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hey friends nikita here i am writing one shot actully a bit long one shot having 5 parts so tell me ur opinion about it,to continue or not           
               
                Y WE ARE DESITNED TO BE
                                 ONE SHOT
                                     AR FF
                                       part
                                          1
                                     

G:mom ye ladkii kahin iskaa nam
RIDDHIMA GUPTA to nai na?''
a guy asked from his mother
L:''han iskaa nam riddhima hai tum jaante ho ise?''
hearing his worst nightmare come true he is shocked beyond limits
when he did not speak lady nudged him to his shoulder
L:''ARMAAN mai kuch pooch rai hun''
ar:''ji mom''
bi:''so ananya jab armaan riddhima ko jaanta hi hai to ose shaadi karne se bhi koi aitraj nai hogaa kyoon armaan?''
his dad balvinder mallik asked while entering
ar:''nooo''
he shouted
an:''armaan r u mad wht was for tht?''
ar:''dad chillaon nai to aur kya karun mai os riddhima se shaadi kabhie nai karonga''
bi:''kyonn kya problem hai tumhe achii ladki hai well-educated even tumhari tarah doctor hai,achii family se hai sundar hai aur kya chaiye tumhe?''
ar:''but dad i do not like her mujhe vo school ke dinon se hi napasand hai dad''
an&bi:''school ke dinon se kya matlab?''
ar:''han school ke dinon se.apkoo pta hai kitni jor se bat karti hai vo,jara si bat par excite ho jaati hai aur jab dekho mujhse age niklne ki koshish karti hai,poore time bak-bak karte rehti hai bilkul bhi chup nai hoti pata nai log kaise tolerate karte hai ose.mai to 2 min bhi na jhel paaon ose.aur gussa to jaise nak pe baitha rehta hai,nakchadi kahin ki.aur mere raaste me ana to jaise ooska one and only hobby hai. aur app chahte ho mai os se shaadi karon mai marna pasand karonga os se shaadi karne ke alava.so i am not getting married to her''
an:''ye vohii hai jo tere first ati thi kabhie-kabhie par 1 ya 2 marks ka hi farak hota tha''
ar:''han mom ye vohii hai tabhie to mai is se shaadi nai kaaronga''
when armaan tell him the reason tht y he did not want to marry riddhima both ananya and billy roll into laughter
ar:''ap dono kyoon hans rahee ho?''
bi:''armaan u r limit tum os se shaadi is liyye nai karoge because she is ur competitive in school''
ar:''dad''
bi:''stop it armaan tumhari shaadi riddhima se hi hogii vo is ghr ke liyye perfect hai''
armaan know his dad very well he knows if he is so adamant about anything no one could not do nything and he has to marry riddhima,no escape until riddhima deny this marriage herself about tht he was sure tht riddhima never agreed to this marriage
ar:''ok''
bi:''gud''
an:''mai abhie samriti ko phone karti hun''


Somewhere
one girl  screams in horrar seeing a snap
sa:''riddhima tu pagal hai kya?''
ri:''mom ye armaan as in ARMAAN MALLIK hai''
sh:''han beta he is also doctor''
ri:''so wht i am not gonna marry him.i do not like him from school''
sa:''school?"
ri:''han ek number ka akdoo hai.itnaa attitude ki poocho mat aur iskee attitude ke age to mount everest bhi chotta hai.aur apnee ap ko aisee samjhta hai jaise is see jyada samjhdar aur intelligent to iss duniya me koi nai hai sadoo kahin ka.ek number ka backstabber hai''
sh:''backstabber?''
ri:''han jab bhi poori class decide karti thi ki sab bolenge ki kissi ko test nai ata aur punishment kam milegi to ye akdoo 'no mam i am prepared',duffer kahin ka aur mujhse first ana to iskii life ka foremost imp kam hai,so mai is se shaadi nai karongi''
as soon shashank and samriti heared this they also roll in laughter like billy and ananya
riddhima glares them
ri:''wht?''
sa:''tum ek school ke bachpane ke kaaran ye shaadi nai karna chahti''
riddhima nodded
sh:''na riddhima terii shaadi armaan se hogii he is perfect for u and maine billy ko han bhi keh diyya hai''
ri:''but''
sh:''no my decision is final''
riddhima also knows tht her father is not going to change his decision but she knows armaan also  did not like her so he himself reject her so she is happy and say
ri:''ok papa''
but thn  phone rang and after hearing the call samriti pulls her in warm hug
sh:''kya hua samriti itnii khush kyoon ho?aur kiska phone tha?''
sa:''shashank armaan ne shaadi ke liyye han kar di''
riddhima is in shock after hearing this
ri:''kya''
sm:''han beta mai bahut khush hun tu aur armaan ek saath bahut khush rahoge''
sh:''han mai bhi billy se bat karke jaldi se shaadi ka muhurat niklvata hun''
and they hugged riddhima and leaves


MALLIK HOUSE
armaan saw his mom coming he thinks tht riddhima must say ''no'' to this marriage as she did not like him
ar:''its ok mom mujhe pta tha ki riddhima is shaadi ke liyye nai manegi''
he said slowly but very happy from heart
an:''armaan kya bol rahaa hai?riddhima ne mna nai kiyya hai oosne han ki hai''
bi:''sach ab to mai chat mangni pat shaadi karaonga''
and he hugged armaan who is shocked
and his parents left and
ar:''ye kya ho rahaa hai mujhe to lagaa tha ki ye riddhima mujhe pasand nai karti jo ki vo sach me nai karti to oosne han kyoon kahi.pagal ho gayyi hai bewkof ladki.par mai os se shaadi nai kar sakta mujhse vo 2 min bardasht nai hotii to poori zindagi kaise?oh god please help me mai kabhie jhooth nai bolunga.par please mujhe os MISS BASKET se shaadi nai karni bachao mujhe.mom-dad ko bhi poori duniya me yehii milli thi merii shaadi karane ko aur ose kya padii thi han karne ki''
he cursed riddhima.


GUPTA MANSION
riddhima was in her room
ri:''zara bhi nai badla idiot kahin ka abhie bhi merii life me problem create karne ka koi chance nai chodta par abkii bar to bat ooski apnii life ki bhi hai to oosne han kyoon kaha pagal ho gayya hai.mujhe achee se pta hai vo mujhe kitna napasand karta hai fir bhi khadoos ne shaadi ko han bol diyya.jis insan ka chehra dekh kar mera exam kharab ho jaata tha ooska chehra roj dekhongi to meraa kya hogaa.ab mai kya karon mai os MR.ATTITUDE MASTER se shaadi nai karna chahti.bhagwanji please merii help karoo mujhe ye shaadi nai karni.os moron, jerk, idiot, stupid,duffer se''
and she also cursed armaan fully.



NEXT MORNING
riddhima was about to enter in sanjeevani when a bike passed from her in very high speed she almost about to fall and she shouted
                  
ri:''oye hello dekh kar nai chala sakte tum,road par MANMOHAN SINGH ne tumhe private right diyya hai kya?''
and the guy put off his helmate and turned to saw who is shouted on him he thought to apologise but when he saw her,he dropped his idea
ar:''mujhe samajh hi lena chahiye tha ki iss poori duniya me tum hi ho jo aisee chilla sakti ho.duniya ke kaan ke parde tum hi phaad sakti ho''
ri:''aur mujhe bhi pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha road par logon ke haath-pair todne ka contract tumhare pas hai''
ar:''to dekh ke chala karoo tumhara drawing room nai hai ye jo tehel rahii thi''
ri:''aur yahan bhi koi race nai ho rai thi jo tum aisee chala rahee the''
ar:''oh really''
ri:''really''
suddenly her gaze fell on her wrist watch
ri:''tumhara to pta nai par mere pas tumse jyada important  kam hai karne ko''
ar:''han to jao roka kisne hai''
she gave him glare and leaves
ar:''oh shit armaan pehle hi din der ho hayyi vo bhi senior doctor hotee hue kya impression hai tera.aur ye sab is basket ke kaaran hua hai''
and he cursed her to full extent and leaves

NURSE STATION
ri:''gud morning mam''
ki:"oh dr.riddhima very gud morning apkii derii se ane ka kaaran btayengi jara''
ri:"mom vo''
ki:''had hai ap logon ki senior doctor hokar ye hal hai to interns ka kya hogaa?''
ar:''good morning dr.kirti i am dr.armaan mallik''
ki:''oh welcome dr.mallik maine to soona tha ki u.s.a ke sanjeevani ke best intern always on time but u''
ar:''i am sorry mam vo''
ki:''its ok its ur first day so u r forgiven but do not repeat ur mistakes''
ar:''ok mam''
ki:''and dr.riddhima as ur punishment u have duty in path lab also as well night shift and u also show dr.armaan sanjeevani''
ri:''but mam''
when kirti glares
ri:"ok mam''
ki:''gud now back to work''
and she leaves
ar:''oh someone is angry oh''
ri:''tumhe to mai''
ra&at:''armaan''
ar:"hey guys kaise ho tum?''
ra:''hum achee hai aur tu?''
ar:"fit and fine''
at:''aur bta u.s se vaapis kyoon aaa gayya?''
ar:''bas champ u know na mom-dad bas isliyye''
and he noticed an.mu
ar:''hey anjali hey muskaan''
an:"hey armaan long time right''
ar:"ya after high school i think''
mu:''ya vaise looking very handsome''
ar:''thanks muskaan vaise tum sab bhi bahut beautiful ho gayye ho except one,yo basket apnee friends se hi kch tips le lo,still same salwar kameej''
ri:"so wht is ur problem at least tumse to better hi lagti hun.tum to vahii poorane oopar ke char buttons khule itna hi shaq hai apnii body dikhane ka so y wasting ur money on clothes,stupid kahin ke''
she said as she is in her full anger as because of her she scolded by dr.kirti
ar:''tum had se jyada age badh rai ho''
ri:''aur tumhari to koi had hi nai hai''
ar:''tum''
ri:''kya mai boloo''
at:''guyss peace tum to aj hii shuru ho gayye''
an:''han rinsi chal nai to aur daant pad jayegi''
ri:''vo to hona hi tha iskaa chehra jo dekh liyya aj subh hi'' 
ar:''ab ye chehra roj dekhna padega remember we are getting married''
armaan said
all:"wht"

 

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with lots of luv and regards 

nikita


Edited by niki.5 - 27 November 2011 at 1:54pm

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                     Y WE ARE DESITNED TO BE
                                   ONE SHOT
                                       AR FF 
                                         part
                                            2


all:''kya"
an:''rinsi tu armaan se shaadi kar rai hai?''
ri:''anjie please hum is vaare me bad me bat karte hai mujhe jaana hai nai to dr.kirti aj mujhe chodengi nai''
mu:''han chal theek hai lunch break me bat karte hai''
ri:''ok''
ar:''nai tum insee lunch break me bat nai kar sakti''
ri:''kyoon nai kar sakti ab tumhe is se bhi problem hai?kyonki merii tumse shaadi ho rai hai is liyye mai apnee doston se bhi bat nai kar sakti''
riddhima said in full anger
ar:''oh ho sweetheart aisaa nai hai remember dr.kirti ne tumhe mujhe sanjeevani dikhane ki duty bhi di hai to lunch break me to we have to go on the trip to sanjeevani''
ri:''ye sab bhi tumhare kaaran hi hua hai na tum mere saath bahar jhagra karte na mujhe back to back duties milti aur tumhare saath kahin bhi jaane se to behtar mai jahunam me jaana pasand karongi aur khabardar jo tumne mujhe sweetheart kaha to''
she points finger to him
    
ar:''nai to kya kar logii aur vaise bhi tumhari khush kismati hai ki maine tumhe sweetheart kaha ladkiyan mere muh se ye words sunne ko tarasti hai''
ri:''oh vo bhi tum jaisi hi hongi kam dimag vaali''
ar:''chalo jaisi bhi hai kam se kam mujhe chahne vaale to hai par tumhe aj tak kabhie kissi ladke ne mudke bhi dekha hai''
ri:''armaan bahut ho gayya ab''
ar:''oh really dr.basket sweetheart gupta''
ri:''tum''
she stomped her feet and leaves as she know if dr.kirti saw her here fighting with armaan she again will be in  trouble
ar:''yo basket kahan ja rai ho jahunnam me jaldi vaapis mat ana''
he shouted and riddhima turned and gives him deadly glares and leaves.


after sometime riddhima is finding armaan so tht she can show him sanjeevani
ri:"pata nai kahan hai merii jaan ka dushman''
ar:''yo basket kissi ko dhundh rai ho''
ri:''nai mujhe to aj kal kch dhundhne ki jarorat hi nai padti sab kuch bine maange hi mill raha hai duties,daant aur to aur ek readymade dulha bhi''
ar:''vao yar basket same mere saath bhi ho rahaa hai mujhe bh readymade dulhan mill rai hai''
ri:''armaan please mera bilkul bhi mood nai hai jhagra karne ka aur mai bahut thaki bhi hui hun to please hum ye jhagra bad me continue karen''
ar:''kyon abhie se dar gayyi tab nai socha jab is shaadi ke liyye han kaha tha,itnaa napasand hun mai to han kyoon ki''
ri:"to mana to tum bhi kar sakte the ye hum dono jaante hai ki ek-doosre ko napasand karna mutual feeling hai''
ar:''mai aisaa nai kar sakta tha my dad apnee words ke paake oonhone kabhie bhi merii bat na maante rather thn mujhe ghr se bahar phenk dete aur mujhe laga tum mujhe pasand nai karti to tum mna karoge so i said 'yes'''
ri:''same go with me mere papa bhi apnii bat par adamant the aur vo mujhe emotional blackmail karke''han'' karva hi lete aur mujhe bhi laga ki tum to mujhe 2 min bhi bardasht nai kar sakte to tum to kabhie han nai karoge to i said'yes'''
      
ar:''matlab ab ki''
but before he can complete the sentence there is announcement for riddhima and she leaves


Locker Room
an:''to rinsi ab tu kya karegi''
ri:''mujhe nai pata''
mu:''matlab ki kya ab tu sach me armaan se shaadi karne vaali hai''
ri:''yar muski kaha na ki pata nai vaise bhi merii shaadi ka sapna to finish kyonki mujhe pata hai hum dono ek-doosre ko bilkul bhi pasand nai karte to ye marriage to ek disaster proov hone vaali hai''
an:"aur baise bhi tu to ose apne liyye unlucky maanti hai han school me jis din bhi tujhe dikhta tu kehti thi tera paper kharab jayega''
ri:''aur aisa hota bhi to tha''

they were unaware tht armaan listened all of their convo
ar:''yar ye hamesha mujhe apnee liyye unlucky kyoon manti hai?kya sach me mai iskee liyye itnaa boora hun ki iskaa din,exam mera chehra dekhne se kharab ho jaata hai.mujhe kabhie school me bhi samajh nai aya ki exam vaale din ye mujhe dekh apnaa chehra kyoon turn kar leti thi?aur ab hum poori zindagi ek-doosre ke saath kaise guzarenge''


Night
armaan was leaving for his home when he saw riddhima 
ar:''yo basket kya hua rat bhar sadak par rehna hai kya?''
ri:''armaan please jao mai pehle hi pareshan hun aur mat karoo''
ar:''ok vaise chalo tumhe chod dun rat ke 3 vaje hai tumhe taxi nai milegi''
ri:''tumhare saath kabhie bhi nai''
ar:''oye mujhe bhi tumhare saath ane ka koi shaq nai hai ek to  help kar raha hun oopar se attitude de rai ho,theek hai mat aao''
he start his bike but did not go just giving it race riddhima setteled at bike with frown on her face and armaan zoomed off
ri:''armaan tum dheere chalo thoda,mai gir jaongi''
ar:''to tum pakad ke baitho''
ri:''armaan kabhie to kissi ki bat sun liyya karoo''
suddenly there was jump on road and due to tht riddhima's hands on armaan's shoulder
and to tease her armaan did not slow the speed and riddhima cursed him under her breath and closed her eyes as she feared
ar:''ootro tumhara ghr aaa gayya''
riddhima jumped from bike and
ri:''thanks''
ar:"oh basket ko bhi manners hai''
ri:''tumse to bat karna bekar hai''
ar:''achaa riddhima hum apnaa jhagra bad me karte hai''
ri:''oh come again armaan mallik mujhe riddhima keh ke boola raha hai aur ose jhagra nai karna''
ar:''fine mat bat karoo ek to''
ri:''achaa fir shuru mat ho jaana sorry bolo kya bol rahee the''
ar:''kya humari shaadi sach me ho jayegi?''
ri:''mujhe nai pata kyonki mai to apne papa ko mna nai sakti agr tum apne dad ko mna sakoo to shayad''
ar:''nai ye nai ho sakta because mr.billy mallik ko mnana is next to impossible''
ri:''armaan hume sach me ek-doosre se shaadi karni padegi''
now she is having tears in her eyes
     Ouch

ar:''i think so'' 
armaan also tensed and hearing his words riddhima ran to her house.and he is tensed did not know wht to do and if this marriage happens how will they sustain this relation,
    





Edited by niki.5 - 11 January 2011 at 1:38am

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nice os.

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awesome OS
thnx  for pm

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hey niki.
This one is awesome..I am in  for it Smile
Ha ha love to see them fighting like cats n dogsLOL Can't wait to see them mrd and fall in love ...
Continue soon...

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loved it yaar..

simply amazing..

cotinue soon...

thnx for the pm.......

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heyy nikki 
awesome part
loved teh description of AR for eachother:P
loved it 
cont soon 
n thx for pm
dhruvika

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