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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Limo mein baitne ke liye takdeer hona chahiye.. Takdeer na sahi.. Kam se kam haisiyat toh chahiya.. Tere liye toh paidal jaana hi likha hai.. Mangvau ek Nike ya addidas?

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jake-neil

Limo mein baitne ke liye takdeer hona chahiye.. Takdeer na sahi.. Kam se kam haisiyat toh chahiya.. Tere liye toh paidal jaana hi likha hai.. Mangvau ek Nike ya addidas?


thats like it bhai....

just put them like poem and your lines will do the wonders....
the previous one looked like a post...

humaare takdeer ki baat kya karte ho aap
sochna tha NGO me kaam karne se pehle
apni baat se mukarna kaayaron ka kaam hai
aur sab ko nahi aate maarne, nehle-pe-dehle

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
nehle pe dehla nahi toh dehle pe nehla hi marte hai
kuch aur naa sahi khaali bethe bethe ultti ginti hi seekh lete hai..
aaj hum peeche hai toh kya hua... agle kadam ki umeed toh ab bhi barkraar hai..

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Clap

kadam se kadam milaane se hi to manjil milti hai
humsafar ke hone se hi to safar aasaan hoti hai
sikhaane ko bahut kuch sikha deti hai jindagi
khud par hasna jo seekhle, uski baat hi alag hoti hai


Edited by upasana.diya - 10 January 2011 at 11:48am

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
baat tumne jo kahi hai falsaffa  zindagi kaa..
khud pe haste haste dusro ko hassa gaye..
aur kuch naa kar paye... do pal kay liye hi sahi kisis ki musaakn ka karan hum khud ko bana gaye..


Edited by sam1903 - 10 January 2011 at 1:21am

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Clap wonderful

muskaan bikherna hi to hona chahiye jeevan ka uddeshya
samjh gaya jo is falsafe ko, hoga na use jindagi me koi klesh
jo is uddheshya ko sweekar karega, maan kar Eesh ka aadesh
uska jeevan kaal hoga, jaise kiya ho usne swarg me pravesh

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
jannat ki chah mein insaan kya kya nahi karta
Yeh nahi sochta koyi ke khuda ne yeh dunya jannat se kam khoobsoorat nahi banaya
Yeh duniya ek jannat hi to hai
Bas logon ka dekhne ka nazarya alag hai

That was my first attempt at shayari..how was it?

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
umda hai fiza aapi Smile

Nazar nazar se milake dekho

Raaze dil, bekhowf sunake dekho

Wada hai aapse, paaoge na hum jaisa

Bas ek baar aazma ke to dekho

 




Edited by upasana.diya - 10 January 2011 at 2:01pm

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