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FF: Pyaar Ki Manzil (Part 50 & Epi Pg 158) 04/06 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guli..
that was awesome..šŸ˜Š
sahil is soooo cute...
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww great updatešŸ˜ƒšŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have been a silent reader to ur ff...
bt couldnt control myself from commenting..
coz i need to keep track of it...coz i wont b getting any pm's for it..lolšŸ˜‰
i must say its awesome n very different than the others..
plz continue ur superb writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks alot please update soon:)
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loved the update.........maaneet has great understanding... absolutely amazing relationship.... cant wait for them to fall in love with each other.... waiting for next update... pls cont soon....
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lovely my dear pls more update so interesting love sahil so cute pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Part 10

Geet was looking at him when he had said thatā€¦. It was not a problem at allā€¦.

Maan: You go and change ur clothesā€¦. And I will apply the cream on youā€¦..

Geet: I already did itā€¦ā€¦. You don't have too..

Maan: Okay that's fineā€¦ā€¦. Just go and change your clothesā€¦..

She had gone and she changed her clothesā€¦. She came on the bedā€¦ Maan had changed outside while Geet was insideā€¦. Maan had moved Sahil a little bit towards his side so Geet wouldn't be uncomfortableā€¦ā€¦..

Geet had laid downā€¦ Maan turned off the lights and once his head hit the pillow he was knocked outā€¦ he was so tiredā€¦. Geet couldn't sleepā€¦.she had looked overā€¦ and looking at Maanā€¦. She had to get use to this lifeā€¦. But it was hardā€¦ was it hard?  Or else was she holding herself back from having a good life?? No one was going to harm her.. with the security outside of this house.. she knew she was safeā€¦.thinking and thinking about itā€¦. She had drifted off to sleepā€¦..

2 weeks laterā€¦.

Geet's skin had started peelingā€¦ it was good so that way new skin could formā€¦.. it looked pretty good.. yet looked badā€¦ but for the most part it was goodā€¦ā€¦. Geet was helping more with Sahilā€¦. He was somethingā€¦ he was too much to handleā€¦ Meera had to start taking him to day care.. but he was earlyā€¦.. he still had 5 months to go before she can put him inā€¦

Her more focus on Anuā€¦ as she was littleā€¦but Sahil didn't understandā€¦.. he thought that Anu was taking Meera away from himā€¦ā€¦.

Meera had taken Geet to Khurana Constructions (KC)ā€¦.this was the 1st time ever that she had come.. after all she had to see where her husband leftā€¦ when they both came in everyone stood up and greeted Meera.. as she was Dev's wifeā€¦. However they didn't know who Geet wasā€¦ā€¦.. Meera told Geet to go in Maan's officeā€¦ which was right there straight ahead..

Meera: His cabin is right thereā€¦. You go!!!!!!

Geet: But..

Meera: Arre go!!!! I will check on Devā€¦..

Geet was walking towards his cabinā€¦.and then she came right in front of the doorā€¦ everyone was watching her.. they all had confused faces.. who was she?? She had knocked on the doorā€¦ā€¦ā€¦

Maan: Come in!! its open!!!!!

Geet came insideā€¦ Maan had his hand out thinking it was his secretary bringing files to him so without looking upā€¦

Maan: Here give them to me.. and I need you to fax these papersā€¦ā€¦..

Geet was just standing thereā€¦.. Maan had finally looked upā€¦

Maan: Geet??? What are you doing here???

Geet: Iā€¦ uhh.. Meeraā€¦. Andā€¦..

Maan: You came here with Meera??

She nodded her head yesā€¦ā€¦

Maan: well its good to see you out of the houseā€¦..

He was smiling at herā€¦ Geet had no expressionā€¦.

Maan: here you want me to show you around the officeā€¦ā€¦

He had gotten upā€¦ and brought her outsideā€¦ā€¦ and was showing her aroundā€¦ she was looking at everyone.. they were looking at her funnyā€¦

Meera: Bhabhiā€¦..

Geet turned around..

Meera: So I see someone is getting a tour of the officeā€¦.. there's nothing excitingā€¦ unless you sit in the boss's seat!!! Right Maan bhaiyya??

Maan didn't say anything!!!!ā€¦

Meera: Anyways.. we are going home nowā€¦ see you guys 2nite.. and try to come early!!!ā€¦ none of this 10 o'clock business!!!

They both had leftā€¦. Everyone was having side conversations and they were like Sir has gotten marriedā€¦. They were all talkingā€¦. And gossip was happening and then the news spreadā€¦ and when it spread it spread fastā€¦

The following morning it was all written over the newspaper.. "New Lady in Maan Singh Khurana's Life" the only thing that was missing was Geet's pictureā€¦ā€¦

Maan was picked up the morning paperā€¦. And he saw the headline!!!!!!!

Dev: Bhaiyya did u readā€¦.

He had stoppedā€¦. Maan had the paper in his handā€¦..

Meera: wat happened??? Whats in the paper???

She had come over to Dev who had the paper and she had read the headlinesā€¦ā€¦. She took the paperā€¦.

Meera: How in the worldā€¦.

Maan: You know.. I think it was because she came yesterday.. I swear people can never keep their damn mouth shut..not even more than one secondā€¦..

Dev: well you're going to have to announce itā€¦

Maan: Now I have to before this thing gets out of control!!!!!!

He had gotten up and made a phone call and he wanted a conference meeting held today at 12..... The security guard had come inside the houseā€¦

sec: Sirā€¦ there are lots of reporters outside and they all want to talk to you.. and they are asking a lot of questionsā€¦

Maan had ran up and went to his room and looked out the windowā€¦ when word spreads.. its like the size of a bullet train!!!..... His phone had started to ring but he didn't want to take any phone callsā€¦. He was just getting readyā€¦. And then he had left and went back down againā€¦. Geet came outside of the bathroom and she heard lots of commotion and she was thinking what was going on.. she started to get scaredā€¦. She got ready and she came downā€¦.

By the time she was downā€¦. She had seen that Maan and Dev had already leftā€¦.

Geet: Meera.. what happened? Why are there so many people outside???

Meera: Oh.. its just that in the paperā€¦

Since the paper was right there.. Geet saw it and she picked it up and saw the headlines and she was shockedā€¦ā€¦..

Meera: Bhabhi don't you worry about itā€¦. Since he is very well known.. that's why they always need some dirt on himā€¦but he is going to disclose it today!!!

The conference was held and it was being telecasted on TVā€¦. And Meera and Geet were watching it on TVā€¦. Sahil was jumpingā€¦.

Sahil: Chachu and Papa are on TV!!!!!!!

He was just watching the TV up closeā€¦. Meera had moved him back.. so that way he didn't strain his eyesā€¦

All the reporters were questioning him and firing questions at him left and right and he could only answer a few at a timeā€¦ But then he had announced to them that Yes.. he was indeed married!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan: I had gone to my cousin's wedding and I got married!!!....

Reporter: what is her name???

rep #2: where is she from???

Rep#3: How did you guys meet???

Questions and questions were being askedā€¦.

Maan refused to answer any of the questionsā€¦ā€¦. And he had told Dev to take overā€¦. Man these people were so noseyā€¦ He had left from there.. Geet was at home thinking that she was causing problems for him..

Meera: Bhabhi what are you thinking about???

Geet just nodded her no!!!

Meera: are you upset??

Geet was looking at her..

Meera: Everything will be okay!!! Don't worry!!!! Nothing will happen!!... And if you think that you are the cause of this.. ur not!! So don't worry about anything!!!

It was around 3 when Maan and Dev had come homeā€¦ everywhere Maan went the reporters were stashed upā€¦.. they were all standing outside Khurana Mansion and waiting for Geet to come out so that way they could take pictures of herā€¦..


Geet was looking outside the window and looking down and hiding her face so she wasn't seenā€¦ Maan had come inside the room and saw Geet looking at those people.....

He had come from behindā€¦.

Maan: Geetā€¦.

Geet got scared and she jumpedā€¦.

Maan: Don't worry.. its me!!! Don't bother with these peopleā€¦. Just let it go!!!

He had closed the curtains.. and told her just ignore themā€¦.. Geet was looking at himā€¦

Maan: I will just have one big reception and clear all of this out so that way they can just leave us aloneā€¦ā€¦

Geet: Its my fault isn't it????

Maan: No its not! Its not ur fault!! Why do you think its ur fault??? You didn't do anything!!!!!!! Don't blame this on urself!!!!! They just didn't know that I was married and that's all.. they made a big deal about nothing!!!! Besides.. everytime I am seen with a woman they think that I am having an affairā€¦.. but I am not that kind of guyā€¦

Geet was just looking at himā€¦ā€¦.

The following weekendā€¦ the reception was heldā€¦ everyone was there it was a grand partyā€¦ everyone was waiting for Maan and Geet to come down!!! Geet wore this really nice sari that Meera had bought for herā€¦.. Geet didn't want to wear itā€¦ but Meera told her to.. it looked really goodā€¦.

Maan was ready and he was waiting for Geet to come out of the bathroomā€¦.. the door had opened and she came outā€¦ Maan who was pacing back and fourthā€¦ looked towards that wayā€¦and he was just amazedā€¦ she looked really goodā€¦..Maan was just there standing and looking at herā€¦.

Geet was looking downā€¦ she had come out of the bathroomā€¦ and she kept on adjusting her sariā€¦ā€¦ she had come by the mirrorā€¦ Maan was just there and not taking his eyes off from herā€¦. Even he didn't know what had hit himā€¦ She sensed that his eyes were on her.. and she was trying really hard to ignore them.. but she couldn't!!!!!

She was finally readyā€¦. And she turned back to look at himā€¦ā€¦

Maan: U ready??

She slightly nodded and they both headed outā€¦.

Maan: Don't worry!!! Just stay with me and you don't have to answer anything if you don't want toā€¦.


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Posted: 13 years ago
woot woot...thats right...ME! šŸ˜ƒ

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Edited by jnawaz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update................ 
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvly update....maan n geet's reception šŸ˜³...!!!!continue soon!!

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