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GOTW: Main Shayar To Nahi...Magar...

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Hello All.....

Yesterday me an sam were playing this game and replying to each other's "Shayaris" as our own instant creative shayaris....

so thought why cant we play it here at Forum as
Game of The Week....

So here is a
Very New...
Very Creative....

Game...
that i named as
"Main Shayar To Nahi"

where u all have to reply Only and Only...
as A Shayari.....

means...if i'll put any then keep the meaning in mind and continue the with it and create ur own shayari and reply....

for example...

My First:
Is aahat ki awaj dil sun na bhi chahta hai...
par agle pal baichain ho jata hai....
ke kaun hai jiski aahat par dil ki bachiani sambhalti nahi..


Then Sam's:
samleghi bhi kaisi jab is aahat main intezaar kay saath dard ka rishta hai
ghaav gehra hai par dhikhate nahi
dil rota hai par koi sunta nahi
sahyad yahi dille dastan pyaar kehlati hai
hai toh bas un khamosh kadmo ka intezaar


and again mine...
Intezaar To is dil ko kab se hai,
par dard ka rishta to bas tab se hai,
jab se nazro  ne unko dekha aur wo dil me utar gaye,
ab to mohabbat ke naam kar diye saare ghaav , dard, aansu.....
bar kar rahe hai intezaar k nazr-e-inayat ho aur ho jaye unka deedar...


So what are u waiting for....start being Creative Shayar...
and hope u'll njoy it...

Sam sorry for using urs here w/o asking ur permission....


Edited by -tellyaddict- - 17 January 2011 at 12:20pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
So now we have Shayars too! Excellent! Great start! 

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
i will not mind it...
as this game will be rocking... 
continuing where u end sadhli


deedar ho bhi gaya toh kya... 
naazre jinhe dhund rahi hai... 
unke mannn ki haalat toh ab hi  ek sawal hi hai..
kambhakt pehle se yeh dil pareshaan hai uspe sawalo ki sitamb bhi bemisaal hai




Edited by sam1903 - 09 January 2011 at 6:46am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Unka Man hi to hai jiski athah gehrayi me hum dub jana chahte hai...
par wo hai ke man me bhawanao ka sagar chhupaye rahte hai...
hum unko pareshan dekh nahi sakte hai....
aur wo hume apna humraaz banana nahi chate hai....




next please.....

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
jo sun na saka dil ki awaaz ko, use dil ke ghaav kya dikhaye
jo ban na saka humsafar, use humraaz kya banaye
kehte hai mehboob ghaav ka marham hota hai
par jo ghaav mehboob de, uspe marham kaun lagaaye


Edited by upasana.diya - 09 January 2011 at 7:47pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
ab ghaav aisa nasoor ban gaya hai ki zindagi uske bina adhuri hai
saanse leni majboori kyoki woh khuda ki amanta hai..
ae mere khuda apni amanat lekar humpe apni rehmat baksh
kahi aisa naa ho jaye iss dard ki attah ho jayeaur tera tohfa humari majboori ban jaye..
 
 
 
@sadhli and diya loved urs.... i am wondering hum itne senti kaise ho rahe hai....
what if we add one tadka of hassi majak in further contunantion


Edited by sam1903 - 09 January 2011 at 8:53pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Sam... wonderful lines....
i know too much of aansoos n Ghaavs... but what to do... SNS is all about aansoos right now... will try something funny for later... haasya kavi banna bahut hi mushkil aur sanjeeda baat hoti hai.... hehehhehe

jaan kar bhi, anjaan banna chahte the hum

barkaraar rakhna chahte the, pyaar ka bharam

woh humara hi to dil tha, jise usne thukraaya

phir bhi dhoondta hai dil, har sitam me bhi karam




Edited by upasana.diya - 09 January 2011 at 9:55pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Great shayaris but why so much melacholy? Cheer up guys! think of NHQ while writing the shayaris and not the story!

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