AWESOME....in a sing song way.....
The fact that you chose a train to talk of the journey she chose, the path she chose to tread on...was par amazing! Sometimes, the literal journey is as important as the parallel- development of a character.The concept was awesome, all your fanfictions are....well I follow two lol!
There's a lil question I wanted to ask...at the end...it said...it's an end of a fairy-tale dream...another one of those...was it U or the female protagonist because that changes the entire meaning of this beatific re-union. That suggests reminiscent of good times while a tragedy is at hand! So, if u cud clear that out...that'd be awesome!
Have a nice day!
Edited by repercussion - 13 years ago
