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FF~4~HEARTBEATS~ Unfinished- notepg 69 (Page 53)

Srabon_Dhara Goldie

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 9:27pm | IP Logged

he he awesome update..

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Maan jumped in and geet hungrily looked at him. She took of her shorts and also jumped in. Can this day can get any better because, this is just awesome. She giggled.

Maan on the other hand closed his eyes, what is he thinking? Water and geet and alone this is not a good combination. What if he lose control... What if they... Maan closed his eyes and started to swim but did he realise geet was on her way towards maan.

Maan stopped realising geet's hand was resting on his back...

"isn't this romantic?"
Geet whispered, maan could already see her red lips on its way to his earlobe... Oh there was already sensation running through his vain... What to do? Like yesterday, he could have ran but now... Where will he...
"geet... I think we should keep little distance." maan honestly ask. He knew well that it will take one or two push before he completely lose him self and starts kissing her madly... An top of it she won't able to take his aggression...
"let's swim !"
Geet confusingly looked at maan... She observed for while, realising he really did not want to come close.

After 4 lains of swimming maan suddenly realised there was no geet. He looked from one side to another, she truly wasn't there. He quickly came out of the water, and ran towards there living room... Warping a towel around his waist. "geet... Geet... Geet..."

Maan ran in to the living room, and there, geet. A towel around her body, and she sitting and watching telly?

"what are you doing?"
"watching telly!"
"swimming? I thought you wanted to spend time with me!"
"if your spending time mean, you swim and I watch then no!"
Geets big eyes looked at maan then back at the telly...
"geet commen..."
"you rather watch your NMM then spending time with me?"
"atleast my NMM takes its time... You don't even do that."
Maan confusingly looked at her. Then went up and picked geet on his arm...
"slow! Slow..." geet worriedly shouts. "I am not wearing anything underneath!"
"yes... I didn't want to be in wet cloths!"
"geet... We are not married yet... Why you acting like this?"
"then merry me now... Then you don't have to..." geet giggled.
Maan roles his eyes... Wondering what to do.
"is anyone in the house?"
Geet came forward... And whispered right in his ear... "does that mean I can walk naked and only you can see..."
Maans eyes piped out. Does this girl have any limit?
Geet brought her hand up, and quickly pulled the towel, instantly it droped and maan closed his eyes, landing her on the floor again.
"geet... We're something..." he spoke in angry tone... Wasn't the situation was already so hard... And now this!
"nahi... Let's get married... As you don't want to do anything without marriage..."
Geet came and huged maan from the back... Her every bare cell touched his bare back. Maan couldn't help him self to open his eyes... His heartbeat raised in incredible speed...
"geet... Please..."
"no... Merry me now... And make me yours..."
"no... I won't merry until you finish your uni..."
"I won't be able to wait that long..." geet stroked her nose against his back...
"geet... Leave me..."
"do you really want me to leave again for 3 years? Because If you push me way now... I will never come back..."

Maans heart rate stopped in that moment.. He instantly spines around and holds her mouth... She was his... And always will be... Maybe he was pushing it to far...

"get ready..."
"do you want to merry me or not?"
"merry me right here... Right now... Then we can register later..."
Geet took a box of sindoor and gave it to maan...
"you come prepared don't you!"
Geet nodes and laugh...

Maan opens the box, a red coloured sindoor laied resting... His heart rate double and without thinking it was in geets mang...

Geet slowly stepped way from the towel that was around he'd leg like a ring... And she smiled.
"please look at me maan... Otherwise I will think you don't love me..."
Maan stepped forward towards her... "you won't be able to take me!"
"who said that?"
"I did..."
"you are wrong..."
Both were moving towards the bedroom... While maans observed his naked geet top to bottom...
"have you ever tried then how do you know..."
"because I do...
Geet managed to hit the bed and dropped on it straight... He had no safety procotion... Nothing with him... Now all he can ask for the last thing, she becomes pregnant. Not that he don't want to but she is to young...
His long finger came up, stroking her lips... "you are beautiful..." he wispeared... "innocent..."
Before geet could open her lips to reply, maan nailed her to the bed. geets both hand and leg both piled maans boxer down...
"you have no idea how much I dream about this day..."
"not much as me..."
Geet looked at maan with big eyes.
"how much..."
"do you know what I will do to you know?"
Geet nodes a no innocently...
"you shouldn't have come this close to me geet."
"because I won't leave you out of my sight... Not even for a second... "
"make love with me all day?"
"all night..."

sorry no colours code.. in hurry..


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Mishty.M.k Goldie

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:19am | IP Logged
loved it

keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
ossum dear
loved it so much
ossum one
oh u left near the cliff dear
pls give there love making dear
pls update soon
cant wait more dear
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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
awsem update do next soon
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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Amazing update dear...
Its worth waiting for it...
You r too good in expression
Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
oh god!geet s impatient..!
i hope nothing goes wrong..!
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awesome update

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