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                                Ye dooriyan part 13.…

Santu coming to her room with tea for dm….enters room….

Dm coming out of of washroom….

Santu puts tea on table,,,go twrds almirah,,,take out blue colored kurta….n says…

Santu::maalik,,today u wear this kurta,,u know bright clours looks very nice on u….

Dm moves twrds santu ,,crosses her,,take out anthr kurta frm almirah,,,white colored,,,wear it….

Santu surprised!!

Even then santu dosnt nt give up,,,she moves twrds table to take dm watch…..but before that dm himself reach there n take his watch of his own…his mobile etc…comb his hair n leaving frm room…..

Santu::maalik ur tea….

Dm just turn ,,,look at her,,,,n again turn back n moves out of room…..

Sntu standing there….cant understand what has happened to him….why he is behaving lyk this…why he is not talking to her,,even not looking at her….

Santu thinking all this with tears in her eyes….

                                Kabhi hua ye bhi ….

                                     Khaali rahoo pe bhi …..

                                Tu thaa mere saath….

Dm moving out of room,,,,,suddenly stops in corridore…thinking???????

                            Kabhi tujhe milke…

                                   Lauta mera dil ye…

                            Khaali khaali haath…

Dm eyes also getting wet,,,,he suddenly comes back frm his thought,,,,moves….

Dm reaches liv ing room….

Santu still standing in her room……

Santu sees dm coming back to his room….

Dm more n more coming towards santu n santu more n more cryng…..

Now cant hold herself…..so just cracks n hugs dm….tightly…too tightly…..

Dm also take her into his arms….with one hand,,,rubbing her hairs,,,,to make her calm……n says…

Dm:::I m sorry santuri…..

Santu hug him more tightly,,,showing she has forgiven him…..

                                    Ye bhi hua kabhi…

                                             Jaisa hua abhi…..

                                     Tujhko sabhi me paa liya…..

                                            Tera mujhe kar jati h dooriyan….

                                       Satati hai dooriyan…..

                                             Tadpati hai dooriyan…..

                                        Fanaah ho sabhi dooriyan……….

Suddenly santu sees,,,,noone in room,,,,she is standing all alone…..realises that was all her imaginationn….dm didn't come back…..again start crying…..

                          Ye dooriyan……ye dooriyan…..

In living room…

Dm coming frm stairs…..

Hiten:::papa,,,u r so late..u know today we have meeting with aman…..u didn't have done ur brkfst even….

Santu also reaches there….fastly moves twrds table n says….

Santu::hiten…just 5 minutes….let maalik do his brkfst,,,I have already make everything ready for him….

Dm::hiten…chal,,,we r getting late…

Santu::maalik brkfst!!

Dm::hiten,,,I said move…don't u get in one time…u know I don't lyk reaching office late….

Hiten:::ya papa…

Dm n hiten moves….

Santu standing at table…again wet eyes…

                                          Ye dooriyan……..

                                                Nigahoo ki dooriyan….

                                                     humrahoo ki dooriyan………

                                           Fanahh ho sabhi dooriyan

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thnx shabz n cuterosy for liking the ff............
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                                     Ye dooriyan part 14.…….

Later on…

Dm in office…meeting with ak n hiten…meeting over…
AK::: ok our maximum work is done….I think we can soon start this project….
Dm:: I hope so…n tmrw we can visit to the site…
AK:;ya sure…we will leave early morning…
Dm ya ok!!
Then suddenly ak phone rings n picks up the phone…
Ak::hello maa…yaa sorry,,I was in meeting so didn't take ur call…….ya maa,,I will eat,,,,home food??? Maa I ms  tayng in hotel…from where I will get home made food,,,,,u don't worry,,I will eat bread or sumthing,,,,,ya ok….by!!! Take care…
Ak::ok then I must leave….its very late….
Hiten::what ur mom was sayng abt ur food….
Ak:: wo nothing serious….actually yesterday I was havng little fever,,so she was sayng me to have some homemade healthy food…u know these moms naaa….
Dm:::thn….why don't u come with us for dinner
Ak::no no pls…its ok I will eat…
Hiten:: no aman,,,papa is right u shd have dinner with us n u had fever,,u even didn't tell me…
Ak::: thnx hiten,,so nice of u but I m fine now…
Hiten::no no I don't knw anything u r coming with us n santu will also be very happy to see u,,,she was asking for u…
Ak:: santu,,,,who is she??? Sorry I don't know her…
Hiten::: u come with me n u urself will come to know who is she….
Dm with little different expression…
At home….
Dm enters with hiten n aman….
Hiten introduce him to everyone….all sitting…santu is not there…n then she comes frm the stairs…
Aman::hello santuji
santu::jai shri Krishna amanji…sorry but how do u know me???
Aman::hiten has told me so much abt u that the moment I saw u I was sure u r sntuji…
Santu::hiten called me n told that u were hanvg fever,,,how r u now….
Aman:: I m absolutely fine…
Hiten::santu I m feelng very hungry pls put dinner for us…
Santu::ya…
All on dinning table….
Santu n khemi serving…
Aman::hiten where isw ur wife taural???
Hiten::she has gone to her dad house…..that's why so silence in our house!!
Aman::she is so talkative!!
Hiten::so,,,,so much…she talks so much….
f rm behind taural comes:::oh I see,,,I talk so much…ok then I will not talk to now…
Hiten;;oh sorry taural,,I was just joking,….sorry
Aman::hi taural!!!
Taural::hello..
Aman::taural pls forgive hiten,,he was actually tryng to make laugh,,just tryng to do the work in which u r best,,,means to make everyone smile!!!
Taural::aman,,who told u this…
Aman::of course,,hiten,,,,he always talks abt u ,,,a lot!!!
Taural::really!!ok thn I forgive him…
Everyone smiles…
All happy expect dm n santu….
Santu keeping veg in dm's thali but dm stops her just by little raising her hand….no one sees that expect one person…aman!!!
Thn suddenly voice of lightening come….
Suraj:::maa aa,,,its raining outside,,,,shd I go I want to play in rain…
Santu::no beta…u will fall ill,,,just come here n have food…
Santu sits on chair….suraj sits in her lap….santu feeds him by her own hand….
Aman:: I think I shd leave now…
Baa::bit beta how will u go,,its raining so heavily….u will stuck sumwhere….
Aman::no baa,,its ok,,I will manage…
Hiten::no aman,,baa is right,,I think u shd stay here….right santu!!
Santu::ya aman,,,hiten is absolutely right!!! N waise bhi u r not well….if u will get stuck sumwhere rain u will fall ill…
Aman agrees to stay there…

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                                     Ye dooriyan part15.……..

Hiral in their room…

Tuaral::hiten,,why u were forcing aman so much to stay here,,,is sumthing in ur mind….

Hiten::ya taural…actually I want him to spend more tym with us so that he comes to know more abt our family n abt….

Taural n abt???

Hiten:::abt…khemi….

Taural::wht…

Hiten::ya ,,,I think khemi shd restart her lyf….n aman is such a nice person…n I talked to santu also abt this…she was also happy with that….

Taural::ya hiten,,,,what u thought is very nice,,,but have u talked to aman abt this,,I mean abt arjan n Krishna….

Hiten::I talked to him indirectly n told everything abt her…

Santu also comes in room….n says…

Santu::hiten,,,but wht abt khemi behna,,I mean will she agree for that???

Taural:: I think we shd give some tym to them,,,let them spend some tym together n know each other n have some feelings for each other…

Santu::but how can this happen…

Taural::santu,,tmrw me n khemi r going for shopping,,,by some excuse I will call hiten there,,,n hiten u bring aman with u….thn we can leave them alone for sometym…

Hiten::nice idea…

Santu:;ya ok…but why u r going for shopping…

Taural::santu for ur anniversary party dear!!

Hiral smiles n so as santu….but santu little fake smile as she hasnot talked with dm as yet…

Santu::ok,,its too late now,,,I think we shd sleep…

Thn she moves n go to her room….

Sanraj room…

Dm sitting on chair n doing some work…

Santu comes ,,close door….dm sees her…santu moves twrds him…

Santu::maalik,,I want to talk to u…

Dm take his phone n call someone…talking with sumone…

Aftr sumtym dm puts the phine down…sangtu still staning there,,,,waiting for him n says…

Santu::I said I want to talk to u…

Dm gets up fm chair,,,take towel frm almirah,,,,go to washroom….

Santu still standing there…waiting….

Dm comes,,,surprised to see santu standing in same positionn at same place…but doesne show his expression,,avoiding her….

Santu agn::I want totalk to u maalik abt that nt…

Dm just go to bed…lie down….switch off the light…sleep….

Santu,,,,now not able to hold herself….want to cry but this tym not in frnt of dm…so go out of the room….

Aman coming frm guest room,,talking on phone..ya I think network is not coming here…I m going little outside n then I will talk to u mom…

Santu runing downstairs n go to teerace……..standing there n cryng,,,,cryng a lot….

Aman comes on terrace,,,,,see back of santu….thn look at his watch…11.30pm…little worried….go towards him….

Dm on other side,,,,wke up,,,,switch on the light,,,,n sees santu is not there n says…

I shd not have behaved with her in such a rude way….I don't know what has happened to me….I think I shd talk to her…n stands up n moves our of room,,,looking for her……

Terrace…

Santu standing on terrace,,,cryng…

Aman watchng her…slowly start moving twrds her…..reaches near her….slowly raises his hand twrds her….n thn…..

PRECAP::

Maalik,,,pls say sumthing….maalik…

N thn she realises….the arms in which she is ….is not his arms……

the person to whom she is hugging is not him….he is someone else….n thn…

She immediately gets back….see n shocked!!!!

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