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Posted: 13 years ago
How sweet ! amazing update.. loved it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
super so Maan i'll open up with her that good let them know first each other love how Geet ☺️☺️ when hear Maan name amazing update soonnnnnnnnn congrats
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats dear for new thread...loving the track..!!!

now maan got wat he want and loving the convo and closeness of maneet..!!!

waiting to beheld some more maneet scene...!!!

pls pls pls update intezaar as well if u can!!!

pls continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
love is in the air, lovely update kemπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update ... i love it.. one more update plzz.. i was always a silent reader.. after reading ur ongoing FF.. i started reading ur heartbeats season 1 ans estoric love they r toooooooo good.. plz update intezaar, animosity toooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haye our immature geet is blushing this is the effect of maan and awe loving how maan is trying to be open with her a bit and teasing her aswell anyways loved the whole atmosphere in the canoe and great update and can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds 😊

Congrats on the new thread keyama 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wahey Way to Go Keyama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

yes yes I is very proud to be a dedicated reader of ur FFs.........................and on this wonderful occasion I would like to thank my mum, my dad, my two budgies, maan geet, their bacha, IF, the internet, my laptop, erm, my fingers, my head, my eyes etc etc etc...........(jus imagine my speech)πŸ˜‰..............and last but not least Keyama......for writing such wonderfull FFs

three cheers for Keyama!!!!!!πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
 
ok i'm gonna go read ur update now - i think thats enough makhan-o-fying you for nowπŸ˜†
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
now do u honestly want to read a comment from me?? really?? truly?? seriously????
 
cos it wont be anything more than *sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh*
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i mean...................... bache ki jaan logi kya?????
 
that was dreamy..............no wait dreamy is the understatement of the year.............dude.......i'm sorry i cant say more - my brain refuses to function...it''s still stuck at their convo in the canoe and maan saying:
Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

What if I say she is would be and is right in front of me.... 


like honestly......................this isnt Tishuu commenting....it's her subconscious brain cos she fainted the moment she read the above
Edited by Tishuu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First Congratz on the new threadπŸ‘-//-second loved the update and atleast Geet got a kiss from Maan even if it's a forehead 1---pls update soon Xx... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ tishuu............dont worry i halat is same as urs πŸ˜†