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NEW FF RAAT KA NASHA page-18, part-31 (Page 10)

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haila!!!!.....that kitchen scene was soooooooooooo cute n romanticDay Dreaming......i'm in love with ahem....
ur updates are a real treatSmile....continue fast......

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Am alrready in lala land ;) :D

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please continue. i think you need to proofread it before uploading because there are some places where you have done some naming mistakes. please dont mind. thanks.

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Day DreamingI am in La La Land, call me later

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omg cant wait for the next part plz update soon

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thanks all of you and i will take care of naming and all and thanks for your support.......


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Next part-21

Recap : KC is on! gohem breaks each others fast.

STORY CONTINUES FROM YESTERDAY...

Jigar informs everyone that ahem was fasting and now he is breaking his fast with gopi's hands. Ahem looks at jigar angrily but then blushes. Hetal  and kokila are happy that ahem Kept a fast for his dear wife. Everyone else laughs at jigar's statement and blesses gohem.

After the KC pooja, everyone goes to the hall to enjoy themselves. Gopi is with kokila, rashi is with hetal and kinjal with her saas and some women sitting on the floor talking while ahem is with jigar and some other boys talking and take glances at her every second (loool).

*Aakhon ki gustakiyaan maaf ho* (Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam) song comes on!!

ahem follows gopi everywhere and tries holding her waist behind a pillar when some girls pull gopi with them leaving ahem longing for her. gopi runs away with the girls and gives a naughty wink to ahem which makes him drool over her.

(Song still playing) gopi sitting on the floor with the girls and talking (but the talk is muted as the song is playing) and ahem comes sit behind her touching her hands and hair. She pushes him with her elbow without any1 noticing but he grabs her waist and holds onto her hands. Hetal comes and takes gopi with her and ahem sits there alone feeling defeated. Then he sees gopi going to the terrace alone and follows her!

On the terrace, gopi is taking the taali which has flowers in there, she turns to find ahem. He comes towards her, near her, more near till she could feel his breath on her face and he takes the taali away. *kaajal ka ek til tumhare labon pe lagadoon(this is the lyrics of the song)* ahem takes gopi's kajals from her eyes with his fingers and puts them on her lips and tries to kiss her but she runs to the swing and sits on it. He walks towards her slowly, sits with her and they sit in each others arm. (its those big swings that 4 people can sit on & its white decorated with flowers). They start lipsing the song as though they are singing it and ahem kisses gopi's neck and eyes. She holds onto him tightly and he grabs her hands. She stands up and turns to him and sings "yeh zindagi aapki hi amaanat rahegi, dil mein sada aapki mohabbat rahegi, in saason ko aapki zaroorat rahegi!" (Song lyrics) runs to him and hugs him. He hugs her tightly and closes his eyes while kissing her head.

*Song Finishes*

They come to their senses when kokila calls for gopi; she breaks the hug, grabs the taali and runs downstairs. Ahem looks at her and sigh (Hayyeee). He also goes downstairs, he walks towards jigar but his eyes looks for gopi. Him and jigar talking when gopi comes there and gives kokila the taali and she goes with the women (random people in Patil Niwas for KC loool).

They pooja and party is finished and every1 leaving modi mansion. They all bid goodbye to gohem, raaji {raashi and jigar},.. basically to every1.

Every1 goes to their room to sleep and Voila its morning time already (time goes fast in MM).

ahem in the hall and gopi comes with Tea, She serves him and just then ahem gets a call. gopi goes in kitchen. Some office workers comes there to meet ahem. Gopi comes with tea and pakoras and greets them. Ahem introduce gopi as Gopi ahem modi, Meri Patni! (someone's proud!)

The men greets her and the 2 young boys (not exactly boys but they are young maybe gopi's age) checks out gopi. gopi feels uncomfortable and goes from there. ahem sees this and feels jealous and tries change the conversation. But his blood still boiling, he remembers  gopi's words that she doesn't like him when he is angry so he decided not to create a drama in MM mansion but if he sees him on the road he will kill him right there. ahem excuses himself and goes to the kitchen where gopi is and tells her not to come out until those people are gone. gopi teases him and tells him he jealous but he denies it and says he doesn't like people looking at his wife and holds her hands. gopi tells him she doesn't care about anyone else, she's lucky to have him as her husband, he kisses her forehead and goes back to the hall.

ahem have some conversation with them and those people leave. He comes to the kitchen to look for gopi but doesn't see her; he gets worried .He goes outside and gopi is putting clothes to dry and humming. Ahem comes from behind and hugs her, she tells him to go as she has lots of work to do. Just then jigar comes there and ahem lets go of gopi. They both turn towards jigar and ask him what happened? jigar tells ahem he's going to office and ahem should come too. gopi tells ahem to go but come back quick. ahem smiles and was about to walk away but take a last glimpse of gopi who is about to faint. ahem gets the shock of his life and holds her. Jigar also runs towards gopi who is in ahem arm unconscious. Ahem shouting gopi's name worriedly, while jigar runs inside to call every1. kokila,hetal, rashi. urmila comes there running to see ahem holding unconscious gopi. jigar is on the phone calling doctor while ahem carries gopi to the room.

 

 Lool thats it for today.. Hope you liked it and please comment.

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
I am guessing a Ahem junior or Gopi junior on the way LOL, loved the update, you keep sending me to LA LA Land, loved the song.

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