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FF: Pyaar Ki Manzil (Part 50 & Epi Pg 158) 04/06 (Page 94)

LadyArwen Goldie
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
if you don't mind my saying this... please try to put in more intensity and passion and love to this pure relation... it does not mean put in deepening of relation scene but DEEPENING OF LOVE scenes... i feel that their relation is somewhat superficial (no offence), show that their love is stronger than stone and eternal... somehow i feel that their love is not depicted, but the strength of their relation is depicted (sorry narrated) very very nicely...

Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
nice part. loved it.
update soon.
wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
awsome update..
supreb
continue soon..
cute-aly IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
addd me in pm list




gangesegb IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
lovely update........
preethia IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
loved the update...........................
finally maan reacted for her ilu..............
maan j of the ring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gehana Senior Member
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Such a lovely ff.
keep me posted with a PM
syedah Groupbie
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Just read ur FF..

simple amazing..

keep writing...:)

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