this....

Ahem says " bachpan ke din hotey hi aisey hai...jab papa mujhe aur kinjal ko yuhi ghumatey they... humari sabhi zidh ko pura kartey they..."

Gopi ko dheerey dheerey rona aata hai.....

Ahem says " mamaji jaha kahi bi hai na woh waha sey tumhey dekh rahey hai.... aur tumari is haalat pe khudh ko doshi maan rahey hogey.... kya tum mamaji ki aatma ko dukh pahuchana chahti ho?.. toh aisey hi raho..... unhey tadpta dekhna chahti ho....toh raho aisa.....

Gopi shouts "nahiiiiiiiiiii... {start crying}....nahi ahem ji nahi aisa mat boliye mey mamaji ko kabhi dukh nahi pahuncha sakti...."

She took photo from ahem and sees it and cries........
Gopi says "bas ek baat ka dukh hamesha rahega...ki sab mujhe chodhkar chaley jaata hai....pehaley maa baba.... phir mamaji...mey kaisey jiungi..."

Ahem looks at gopi with teary eyes and hugs gopi tightly and gopi crys a lot from her heart....Cry

Ahem says "mey wada karta hu gopi tumhe chodhkar kahi nahi jaaunga.... tumhe woh har khushi dunga jiski tum haqdaar ho...."






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ohhh so heart wrenching and sweet... please continue

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged

please pretty please wit a cherry on top.....translate ur story in english  cos i am pretty sure that its interestin but can't read it as it is in hindi. thanx...plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssUnhappy

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by estty


please pretty please wit a cherry on top.....translate ur story in english cos i am pretty sure that its interestin but can't read it as it is in hindi. thanx...plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssUnhappy

I'll second that pleassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssse Cry

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PART-8

In MM house:

Ahem is consoling gopi that she should not cry otherwise she will become ill..But gopi is crying continuously… Ahem calls doctor to come and see her…

After 5 min

Doctor knocks the door… Ahem opens the door and take him in to gopi…Doctor examine gopi…Ahem looks at gopi… 

Ahem says "Is everything okay doctor?"

Doctor says "yes everything is okay, she is out of shock…the thing is only you have to do is that you have to take care of her as needs rest…"

Ahem says "ok doctor I will…"

Doctor leaves from there and kokila comes to ahem

Kokila says "son how is gopi vahu {daughter in law}?

Ahem says "yes mom she is allright now and doctor rest she needs a rest…"

Kokila says "yes son, make sure she get proper rest… be with her…."

Ahem says "yes mom you go and have rest…"

Kokila goes… ahem locks the door and comes to gopi..He lay down with her.. He hugs gopi.. Gopi tightly hugs ahem and sleep like a small child by holding her shirt…Ahem sees her and smile… and sleep…

 

In the morning:

Everyone is sitting in dining hall for breakfast… Rashi brings urmi for breakfast…Ahem comes alone and sits on chair…. Kokila and hetal sees this….

 Hetal says " ahem how is gopi vahu now…."                                           Ahem says "she is fine kaki…she is  sleeping…"                                    Kokila says " let here sleep, I will tell mani to take her breakfast in her room and I will  check she is having her breakfast properly or  not…."                              

 Ahem says "yes mom, I am going to office meanwhile take care of gopi…."                 

 Kokila says "yes son you don't worry…"                                                Ahem says "Jai Shri Krishna mom…."                                                Kokila nodes her head "jai shri Krishna…" ahem goes to office with chirag and jigar….                        

Rashi says "mom come on lets have breakfast now…."                                                                 

Urmi says "No rashi beta, I really don't have mood to eat now…. {she start crying…}                          

Rashi says "No mom I will not listen anything, you have to eat something…If you will not eat then I will also not eat…."                                                                                                                                                             

Hetal says "please urmiben eat something, see what happened we cannot change it, don't be sad you have to take care of urself, rashi and gopi now…"                                                                         

 Rashi says "please mom have something for me please…."                          Urmila nodes her head and eat something….

 Gopi wakes up nobody is there in there…                                            Gopi says "ahem ji ahem ji…"                                                          Nobody listen this and she thought herself…. May be ahem ji went to office…She goes in the bathroom for freshup….

After 10 min she came out from the bathroom… Gopi is back in light purple saree..her hair is wet…She is very upset and she sitting on the dressing table.. She puts bindi then sindoor… She is thinking what is left in her life now.. Everything is finishes now… for whom should I live now…. Suddenly somebody knocks the door…. She opens it.. She saw kokila with breakfast….

Gopi says "Mom you, you should call me instead of coming here…"          

Kokila says "don't say like this, now come and have your breakfast….."   

Gopi says "Mom Did ahem ji had her breakfast…."                           

Kokila says "don't worry about him, he had his breakfast, now you should have it….."                         

 Gopi says "mom I really don't want to it…"                                           Kokila says " gopi vahu "aa su chey{ what is this}… See don't play with your health… you know it will effect you, me, your papa, ahem everybody…Do you want to see like this…. I can understand how much you are going through, but we all there for you..Dont feel alone dear…{kokila hugs gopi}.. Gopi cries a lot….

 

In the evening"

Ahem comes from office, he looks for gopi…Rashi comes with a glass of water for everyone… Ahem have a glass of water and he goes to his room…Gopi is sitting in her room and she is lost in her thoughts…She sees ahem and stands there…

 Gopi smiles and says "ahem ji you..."                                                Ahem comes to gopi and sees her…He touches her hand…Gopi is nervous… Ahem take gopi close to her {gohem music start}…Gopi sees ahem…. Ahem sees gopi for a minute….                         

 Ahem says "gopi how you are feeling now, are you ok now?                      Gopi sees ahem and says "I am okay now, as far I have to accept the things whether I want it or not ahem ji…."                                              Ahem says "hmm life is very beautiful gopi just live with joy and excitement.. Don't be sad, if life has taken something from you it will give you also…don't regret ever that you have nothing…Ahem kisses her forehead and says "I come in moment okay…"                                          

Gopi sees this and she is shocked "is ahem ji changed or its my dream….?"

Gopi ask "should I bring green tea for you…"?                                     Ahem smiles says "no today I will drink tea in gopi style….."                   Gopi smiles and goes to make tea for gopi…                                                                          

 

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Edited by stary_kajal - 31 January 2011 at 11:25pm
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Ok! I am just catching up! two cute updates! very nice FF. Thanks for writing in English.

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