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FF: Pyaar Ki Manzil (Part 50 & Epi Pg 158) 04/06 (Page 117)

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Part 37

The following morning……. Both were cuddled in bed!!! Neither of them wanted to wake up… they were both sleeping peacefully and they were comfortable!!! Maan had woken up…. And he saw that Geet was holding onto him and he was smiling at her!! he had turned to see the time and wen he looked it was 830!!! Geet stirred a little bit…. And she moved a little bit away from him!! she opened her eyes and saw Maan looking at her!!!

Geet: good morning!!!

Maan: And a very good morning to you to!!!

He had kissed her!!! ..

Geet: so what are we going to do today?

Maan: who says we have to do anything today? lets jus stay in here…

And he came closer to her!

Geet: No!!! we are not going to stay in here!!!!…. lets get up!!!!

Maan: aww Geet! Ur so boring!!!

Geet: How am I boring?

Maan: becuz…..

Geet: ur the one that doesn't want to go anywhere!!!

Maan: So.. I have better things in mind!!!

Geet: not going to work!! sorry!!!!!

Maan: Man!!! I thought I had a chance!!

Geet: U don't!!!…

They spent the next 15 mins… jus lying there… and talking…. Afterwards they had both gotten ready!! When Geet was in the shower…… Maan had gone out and gotten out and he had left the room!!….. he had taken the shower 1st!! and he was gone!!…… she had come out of the shower… and threw the towel on the bed…… she was looking around and there was no Maan!!!… she was thinking where he was gone!!!

She thought that he had stepped out for a min and would be back!!… she got ready…. And she was waiting for Maan!!! But he never came!!!…
There was a knock on the door… she thought it was Maan so she opened the door… but it wasn't him it was the gals!

Geet: what are you guys doing here??

Sapna: arre Geet.. what are you doing?? Lets go!!

Geet: but I am waiting for Maan!! I don't know where he went! I was in the shower and then he was gone!

Sapna: he's with the guys!!

Geet: Guys?? But why?

Sapna: don't know! I think they are gonna spend the day together!!!

Geet wanted to actually spend the day alone with him!! but that wasn't even possible!!!!

Geet: he didn't even tell me!!

Sapna: sanjay called him and he came!!!! But for us… we are gonna be going to the spa that's here and massages!!!

Geet: U guys go!! I don't wanna!!

Sapna: Oh no!! what are you gonna be doing here??

Geet: I will be fine!

Sapna: Nope not happening!! Ur coming and besides…. If the guys are gonna have some fun.. then so will we!! Come on!!

Geet had got what she wanted…. And she left the room and she was with the gals she had tried to call Maan but he wasn't picking up! With all the noise that was there could he possibly even here the phone?! she was getting a little upset over this…. He didn't even tell her!!!

The gals were exploring the cruise before going for their spa treatment and massage….. Geet was still thinking about Maan!! She kept on calling him but no use!! He wasn't answering! Sapna had taken away her phone!

Geet: Hey..

Sapna: no hey!!…. we are here to have fun!!!! Stop worrying about ur hubby!!!! We arent worried for them!!!! So neither should u!!

Geet: yeah..but..

Sapna: No buts!!! Come on!!

It was around 1 and they had gone!!!!… they had gone to the place….they had gotten facial done…they went in a mud bath…..n relaxed….. and then they got body massages!!!!…

It was 4 hours of fun!!! And it felt so nice and relaxing!!!………it was nearly 5 wen they had come out from there!!!! They all felt really good!!!! they didn't want to end actually!!!!!! But it had to!!! wen they came out of there… there was a guy giving out cards….. and sapna had taken it!!!

Sapna: what is this???

Guy: these are invites!!!

Sapna: for what?

Guy: well last night… it was salsa night!! But 2nite.. it's a special occasion actually!!! It's a lovers night theme!!!!!….just dress up really nice…. And come with ur hubbies!!! But that's if u guys are married!!!

Sapna: yes we are!

Guy: perfect!!! It starts at 8!! Don't be late!!

Sapna: aww how sweet!!!! Lets tell the guys!!! sounds like fun!!!

Wen she had said that.. Geet was looking at her! she was upset at Maan!!!…. no phone call no nothing! after she was in the shower…. She hadn't seen him all day!!!!!! Sapna had called sanjay…. And she told him!!!!

Sapna: WHAT???? But why??… ….ugh!!! you cant do this!!!!!

Geet: what happened???

Sapna: they arent coming!!!

Geet: why?

Sapna: they are in the casino!!!! They are gonna be there all night!!!!!!

Geet: then no point of us going!!!

Sapna: uhh.. excuse me!! I don't care! I am going!!

Pooja: yeah!! If they don't wanna come its their loss!!!!

Sapna: thank u!!

Geet: but its for couples!!

Pooja: arre will be each others dates!!!

Geet: nah! U guys go not me!!

Sapna: ur so boring Geet!!!! Since morning u wanted to be in ur room!!! I mean ur here make the most of it u cant see all of this from inside ur room!!!!!!!!

They had forced Geet to go!!….. they all went back to their rooms to get ready!!… she had decided to call him again!! but he didn't pick up his call!!! She was getting upset over this! She had thrown her phone on her bed…. And she wanted to cry!!!!

Geet: wait til I see him!! I wont talk to him!!!!!!!

She had gotten ready!!!… she had did her hair in curls… and she had make up on…… and she was ready!!!

She had gone to sapna's room and she was helping her pin her sari!!!….. sapna was loving how Geet was looking!! She was looking really good!!!!!!!

Sapna: Geet I am jealous of ur sari!!!!

Geet: arre I didn't want to wear it!!!

Sapna: why not?

Geet: becuz!!! I mean its such a see through!!!

Sapna: who cares!!!! Man… the guys are missing out!! they will feel bad that they didn't come!!

And with that said.. Geet was sad again!! No Maan!!!!!….. all the gals were ready! They were all looking good!!…. they had arrived there… and it was sooo nicely decorated!!!!! The theme was red pink and white!!!..  It seemed like it was Valentine's Day all over again!! even though…. Its long before v-day!!!!!!

The gals were looking at the hall!!

Sapna: wow!! this is soo nice!!!!!!!

Pooja: U bet it is!!.. I mean wow!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet: but how come no one is here?? Where is everyone??

Guy: U guys are the 1st ones!!!!!

Geet: 1st ones??

Guy: Yes!! No one has come yet!!…..

Geet: Oh okay!!

The gals were walking around!!!!……the guy had gone to the door… and he had closed it!!!…..

Sapna: why are you closing it??

Guy: becuz!! U guys are 1st…..

Sapna: and?

Guy: U guys are last!!!!

Sapna: Okay?!

Geet had no idea what was going on!!… she was looking at the guy…. He was sure acting weird!! And then… wen she had turned back…. The gals were missing too!!!!…

Geet: where did they go??

She was left all alone…. In the hall with no one!!!

Geet: where are you guys?

She was shouting but no one was there!!!!! And then the lights had gone out!!! it was dark!!!! Geet stood there… she was standing still!!!.. then the light was only focusing on her!!!…. she had covered her eyes… as it was a little too bright!!………

Then all of a sudden…. She had heard music……… and then… she heard…

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

plz comment!Embarrassed

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jnawaz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
me me me!! *woot woot*

im waiting for you call so i thought id comment...he not good...the guys just totally ditched the ladies...i say the ladies should have taken the credit cards of their hubbies and gone on a shopping spree or least they got massages and stuff.....aab aayega sure the ladies are looking sexy!

ps: i love that its raining!!

Edited by jnawaz - 07 March 2011 at 6:36pm
maaneetkimeet Goldie

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lovley update 
Rohini20 Goldie

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woo...luved the i think maan had planned something...update soon...can't wait..!!Smile


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awesome update guli

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