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sanraj.....ye dooriyan... (Page 6)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ipodmackid

awesome niddi- continue soon
thnx mira...keep reading,...Smile

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged

                     YE DOORIYAN PART 10.……..

Santu looks at dm n dm at santu….

Santu,,,coz of her shyness,,unable to have an eyelock even!!! So looks down!!!

Dm get it …………..its just co of her shyness……….so he slowly put her finger over her chin n lift her fae up…………n says:::e santuri ….look at me…..

Santu slowly opening her eyes,,,,,,,,,,,,looks his eyes…..but still shyng a lot!!!!!!!!

Dm slowly start bringing his face near to her face to again kiss her………bringing his lips near to her…….

But santu still shyng a lot,,so,,,,,,,she fastly turns around…..giving back to dm…..

Now dm gives a cute smile………agn start coming close to her………

Thn,,,he slowly bends n come close to her bare back…….his lips reaches there n ……

………..begin to kiss her bare back…..kissing n kissing…..

Santu just lost in his kisses,,,,his way of loving her…..n thn….

santu havng a ahh feeling so she lifts her head liitle up…. N opens her eyes………

……..N there her eyes goes on the wall n shocked!!!!!!!!

Santu looks at pictures in front of her on the wall……of whole family……

Hiten,,kaddu,,,Birwa,,,suraj….arjan….

Thn she remembers what arjan said abt sanraj kids coz of which she took decision of no kids…..

Flashback of hospital scene,,,,,dm giving vachan of no kids!!!!!!!!

Dm still kissing her back…..

Santu now wants to stop him……….n says::maalik!!!

Dm Still kissing…..

santu agn::maalik!!!

Dm now stop kissing…

Santu got a relief feeling that he stopped….

but dm still in his love world!!!!

So,,,slowly……raise his hand,,touches her back,,,going to open the last dori of her blouse….

Whn…

Santu shouts::::maalik stop it………..turns around………looks at dm….

Dm completely shocked!!!!!!!

Santu looks at dm……..tears in her eyes…..

Dm surprised to see her tears!!!!!

Santu now cant stand there more coz she cant give the answers of questions which dm eyes were asking……..so she just lift her loosened saree…n run out frm room………..

Dm shocked!!!!

DM not able to move,,,,standing still………tears in his eyes….

SANTU out of the room ………standing over the stairs,,,,,,,,,,,,cryng,,,,

Background music……….

                         YE DOORIYAN…..YE DOORIYAN…….

IN RAHOO KI DOORIYAN………

NIGAHO KI DOORIYAN……….

HUMRAHO KI DOORIYAN…….

FANAAH HO SABHI DOORIYAN….

KYUKOI PAAS HAI DOOR HAI ,,

KYU KOI JAANE NAA KOI YAHAA PE…..

AA RAHA PAAS YA DOOR ME JAA RAHA….

JAANU NAA MEI HU KAHA PE……..

YE DOORIYAN………

NIGAHO KI DOORIYAN……….

HUMRAHO KI DOORIYAN…….

FANAAH HO SABHI DOORIYAN….

YE DOORIYAN………

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

                               Ye DOORIYAN PART11

Next day….living room….

Baa coming frm her room n champ kali running down the stairs as she got late….

Baa::ck,,,u r cimng now..

Ck::sorry baa,,I got late…

Baa::ok ok,,just run to kitchen n help santu to make brkfst,,she must ba doing it alone….n first bring my pooja ki thali,,,,,I m going to wake suraj…..

Ck::ji baa…

Baa in suraj room….opens the gate n surprised!!!!

Santu sleeping while sitting on the bed n one hand on suraj head…..her face is looking so dull….as she was cryng for that whole night….

Baa::santu is still sleeping!!! N that too in suraj room!!!! Why???(((thinking)))

Thn baa trytng to wake santu…

Baa::santu,,,,e santu….

Santu just get up n little speechless to see baa…..she gets up frm the bed…touches the baa feet,,wishing her jai shri Krishna!!!

Baa::wht happen santu…u r so late…n ur face is looking as u didn't sleep properly….n why u slept here???I mean why not in ur room???

Santu((((fumbling with words)))……::baa,,baa,,wo actually…..yesterday,,I shouted on suraj naa n he was angry with me,,,so I thought that if I wld sleep with him thm he will feel good…..so I slept in his room….at night we both keep talking,,,,so we got late to sleep…that's why I didn't hav cmplt sleep……

Baa:::ok ok….now u go n get ready ….I will wake up suraj n make him ready for school….u go..

Santu moving,,,

Baa::n also wake up dharmaraj also,,,he must also be sleeping….

Santu start thinking……how will I face maalik…he must be so angry to me…what I will say to him….. n her feet not able to move coz she doesn't have courage to meet him…..

Baa::why r u standing here,,just go…

Santu::ya baaa,,I m going…

Santu moving on stairs….saying in her mind…..but I have to meet him…only then I can tell him why I behaved lyk that….

Thn she thinks sumthing n says:::I m such a fool….sahi kehte hai maalik,,I m a dufford!!!!

Why wld maalik be angry with me…what I did was to save our decision…save the vachan which maalik has given me….he wld rather be sorry to me that he forgot his vachan n will thank me that I protect that vachan….

She reaches her room,,,,open the door…..n ….surprised!!!!

Room is empty…no one there…

Santu moves towards washroom..noone…..surprised!!!

Santu::maalik went to factory so early….

Thn she see his watch,,,mobile,,,papers everything in the room…..it means maalik has not gone to factory,,,then where he is????

Santu get tensed,,,,,run out of the room,,,,to search for dm,,,,reaches living room…baa standing there….

Baa::are u again come here without getting ready….what happened to u??? r u fine???

Santu::ya baa,,I m fine,,actually I forget sumthing in suraj room,,so come to take that…

Baa::but that u can take later on also…see its already,,,,8'oclock,,,u didn't even ready,,,whn will u do pooja,,,n suraj brkfst,,,chai for dm….

Santu ::ya ya baaa…I m going……

moving towards her room n looking here n there…..

Baa::e santu,,,did u wake up dharmaraj????

Santu ::ya ya baa,,,he is geeting ready!!!

Baa::ok…

Santu moves out…

Baa going to her room…thn suddenly see that study room is open….open the gate n see n surprised!!!!

Precap:::

Santu just moving her gaze frm dm n looks twrds baa n says::ya baa,,I m ready…wait I will bring pooja ki thali for u….

Baa::no need of that…I already told ck,,she will bring for me….u go to ur room…n help dm to get ready..give him his clotohes n all,,he is alrdy so late…

Sntu::ya baa ..I m..

Dm interrupts in btwn((in attitude))………….

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Loving your FF please post soon awesome writing Nidhi

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Hi Nidhi awesome DM with attitude is backSmile post your next soon...

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shabz50

Loving your FF please post soon awesome writing Nidhi
thnx shabz........shabana ...right????
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuterosy

Hi Nidhi awesome DM with attitude is backSmile post your next soon...
hi cutee,,,dm attitude is always needed for making anything awesum....Smile
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged

                                  Ye dooriyan… 12

Baa going to her room…thn suddenly see that study room is open….open the gate n see n surprised!!!!

Dm is sitting on chair n sleeping there with head down on table….

Baa go twrds him,,,wake him up…..dm gets up,,,touches her feet,,wishes her….

Baa::what happen,,,,why u slept here???

Dm:::baa..wo I had to finish some imp work….n while doing work…whn I slept,,I didn't remember!!!!

Baa(((in full anger))) ;;don't lie to me dharmaraj…..I know why u slept here….its all coz of santu…am I right!!!!

Dm shocked!!!

Thinking how santu can tell this to baa…..this matter is btwn me n her,,,a hsbnd n a wife,,,n santu told this to baa,,how could she do that!!!!

Thn suddenly baa laughs….

Dm surprisingly::::baa what happen ,,,why r u laughing….

Baa::look at ur face,,,,itts like,,,ur grt secret has revealed!!!

Dm::nahi baa..actually it Was not coz of santu…(((tryng to hide the truth))

Baa::are beta I know…..that yesterday santu slept in suraj room as suraj was angry with her….n I know that's why u came here n start doing ur work coz u don't lyk sitting ur room alone without ur santuri!!!(((in ateasing way)))

Dm smiles(((a fake smile)) with a sense of relief that baa doesn't know anything!!!!

Baa::now u go n get ready..its 8.30...u will get late…

Dm n baa together moves

Otside the room….santu comes…

Dm n baa on one side,,,,,santu standing in frnt of them….

Santu n dm looking at each other….

Baa::e santu,,,u r ready…

Santu just moving her gaze frm dm n looks twrds baa n says::ya baa,,I m ready…wait I will bring pooja ki thali for u….

Baa::no need of that…I already told ck,,she will bring for me….u go to ur room…n help dm to get ready..give him his clotohes n all,,he is alrdy so late…

Sntu::ya baa ..I m..

Dm interrupts in btwn((in attitude)):::no no baa…there is no need of that….I will do it of my own…she can go n help in ur work,,,,i can take care of me myself....i dont need her!!!!!!!!

both baa n santu freezed!!!!
 
dm/;;i mean her help!!!!!!!!!!!!
n thn dm moves out frm there.....
 
santu shocked to hear what he said,,,cant even believe he said sumthing lyk that ,,,,,but still she handle the situation n says::ba,,,u always do his,,,see agn u put me in ur talks ....i have so much of work left ,,,now let me go.......
n sangtu also leaves....
 
baa standing n smile....i know u both have sum argument coz of whch u even slept at dfrnt places,,,but i know soon u both will setele  coz i know u both cant live fopr a second without each other.....

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