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NEW FF RAAT KA NASHA page-18, part-31 (Page 2)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
next updt soon plzzz..!!
nyc fic :)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Great update.. Aham is finally treating Gopi like a human bein.. I hope she is fine.. Update soon..

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Part-3

Scene start from road ahem gopi ko dekhkar chilata hai...sabhi log raastey mey khadey ho jaatey hai... Ahem gopi ke pass bhagtey bhagtey aata hai... Ahem gopi ko dekhta hai... woh behosh ho jaati hai.. Ahem gopi ko godh mey uthata hai... aur hospital lekar jaata hai....

In hospital doctor checks gopi... gopi abhi bi behoosh hai... Doctor room se bahar aata hai... doctor ahem ko dekhta hai... ahem doctor ke pass aata hai...

Ahem says "doc sab theek toh hai.. ab meri patni kaisi hai..."
Doctor says "everything is fine young man.. aapki patni bilkul theek hai.. bas zara si chot aayi hai.. mainey dawaiya likh di kuch hi dino mey theek ho jayegi.. i must say u r lucky...kafi bada accident ho sakta hai.. lakin ab sab theek hai...."
Ahem says "ji doctor.. kya mey gopi ko ghar le ja sakta hu...."
Doctir says "ji ha...."

Ahem room ke ander jaata hai... gopi ahem ko dekhti hai.. usey darr lagta hai.. woh ahem se zayada der nazrey nahi mila paati..ahem gopi ke pass jaata hai...

Ahem says "ab kaisi ho tum...."
Gopi sees ahem and says "ji theek hu..."
Ahem says "hmm ab ghar chaley...."
Gopi says "ji... chaliye...."

Ahem aur gopi ghar aatey hai.. Gopi sey chala nahi jaata hai... Kokila gopi ko dekhti hai aur uske pass aati hai....

Kokila says "aa su chey gopi bahu kya hua tum theek ho...."
Ahem says "woh mom rastey mey gopi gir gayi...aur usey thodi si chot aa gayi.."
Kokila says "kaha kidhar jayada chot nahi aayi na gop bahu... tum cahl abhi doctor ke pass abhi ke abhi...."
Gopi says "maaji mey theek hu bilkul... hum doctor ke yaha sey hi aa rahey hai... bas zara si lagi hai abhi kuch din mey theek ho jaayegi...."

Kokila gets worries and sees rashi sitting there.. 
Kokila says "theek hai gopi bahu jakar aaram karo, warna yaha aisey bahut sey log hai jo bina matlab ke aaram karney ka mauka dundhtey rehtey hai.... koi baat nahi aaj ka saara kaam rashi kar legi.. tum aaram karo..."

Rashi listen this and get annoyed and moves frm there....


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Wow! New story! Great updates! looking forward to the next already!

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
I loved it kajal.. I hope Aham takes good care of gopi now.. Please update soon..

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
read all three parts just now... amazing sequence... please continue soon

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loved it... want more

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PART-4

In MM house:

In the night gopi and ahem room"

Ahem says "gopi idher aao...."

Gopi says "ji...."

{gohem music starts} ahem usey pocket sey ek gift  nikaal kar deta hai... gopi us gift ki taraf dekhti hai aur phir ahem ki taraf....

Gopi says "ahem ji yeh kya hai...."

Ahem says "kholkar dekho isey...."

Gopi usey kholkar dekhti hai...Usmey ek diamond ring hoti hai... Ahem usey nikal kar apney hath mey leta hai.... Gopi ka hath pakdata hai aur usey pehna deta hai... aur uske hath pe kiss karta hai.....Gopi apni aankhey band kar leti hai...ahem uske pass aata hai...gopi apni aankhey kholti hai aur dekhti hai ahem uske pass hai...itney pass ki uski saans leney ki awaaz usey sunai de rahi hai...

Gopi aur ahem ek dusrey ko dekhtey rehtey hai... ahem gopi ko godh mey utha leta hai...{gohem BG music start}.. gopi ko sharam aati hai... lakin ahem usey dekhta rehta hai...usey bed pe lita deta hai...Gopi ahem ko dekhti hai...ahem gopi ko dekhta hai...Gopi ko thodi hichkhichat hoti hai....ahem uske pass aaney lagta hai.. waisey hi

 "tring tring tring tring...."{mobile ring}

ahem gopi ko dekhta hi rehta hai... Gopi ahem ki taraf dekhti hai aur ph ki tarf dekhti hai...

gopi says "ahem ji {polite voice} woh aapka phone. 

Ahem sees this and goes to pick up the call... Ahem talks...gopi sees and fall sleep...After cutting phone.. he looks a gopi..she looks so cute while sleeping and smiles.. and ahem also sleeps..

In the morning:

Gopi Mandir mey arti kar rahi hoti hai... Sabhi log mandir mey aarti ke liye ekthey hotey hai....Gopi sabko aarti deti hai... Ahem gives smile to gopi... Rashi sees this and become shock....

 

Kokila says "gopi beta kinjal ki sagai parso hai toh uske liye kuch sareeeya pasand karni hai...tum aur rashi uski bhabi ho...toh uske liye saariyaa pasand kar lena..."

Gopi says "ji maa ji..."

rashi says "ji kaki ji aap chinta mat kijiye hum kinjal ben ke liye bahut achi aur sunder saree pasand karengey...kyu gopi..."

Kokila says "gopi bahu toh apna kaam theek sey kar legi..laikin yaad rahey tum apna kaam theek sey karna....koi gadbadi nahi honi chahiye...samaj gayi na..."

Rashi gives fake smiles... Gopi also sees kokila...Kokila goes on...

Achank sey rashi ka phone ring karta hai... Rashi phone uthati hai...Urmila ben ka phone aata hai...

Rashi says "arey mumi aap, jai sri krishan aap is waqt mey abhi aapko hi yaad kar rahi thi...kaisi hai..."

Urmilaben phone pe rotey huey...uski siskiyo ki awaaz phone pe aati hai...Rashi get worried..

Rashi says "mumi aap ro rahi hai...kya hua mumi sab theek toh hai na...boliye na mumi...kya hua...."

Urmilaben " rashi beta terey papa ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai... tu jaldi sey jigar ko lekar hospital aa jaa...."

Rashi gets shocked to listen thisShocked...

Rashi says "papa...kya hua papa ko....aap mujhe ab phone kar rahi hai..mey bas abhi aa rahi hu..."

rashi bhagi bhagi hetal ke paas jaati hai aur usey sab batati hai...Hetal gets shockedShocked... Shocked Hetal tells jigar and gopi also listen this...

Gopi says "rashi behan mamji ko kya hua..woh theek toh hai na...mey bi aapke sath chalti hu..."

rashi says "ha tu chal merey sath gopi..."

Hetal says "ha beta tum dono jao aur ha jigar bi aa raha hai..ghar pe koi nahi mey jigar ke papa ke sath hospital aati hu..bas kokila aa jaye...aur ha chinta mat karna beta sab theek ho jayega..."

Rashi says "ji mummy ji..."

rashi, gopi aur jigar hospital jaatey hai...urmila ben hospital mey ICU ke pass khadi hoti hai... aur ro rahi hoti hai..rashi, gopi aur jigar reception sey kamra puch kar bhaagey bhaagey aatey hai....

Rashi says "mummy papa kaisey hai ab....kya kaha doctor ney..."

UrmilaCry says " kya batau dikra sab theek tha achank sey inke siney mey dard utha aur mey inhey hospital lekar aayi doctor ney kaha ki heart attack hai..."

Rashi, gopi aur jogar gets shockedShocked....

In the ICU:

jeetu bhai ko oxygen mask laga hota hai..rashi aur gopi unhey ICU ke mirror sey dekhtey hai..Both of them crying...Doctor bahar aatey hai... Jigar doctor ke pass jaata hai...

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