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*SIGH*....I HATE you 😍 ...... it was a lovely post dear🤗.... u too made me crave for ANGINI even MORE 😭...... Edited by Rehana86 - 13 years ago

Great post Anmol2👏.Enjoyed reading😃.Continue writing more.😃

@rehana...woah that was a good one.👏

Originally posted by: savee_k

@rehana...woah that was a good one.👏

 awww thnx dii 😳

aap toh chupee rustom nikhle...aap bhi shayaar ho..😊

 no, seriously.....it's my second time...i tried my first one with premeer n then this one....😳....actually, i always mess up with the gender parts,😆.....that's why i barely use hindi in fictions 😳

sami toh lajawaab hein shayeree mein..

 haven't read her ones but i'm sure she is talented 😃

anmol2 too is very good in her shayarees..the post itself proves it...

 no second thot😃

aur list aap ka naam bhi hein..

 hoye! me is honoured 😳

really loved wat you said for anmol to ragini esp the last two lines".phir bhi intezaar kareinge sirf aap ke liye"..this showed his patience to wait for ragini to reciprocate to his love and he did wait for 7 yrs..

 i know eh.... mera bachcha kept on waiting till the end 😒

well keep it up...👍🏼

 once again thanks and lets see how long i can keep it up 😛

 

Originally posted by: Rehana86

*SIGH*....I HATE you 😍 ...... it was a lovely post dear🤗.... u too made me crave for ANGINI even MORE 😭......

From Anmol to Ragini ....

Humne toh thora sa pyaar hi manga tha aapse,

Aapne toh humey gum bhi nahin diye,

Chaliye koi baat nahin, dil toh hai hi tootne ke liye

Par phir bhi hum karenge intezaar, sirf aap ke liye....

 

sorry if i made any mistake.... my mother tongue is neither Hindi nor Urdu but try karne mein kya harz hay 😉

Wah wah kya kehna !!! 👏👏👏👏

Its nice to hear beautiful poetry from many here !!😊

Intezaar sirf aap ke liye
I can imagine ur betu's state !!😳

Originally posted by: shanti05

Wah wah kya kehna !!! 👏👏👏👏
aww thanks dii😳
Its nice to hear beautiful poetry from many here !!😊
dekhlo !! wut my betu and bahu are making me do now..... poetry, the only thing I run away from 😳
Intezaar sirf aap ke liye
I can imagine ur betu's state !!
tell me abt it di..... and I badly want B2 to be back with Angini

thank all of u but i am not a great poet nor poetry is my passion but i only like that poetry which has some meaning in itself i also write poems and poetry sometime today a new verse had come in my mind which i want to share with you

..anmol12 i need a help..... i am very sad😭  i don't know much Hindi.... soo can u pleas translate it in eiglish..... can u???????? 

Originally posted by: zee10

..anmol12 i need a help..... i am very sad😭  i don't know much Hindi.... soo can u pleas translate it in eiglish..... can u???????? 

yes it is Edited by anmol2 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anmol2

yes it is

 

             in a desert a traveller remembers the star to take right direction

          similarly      when      i        walk      i      rememer       your       face

          it    is   your     nature    that    you     do    forget        the           love

          whoever    called    me    with    a    smile    i     remember     him

 

 

dear zee 10 i dont really know that u cant understand urdu no i will epecially translate my verse in english 4 u 😳

Isha very nice I loved the English translation also !!
You seem to be well versatile with literature !