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QSS THREAD # 4, part 194 on pg 150 on 26-5-11 (Page 47)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolvini4u

Hey Di ! Hug

Gosh ! this part made me wonder if u r a Ben 10 fan? LOL U knw i have never watched it so let alone knwing abt the characters kevin n all... I actually had to google it ! ROFL
The description of the party was mind blowing .. from where do u get such lovely innovative ideas from ? yaar aapko theme parties ki itni achi knowledge h..u seem to be quite a pro at it .. if anytime, m having some prob abt celebrations... m really coming to you.. Blushing

I was actually dreaming to get into such a party .. LOL... no wonder Akshat wud be spell bound by it! Love the way Armaan uses his wittiness always (like he did in the room!) and this little master! ufff !..he ll never let his bro remain in peace ..always after his favs .. LOL ..such a notorious being !

looking forward to the next part...cnt soon  !

Love
Vini

P.S:  m glad u liked my previous comment ..u so rightly deserve the applauds n praises for ur work!!Big smile


Your in depth comment needs to be answered likewise. The real life Akshat, my neighbour, on whom I have placed this character is a cute eight year old crazily in love with Ben 10. Like you I too googled and found out details about this cartoon character. And what I didn't know my knowledgeable neighbour explained to me.
Talking about themem parties you can google everything from a to z. only you need to spend so much time on it. That's why I felt so bad when the pictures wouldn't come because they were cho cute and i'd taken lot of pains cropping them etc. Maybe i'll just post the urls so that those who wish can see them.
As for coming to me for any help, you are most welcome. Thanks for the wonderful comments. love, shardha

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Originally posted by repercussion

Awesome...alas...you have that talent that a post tagged with ur name in it is inevitably amazing!  Quite a Ben-10 fan you are, eh? lol I love all of akshat's birthdays...I mean the first one that got his parents united and Abhi finally accepting his flaws...giving the title of dad to Armaan...It all so crystal clear in my head although it's been more than a year since I read it! And this one was so cute...what's so special about you is...that you seem to capture the slightest of moments from our daily lives and erect them with so much eloquence and significance...that I cant help admiring your work...no errors...no grammar flaws...it's just so perfect. Your descriptions about the , "The chotu" stealing the show from Akshat...and the green gooey J feelings lol...like all of us have atleast once felt jealous of our younger siblings for taking away "the apple of our parents' eyes" tag! And poor thing, Akshat's cake gets into the little rascal's hands yet again!!lol...I could toally imagine Armaan  doing a "Kevin" pose and commenting on Riddhima's distaste towards fun and frolic lol! But I long to read or rather see her wearing a salwar suit or a chunnidaar lol...it's just that it's been a long time...ever since their waterfall scenes in QSS I and a bit here and there! They have grown upto be awesome parents but seems like the kids are all their world is gonna be abt...Armaan tries to ease it out but Riddhima just wouldn't let go...nonetheless...that's how it goes once you have two kids in ur plate ...and the reality portrayed is just as beautiful. What's still the best part is...that you never overdo romantic interludes....I guess that's enough bak-bak for a day lol...it's all over the place and I have no idea what I'm trying to put forth but I guess all I can say I cn never get enough of your writing...Thnx fr the pm...keep writing and Have a great day! 


Just like we all wait for our favourite ff updates, I eagerly await the reader's comments. And when I see a long one posted it's more thrilling than ever. The joy in knowing that this reader has read my ff with so much concentration is in itself mindblowing. As i've explained above I'm no more a ben10 fan than any of you here.The credit for no grammatical flaws can perhaps go to the fact that I'm a teacher, so I can't overlook that. As for other errrors or bloopers, i read and re-read the part 3-4 times before I post it. But even then I find one or two when I read them after months.
Armaan bought quite a few suits for her when she was pregnant and even later when she worked at the clinic. As she wears salwar suit on a daily basis to work I thought for the special ocassions, it should be a saree, as that my favourite dress too.
Regarding romantic interludes I've said earlier I'm not very good with words there. In our day to day routine hot romance doesn't last long with so much of stress around. It's only when we take a break or make special efforts for it that it's feasible.
And even then I believe in leaving more to the readers imagination than being very explicit. Last but not the least, thanks for the lenghty comment, I just loved it. It was no bakbak. Love, shardha
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Hi friends,
Thanks to
meow23  I've added some pics to part 162, take a look.
Love, ssh57


Edited by ssh57 - 02 March 2011 at 4:10am
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Hey Shardha.. so sorry for my long absence.. loved the way you resolved the Kartik issue.. though i know there's more to come.. 
and then Akshat's birthday.. Ben10 is it?.. damn! i am so not up to date with the latest cartoons.. humare time pe Flintstones and Scooby-Doo tha... Jaane kahan gaye woh din?.. lol!!..LOL ok i should stop talking like i am 80 years old and tell you how amazing the update was.. i dont know if i can express it correctly, but you give us the actual feel of the events that go around the Malliks in their lives.. and this one was another added to that list.. i loved the way Armaan made efforts to make his son's birthday memorable.. Inspite of their busy and stressful lives both Riddhima and especially Armaan keep an account of every little thing that involves their children or family.. like Armaan dressing up as one of the characters of his favorite cartoon show and all.. he's the awesomest dad ever..Heart
again i love the youngest Malik and his antics.. ab cake pada hai toh why should he stay away from it.. cake khane ke liye hi toh hota hai.. someone should appreciate it properly right!!..lol!..Evil Smile 
but coming back to the birthday boy..  Akshat is probably the best kid on earth.. he deserves every bit of this happiness and all the love from his dad.. he does feel bad that he did not have his dad for the first few years of his life.. and that will probably always remain.. but with a superdad like Armaan, i think those feelings will always take a backseat.. coz your Armaan has this way of making everyone feel so special.. 
oh i forgot to mention the way he saves the day when Ani is throwing a tantrum about the attention his mamma was showering on his anna.. lol!.. 
so you know i enjoyed Akshat's birthday a lot.. just as much as he did..
what next?? ..Smile


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