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NEW FF RAAT KA NASHA page-18, part-31

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Hey friends i m starting second new ff with new story line up... here everything is same... as umang didnt accept  kinjal... Kokila is in shock as kinjal has destroyed everything... Ahem is changing towards gopi as she has taken care of kokila very much these days... Kokila is not in position to handle things... so gopi- hetal - rashi are taking care of things...

Hope you all will like the FF plz do comments my frnds for goahem...


Edited by stary_kajal - 30 November 2011 at 1:33am

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
hmmm... one more treat... ohhh i do love treats...
please start it soon
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In MM Kokila is sitting and taking breakfast..As She don't speak to anybody now accept ahem'. Hetal-rashi and gopi is taking care of everything'. Hetal is very worried about kokila as she don't speak at all' Rashi is happy' Gopi is as ususual silent and she prays to kanhaji everyday for kokila and ahem'. Ahem is now normal but worried about his mom' His way of behaving is changed towards Gopi'..

Part-1

Ahem is busy in going to office' He is wearing shirt' lakin uska button tut jaata hai' who idher udher dekhta hai..... No one is here and there' Tabhi gopi aati hai' ahem looks at her'

  Ahem says"suno'.."                                                              

  Gopi sees and says "ji''"                                                        

 Ahem says "who mera shirt ka button tut gaya hai'..tum sil dogi kya..."                                                               

Gopi goes to almirah and take out thread and needle box' she comes to ahem' and start attaching button'.Her hand is shacking'while ahem is looking at her'. Gopi come little bit close to ahem as she could not attach the button' gopi ke baalo ki latey usey pareshan ka rahi hoti hai'. Gopi thoda uncomfortable feel kar rahi hoti hai' toh ahem uski latey side karta hai {gohem music start)''

Gopi looks at ahem' ahem smiles'.. who sharma ke waha sey bhaag jaati hai' ahem glares at her'

Kokila is sitting in her room thinking about how she has to face insult in front of others' Her eyes becomes teary and then she look at photo of ahem and gopi' She thinks "merey betey ki bi kya zindagi hai..itni achi bahu hai'lakin ahem usey dekhta nahi'.  Mey kya karu Thakur ji''"

Rashi talking to her mom  and making fun of kokila' Kokila crossing from her room.. she hear this'

Rashi saying to urmilaben "arey mummy mazaa aagaya, us kaagadi kit oh bolti band ho gayi acha jaan chute'uski patar patar sunkar  toh mera dimag ghumta rehta hai'..

Kokila becomes shocked to listen this' She becomes very angry... She goes from there.... Hetal is cooking there and kokila comes there... Hetal sees kokila...

Mani comes there and says to hetal "mota bhabi woh baa ki dawaayiya khatam ho gayi hai... ahem bhai sey kehkar mangwa dijye na...."

Hetal says "theek hai my mangwa deti hu... she calls "gopi....gopi bahu...." Hetal makes some list and says to gopi "gopi nahi jigar ghar pe nahi hai aur yeh dawaaiya khatam ho gayi hai...tum ahem ko keh dogi na ki zara dawaiya le aaye..."

Gopi takes list and noda her head.....

Precap" gopi saves ahem..."

rashi and kokila argument....


SO frnds if you like it please dont forget to click "press" and lots and lots comments... i am waiting for your comments.......


 

 

 

 

 



Edited by stary_kajal - 11 January 2011 at 12:02am

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
that was a nice one! continue soon! Thumbs Up
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Part-2

Gopi goes to ahem and says that hetal kaki had said to bring the medicines... Ahem says "ok...."
Ahem thinks... Gopi sees this and moves on...
Ahem says "gopi suno... zara ruko...kya tum merey sath chalogi...dawaiya leney.."
Gopi sees him and nodes her head....
Ahem says "theek hai toh jao tayaar ho jao...."
Gopi says "ok...."

Gopi aur ahem tayar hokar aatey hai...Kokila is sitting and sees them...
Ahem says "maa woh hum baa ki dawayi leney ja rahey hai.... aapko kuch chahiye kya...."
Kokila says "nahi dikara tum log jao... aur ha jaldi aa jaana...."

In the meantime rashi comes there and kokila sees her... rashi sees gopi and ahem....
Rashi says "arey gopi kaha ja rahi hai...."
Gopi says "woh rashi ben hum log baa ki dawaiyaa leney ja rahey hai....aapko kuch chahiye...."
Rashi laughsLOL.....
Rashi says "tu ja rahi hai baa ki dawaiyaa leney jisey ABCD padhni nahi aati hai woh english mey dawaiyaa kaisey padegi....."

Ahem and kokila sees rashi with anger....
Rashi says "arey mey toh bas keh rahi thi ki kahi gopi koi galat dawai naa lee aaye....."
kokila says "uski fikar karney ki zarurat nahi hai....jao ahem dikra gopi bahu..."
Ahem says "ji mom..."

Ahem and gopi goes and kokila sees rashi with anger...
Kokila says " rashi tumhe zara bi akal hai ki nahi...bala apni sagi behan ka mazak koi banata hai uski anpadhta pe... tumari apni behan hai na ki nahi...."
Rashi darr jaati hai aur rone ka natak karti hai...
Rashi says "ji kaki ji lakin mainey toh baa ki tabiyat dhyan mey rakhety huey kaha tha... agar gopi ki galat dawaiyee le aati toh aap log hi usey boltey...."
Kokila says " ahem hai uske sath...."

Hetal and parag comes there...
Hetal says " kya hogaya kokila...."
kokila says "dekhiye mota bhabi aap apni bahu ko samjha kar rakhiye ki meri gopi bahu ki bi izzat hai...usey bi utna hi samaan aur izzat milni chahiye jitni rashi ko milti hai... maana ki woh anpadh hai lakin usey uske maa baba ne usey bahut achey sanskaar diye hai....jo ki rashi mey toh hai hi nahi.... aur agar rashi ne aisi koi bi harkat ki hai...toh mey bhul jaungi ki tum is ghar ki bahu ho...."
Rashi, hetal and parag sees kokila...
kokila goes from their...in fuming.....

Ahem and gopi are on car... Ahem stops car in the parking.... 
Ahem says "gopi dukaan waha par hai.. toh sadak cross karni hogi... tum sath chalogi...."
Gopi says "ji..mey aati hu aapke sath..."

Ahem sadak cross kar raha hota hai... gopi pichey reh jaati hai... ahem pichey dekhta hai... achanak se sammney se ek truck aata hai... Gopi truck ko dekhti hai... woh chilati hai..."ahem ji...." Ahem kuch sunai deta hai traffic ke shor mey... gopi ahem ki taraf bhagti hai... ahem usey dekhta hai... {camera ahem ki taraf focus hota hai aur gopi ki taraf....} Gopi ahem ki taraf badti hai... ahem gopi ko dekhta hai....gopi ahem ko dakha deti hai.. ahem gir jaata hai... aur scene truck aur gopi....

ahem chilata hai "gopiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii"

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
hello...its me da african agen....i c dat u r starting a new ff..pls i would really love to go along wit dis 1 so pls if u could translate to english i would love it. thanx.....will b waiting 
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