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y we are desitned to be ar ff pt 18 PG56 (27/11) (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
nice one.

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
awesome
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:22am | IP Logged
lovely part....
 
loved it...
 
hope dey fell in luv soon
 
nx 4 da pm
 
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
                                         
                    Y WE ARE DESITNED TO BE
                                 ONE SHOT
                                     AR FF
                                       part
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after tht they took blessings fron their parents and after bidaai armaan and riddhima moved to armaan's house and after all cermonies and teasings riddhima was in armaan's from now their room.and soon she heared door closed.................
armaan looked at riddhima who was sitting at the edge of bed.the room was fully decorated with candles,flowers and armaan just looked at riddhima who look more thn beautiful in her bridal attire and throughout the wedding armaan just looked at her with corner of eyes
and now
armaan now did not know what to say to her he is so confused he just pulled his sherwani dupatta and placed it on couch
ri:''armaan kya kar rahee ho?''
ar:''kya matlab kya kar rahaa hun kapre ootar rahaa hun ye sherwani''
ri:''armaan pagal ho gayye ho kapre ootar rahee ho vo bhi room me disgusting''
ar:''oye basket  pagal mai hun ya tum ab mai apnee hi room me kapre ootar rahaa hun kissi doosre ke to nai''
ri:''oyr mr.attitude ab ye room tumhara hi nai hai mera bhi hai ok''
ar:''han to kya''
ri:''to kya matlab ab tum mere saamne kapre nai ootar sakte''
ar:''oye hello ek sherwani ke dupatte se tumhe itnii problem hai pta nai doctor kisnr bna diyya tumhe?tumhe to doctor ki jarorat hai vo bhi kiss psychtrist ki.psycho basket poori pta nai merii poori zindagi kaise beetegi tumhare saath''
ri:''armaan bakwas mat karoo pehle khud hi aisii harktein karte ho fir mujhe bolte ho duffer kahin ke''
ar:''maine kya harkat ki han''
ri:''to vo kapre kaun ootar rahaa tha''
ar:''basket had hotii hai kissi cheej ki areey yar mai ek minute
thn some thing click in his mind
ar:''oye basket tumhe kya laga ki mai yahan baaki kapre bhi''
when she did not reply and did not met her gaze
armaan get his answer and he start laughing
ar:''mujhe nai pta tha ki basket ki tumhra dimag itna ganda hai mujhe apnii izzat se bahut pyaar hai achaa to tumhare saamne to kabhie bhi nai itnee boore din nai aye abhie mere aur vaise bhi tum aur mai never''
ri:''han to mujhe kya sapna ayega tum bol hi aisee rahee the to mujhe kya sapna ayega ki tum kaunse kapron ke vaare me bat kar rahee ho''
ar:''riddhima pta nai tum mere vaare me kya sochti ho par riddhima mai vaisa nai hun.i admitt i did not like u but i respect women.aur mai kabhie bhi koi aisaa kam nai karunga jis se mai tumhari kya apnii najron me bhi gir jaon par aj tumne jo kaha os se mujhe bura laga itna boora mujhe tan bhi nai lagta jab hum jhagra karte hai ya tum jab kehti ho ki tumhe mere chehre se bhi nafrat hai.anyways shayad tumhari mere vaare me yehii soch hai to let it be''
riddhima is taken back at his sudden reply
ri:''armaan mera vo matlab nai''
but she is cut short
ar:''riddhima pls tum jao aur washroom me change kar lo mai yahan bahar kar loonga aj mai aur kch manage nai kar sakta''
ri:''armaan''
but he moved to his closet and take his clothes and waiting for riddhima to go in wash room and riddhima go to washroom taking her night wear
ri(in her heart):''mai pagal hun mujhe pta tha vo aisaa kch nai karega par fir bhi maine ose ye sab kahaa aur ose kisne kaha ki mai ooske chehre se nafrat karti hun.pagal hai kuch bi sochta hai.should i apologise to him?nai pta nai fir to kahin kch aur hi na samajh baithe aur vaise bhi mujhse sorry sun ke mr.attitude ka attitue to asmaan ko bhi cross kar dega to ab ooska muh to ootar gayya tha.but i have better plan mr.attitude armaan mallik kissi aur bat par react karee na karee par basket ke saath jhagre par jarora react karega.
                            hey bhagwan mai ab apnee ap ko basket boola rai hun mera to kch nai ho sakta ye armaan attitude mallik merii jaaan nikalkar saans legaa kya shuruwat hai humare rishte ki shaadi ki mai ab apnee ap ko on namon se boolati hun jinse vo mr.attitude armaan mallik mujhe bulata hai
                           ab riddhima chl bahar nai to pta nai kya soch raha hogaa baha baitha gadha kahin ka.
              mom-dad kahan phansa diyya apnee mujhe ab kya karoongi mai mai apnii shaadi ki rat
apnee ap se bat kar rai hun
                                          aur bhagwan ji apsee to mai kya kahun apne mujhe aur armaan ko kyoon ek saath kiyya y we desitened to be aur dekhiye kya koi dulhan shaadi ki pehli rat washroom me baithi ye plan kar rai hai ki apnee so called husband ke saath jhagra kaise karungi.
                               good going dr.riddhima gupta oh no no no no dr.riddhima armaan mallik
                              ab chal bahar aur ye sab jo ho rahaa sirff armaan ke kaaran hai armaan tumne shaadi ke liyye han kyoon kahaa''she cursed armaan under her breath and moved to her rooom where armaan was sitting on bed.
ri:''armaan kya kar rahee ho?''
ar:''what do u mean ab apnee hi bed par baithne se bhi tumhe problem hai''
she bit her lower lip and
ri:''areey ye to bahut gusse me hai lagta hai abhie phat jayega riddhima kch soch''
she mumbled when she did not say anything armaan passed her ''wht'' look
ri:''kehna kya chahte ho tum armaan mai aur tum ek bed par never''
ar:''oye hello mujhe bhi koi shaq nai hai apnaa bed tumhare saath share karne ka but u see yahan koi couch nai hai so i have no other option'
ri:''to mai kya karun go sleep on floor''
ar:''mai kyoon soyun zameen par tumhe problem hai na to tum so jao zameen par vaise bhi ye mera rooom hai''
ri:''kal tak tha ab se its not urs its ours remember''
ar:''whatever par mai koi zamen-vameen par nai sone vaala aur na hii mujhe koi aur solution pta hai ok''
ri:''han tum kyoon koi solution dhondhge solution dhundhne ko dimag hona bhi jarori hota hai jo ki tumhare pas nai hai na''
ar:''han to tum to ho hi bahut samajhdar dhundh lo koi solution tab tak mai sotaa hun have a nice thinking session''
and he adjust himself on bed while riddhima just frowned at him and cursed under her breath and sooon enough she also laid on bed with pillows between her and armaan and covered herself with duvet but armaan pulled all the duver over himself,riddhima tried to get some part of blanket but she remained unsuccessful and now she is fuming with anger and she smacked really hard on armaan's arm  and hit him with pillow and armaan opened his eyes due to this sudden blow
ar:"wht the hell riddhima pagal ho gayyi ho kay kar rai ho''
ri:''oh really tumhe nai pta mai kya kar rai hun''
ar:''nai''
ri:''rukoo abhie btati hun mai''
ar:''kya''
but before armaan can complete his sentence she hit him again with pillow and this time really hard
ar:''riddhima bataogi bat kya hai kyoon mar rai ho mujhe maine kya kiyya''
ri:''maine kya kiyya;;
she imitates him
ri:''armaan tum saara blanket apnee oopar lekar so rahee ho atleast thoda sa to mujhe de doo''
ar:''han to lo maine kab mna kiyya''
ri:''nai tum thode na kvh karte ho sab mai hi karti hun saara apnee oopar khinchte ho whenever i tried to take it ab agr saara tumhe hi lena hai to mere liyye doosra la do tum,mai aisee nai so sakti its cold''
ar:''riddhima tumne mujhe pagal samjha hai kya ab mai doosra blanket kahan se laonn yahan bas yehii hai yar''
ri:''to bahar se lao armaan''
ar:''riddhima r u out of ur mind mai bahar jaakar kya bolun mujhe doosra blanket kyoon chahiye ki suhagrat ke din merii biwi alg se sonaa chahti hai''
ri:''armaan tum pehle se is vaare me nai soch sakte the tumhe pta tha na ki ye problem arise hogaa par rumhe to mujhe satane me mza jo ata hai''
with this she start hitting him again but this time armaan grabbed pillow and her wrist and due to armaan's sudden push now riddhima landed on bed and armaan over her with riddhima holds armaan's collar and they both looked into each-other's eyes.armaan looked her green almond eyes but armaan broke his trance with riddhima's voice
ri:''armaan''
she smacked him again and
ar:''oouch basket lagta hai yar''
ri:''armaan hum please apnaa bakii ka jhagra kal continue karen mujhe sach me bahut neend aaa rai hai i am really tired''
armaan noticed she is looking very tired so he said and
ar:''ok mai kch karta hun doosre blanket ke liyye''
and he was about to get up from bed
ri:''nai armaan bahar mat jao sab kya sochenge rehne do''
ar:''to riddhima kya karun mai''
ri:''please tum saara apnii taraf mat khinchna bas''
ar:''ok''
and she covered herself with blanket when armaan's eyes again fell on her hands,he is noticing her hands from marriage and wants to ask her but could not this time he cant control himself
ar:''riddhima ek bat poochon please''
ri:''han bolo armaan par jaldi''
ar:''vo basket ye tumhare hathon aur pairon ko kya hua i mean its completely black r u alright na kch hua to nai na basket''
riddhima saw concern in his voice but she did not know wht to say when she did not say anything armaan asked her
ar:''oh my god riddhima is it ur mehndi colour?''
riddhima nodded approvingly
armaan was surprised but more thn surprised he is shocked but in deep his heart he is very happy to know its her mehndi colour and he himself did not know when he asked
ar:''can i see''
riddhima who is occupied with her own thoughts placed her hands in front of him and armaan looked at her hands and arms in which her red bangles placed
ar:''riddhima bahut sundar hai ye i just love it u know''
riddhima just looked at him
ar:''i mean ur mehndi vaise riddhima is it true ki mehndi ke rang me husband ka pyaar dikhta hai''
ri:''thanks armaan for complement and good night mujhe bahut neend aaa rai hai''
she avoid his question as she did not know wht to say.
ar:''hmm'' 
and she covered herself with duvet and go to sleep but armaan was in his thoughts
ar:''yar ye kya ho rahaa hai mujhe aj mujhe riddhima itnii sundar kyoon lag rai thi.aakhir kyoon aj kal mai jab bhi ose dekhta hun mujhe ek ajeeb sa ehsas kyoon hotaa hai.abhie ose pareshan dekh kar mujhe boora kyoon laga.kya ho rahaa hai mujhe?vaise vo aj is laal jode me bahut sundar dikh rai thi ootni hi sundar jitni farewell party me os red dress me dikh rai thi sauce vaala laal bas man kar rahaa tha dekhe jaon. 
                            aur aj to ek dam pari lag rai thi sundar parii ek masoom si parii.mujhe ose dekh kar aisaa kyoon lagta hai ki riddhima basket se sundar koi ladki nai hai.os din farewell par bhi os se sundar koi nai lag rahaa tha aur aj bhi nai.par aj to shaadi thi na humari aur shaadi me to har ladki har dulhan achii dikhti hai par merii dulhan se sundar koi dulhan nai hogii na hii kabhie lagii hogii.bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut sundar jo lag rai thi tabhie to jab vo mandap me ayi to sab ose hii dekh rahee the''
                                   armaan dude tu ye kya bol rahaa hai tu riddhima ke vaare me itna soch rahaa hai vo basket hai armaan basket aur mujhe basket ke vaare me yad hai ki oosne farewll par kya pehna tha,aj tak to kabhie ye yad nai aya itnee saalon me fir aj kaise ya fir mujhe yad tha''
            aur aj jab isnee mujhe galat samjha to mujhe boora kyoon laga aakhir kyoon humne aj tak ek-doosre se jhagra karne ya ek-doosre ko satane ya ek-doosre ko kosne(curse)karne ke ilava kiyya hi kya hai par aj mujhe boora kyoon lag rahaa hai
                 aur mehndi ka rang dekhkar khushi kyoon ho rai hai ki itnaa dark kya mai riddhima se pyaar nai yar ye sab shaadi ke atmosphere ke kaaran mujhse sab aisaa feel ho rahaa hai ya sach me kch hai  
                           ab ye to ane vaala kal hoi btayega ki kya hai humari kismat me aakhir kyoon
          y we desitened to be
                                            dekhte hai ye miss basket aur mr.attitude ki shaadi kya rang laati hai let us see kya hota hai
                                   and he looked at riddhima who is in her deep sleep
                                 and armaan smiled at her while thinking and
                            kitni masoom lag rai hai sotee hue ek bache ki tarah ek angel''
and he smiled while lookin at her and covered her properly with blanket
(abhie lad rahee the dono is blanket ke liyye aur ab)
ar:''good night mrs.basket mallik''
and he also drifted to sleep.




 finally completed Smile

now please leave ur comments 

it means a lots to me

with lots of luv

nikita


Edited by niki.5 - 06 February 2011 at 1:35am

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
nice where is ur update of dharkan ban gaye ho tum i m waiting for it

update both of ur ff everyday

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged

Wowww dear u updated the 2nd part....just loved itClap ...soo AR are destined to be together.....waiting for the nxt part so do continue soon....thanks for the PM Dear......Big smile

Take Care
GEET

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged

that was marvelous....

loved AR bickering sooo much........

they r awsum..........

hayee...dont wanna marry but have to........

continue soon..

thnx for the pm............

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