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y we are desitned to be ar ff pt 18 PG56 (27/11) (Page 6)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
                                                
                    Y WE ARE DESITNED TO BE
                                 ONE SHOT
                                     AR FF
                                       part
                                          5


Next morning 
riddhima wake up and saw that armaan was sleeping peacefully riddhima did not help but admired him.
ri:''he is looking so cute while sleeping''
and suddenly reality stuck to her
ri:''han bas abhie ooth jayega aur merii zindagi ka dushman ban jayega aur vaise bhi subhh hi iskaa chehra dekh liyya pta nai kya hogaa aj meraa''
when she was going to washroom she saw armaan wake up
ar:''hey good morning''
ri:''han subhh tumhari shakal dekh li ab kya good morning''
she mumbled and
ar:''kya yar basket abhie bhi tumhari apnee ap se badbdane ki aadat nai gayyi''
ri:''hmm sorry good morning armaan''
ar:''so basket did u sleep well''
he asked her calmly and
ri:''han armaan tumhari mehrbani se''
she replied annoyingly
ar:''riddhima tumhari problem kya hai yar yahan mai tumse itnee aaram se bat kar rahaa hun aur tum''
ri:''han to maine kaha hai aaram se bat karne ko mat bat karoo mujhse jab dekho mera sar khate rehte ho''
ar:''theek hai fine''
and he get up and moved to washroom
ri:''kahan ja rahee ho tum''
ar:''washroom fresh honee''
ri:''ji nai pehle mai jaongi''
ar:''kyoon pehle tum kyoon jaogi''
ri:''simple kyonki pehle mai oothi thi isliyye''
ar:''oye aisaa koi rule nai hai ok aur vaise bhi ye mera washroom hai samjhi''
ri:''oh tumhara washroom i thought cement,bricks vagarah ka hai''
ar:''ha ha ha very funny par mujhe hansi nai ayi''
ri:''obv jokes ko samjhne ko dimag hona bhi bahut jaruri hai jo tumhare pas nai hai''
ar:"basket ab bahut ho gayya u r crossing ur limits ok''
ri:''look who is talking about limits the good for nothing armaan attitude mallik''
ar:''basket maine aisaa kiyya kya hai jo tum ye sab bol rai ho''
ri:''armaan sar mat khao mai ja rai hun washroom''
ar:''aisee kaise jaogi tum mai''
ri:''lo tumhe jaakar dikhati hun''
as riddhima was standing near washroom door and armaan was still standing near bed so she enter in washroom and closed the door
armaan banged the door in frustration and
ar:''mai kch bhi normal karne ki koshish karun basket kabhie mere saath normal behave karegi. ose hamesha aisee kyoon lagta hai ki mere saath se ooska din kharab ho jayega abhie bhi bol rahii thi ki mera chehra dekh liyya kya khak good morning''
actully armaan heared riddhima's mumbling
in washroom
riddhima was cursing armaan
ri:''gadha kahin ka jab dekho behas karne lag jaata hai aj ooske kaaran der hui hai mujhe sab kya sochenge pehle din hi derii se oothi.kya impression hai mera ghr ki bahu pehle din hi der se oothi koi ye to nai kahega ki oonke bete ke kaaran ye hua''
she cursed armaan and after taking a long relaxing bath she turnoff the gyeser
and when she enter in room armaan just looked at her.riddhima was wearing blue marron net saree and she was looking stunning and armaan just looked at her without blinking his eyes 
and thn riddhima sat on dressing table and wear her mangalsutra
armaan looked at her she is looking more beautiful with the things tht shows she is married she is looking even more nice with her mang filled with sindoor and bangles in her hands,soon riddhima looked at  him
and armaan immediately ran to washroom
after sometime downstairs
armaan's parents and riddhima was sitting on big dining table
soon armaan come while snizzing
ar:""aachhhuuuuuuu''
ananya hearing him snizzing worried and
an:''armaan beta kya hua tujhe?''
ar:''kch nai achuuu mom achuu achuu''
bi:''kya kch nai theek se ek sentence nai bol pa rahaa hai''
an:''rat tak tu theek tha tujhe sardi kab lagii,ek minute ruk kahin tu thande paani se to nai nahaya na?''
ar:''ji achuu achuu achuu mom''
an:''hey bhagwan armaan maine tujhe kitni var kaha ki rat ko gyeser on kar liyya kar aur agr bhull jaaye to ruk jaaya kar tu bhi na''
bi:''annie jaaan ose bad me daant lenaa pehle ose kch do dekho kaise ooski nose red ho gayyi hai''
an:''han billy mai abhie laati hun''
thn armaan and billy setteled on table while riddhima just stare at armaan and
bi:''areyy riddhima bache aisee mat dekho ye armaan thande paani se nai naha sakta ise suit nai karta aur isliyye tumhari mom ise daant rai thi beta''
thn ananya comes
an:''ye le armaan jaldi se kada pee''
ar:''mom please ye bahut kadwa hogaa''
an:''armaan no argument pee jaldi se''
ar:''dad pls boliye''
bi:''no armaan is var mai tumhari mom ke saath hun ye tumhari health ke liyye achaa hai so beta pls''
ar:''dad mom pls na its too horrible mai nai ise peeyonga pls''
an:''armaan ab tumhari shaadi ho gayyi hai kam se kam ab to bachoo jaise behave karna band karoo,riddhima kya sochegi''
ar:''mom''
an:''armaan chodo riddhima ab ye tumhara patii merii bat to soonga nai to tum hi pilla do''
now riddhima was dumbfounded because she is already feeling guilty tht because of her armaan caught cold as she turned of gyser but before she can speak anything
ar:''mom do mai  achuu peeta hun achuu achuu achuu''
hearing it both billy and ananya smiled
bi:''achaa bachoo abhie se biwi ka itnaa dar''
ar:''kya dad ek to apkii bat maani aachu oopar se u were teasing me''
an:''ok armaan jao aur rest kar lo nai to tumhe temprature ho jayega aur riddhima tumne apnaa
saman pack kar liyya na?''
ri:''ji mom''
ar(in his heart):''ab ye kahan ja rai hai chalo achaa hai kam se kam khush to rahegi mujh se dur jaakar''
an:''theek hai beta armaan ajayega tumhe do din bad lene''
ar:''kya mom achuu mai kahan ja rahaa hun achuu achuu''
bi:''abhie to mr.achuu apnee room me jao aur do din bad riddhima bitiya ko ooske ghr se le ana theek hai armaan''
he nodded and soon riddhima was in their room and armaan was not there
ri:''mujhe armaan se apologise karna chahiye mere kaaran vo beemar ho gayya par ye room me kyoon nai aya rest karne''
whereas armaan in study
ar(in his heart):''achaa hai mai room me na jaoon nai to ooska mood fir kharab ho jayega achaa hai apnee ghr jaa rai hai mom-dad se milne khushi-khushi jaaye.humara to ab zindagi bha yehii chalne vaala hai,kaash humari bhi ek normal vaali shaadi hotii to aj mai bhi apnii biwi ko ooske ghr jaane se rokta bolta mai tumhare binaa nai reh sakta.par mai basket ko aisaa nai keh sakta aj subhh vo itnii pyaari lag rai thi man kar rahaa tha bas dekhe jaonn jaise farewell par merii najar chahh kar bhi os se nai hat rahii thi.especially ooski chudiyan oh god mai ye kya bol rahaa hun aj basket ki vajah se mai beemar hun aur mai kyoon hum ek saath hue aakhir y we desitened to be''


precap_reception party

will riddhima apologise armaan?

y is riddhima behaving so weirdly?

armaan missing riddhima

koi naya aya

 finally completed Smile

now please leave ur comments 

waiting for comments

it means a lots to me

with lots of luv

nikita






Edited by niki.5 - 14 February 2011 at 7:44am

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki.5

LOL

what is this???????????????????
when will u update nxt part???????????????????
plsssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kisi ff ka toh karo


Edited by shilpI007 - 13 January 2011 at 5:00am

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwww yaar......AR are married.....I am dancing like this girlParty.Dancing...just loved the whole part .......all the rasams are so beautifully describedClap........loved the shopping moment also.......want to read more so do continue soon.......thanks for the PM......

take care
GEET

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
hey nik
superb part
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ridz bought armaan choice dresssWink
completely loved ittttttttttttttttttttttttt
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww now they r married nowSmileTonguePartyDancing
Day Dreamingwaiting for MR. n Mrs. MALIK first nightWink
pls fall AR each otherWink
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeee soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnSmileTongue



Edited by shilpI007 - 13 January 2011 at 7:36am

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
LOVED IT TO THE CORE, loved how u explained their wedding celebrations in one update! thank god they are married and by the looks of it; slowly falling for eachother, cute! UPDATEEEEE SOOON CANT W8 TO FIND OUT HOW THEY R GOING TO SOLVE THE "BEDROOM" MATTER lol thanks for the Pm and will be waiting eagerly for a update :)

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
wow.....,..
I cant say anythng more than ths.
Update soon.
T.c.
Thanx 4 pm.
Anuj.

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
hey awsome update
it was simply amazing yaar
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
pls cont soon

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