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~khamoshi~ Maaneet thread 2 (Page 149)

Azmii Goldie

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yaaay finally u are updating khamoshi
waiting Big smile

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Make it fast
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guess v will get the update in the next thread
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muskiii, waiting yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler

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we already are excited 4 th part so just dont teast our patience
bt we already are
so just post it quickly
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Part 17

Tears of happiness & love.. happiness to see her love in him the same passion in him the same madness that she held in her heart for him. She didn't even know how much more she loved him now, if that was ever possible. She wanted to scream loud I love u but she was shy. They ever exchanged just words yet.
As they were nearing the airport Maan got call from his house. He was busy rescheduling his work & directing every one to do wat & how to co-ordinate with him. They reached the airport Maan was still  in the call. The driver helped her with the luggage & Adhi came  & gave her their tickets who was already waiting for them at the entry gate. She had butterflies in her stomach. She seemed more excited like they were going for their honeymoon.  She couldn't stop herself from blushing & hiding the same from him.
Brij & papaji came to pick them from the airport. They touched papaji's feet & Maan hugged Brij.
Brij - aapki bussiness center ki baat hogayen hain
Maan - umm
Brij - it is ready, I can take u there when ever u want.
She twisted her lips .. aabhi tho ghar bhi nahi punche aur aabhi se kaam, yeh bhool jayen tho bhi veerji nahi chotenge.
There was big welcome arranged for them at home. It was the first time Maan coming to her house. They were more excited & thrilled. Rano & thai ji took the arthi & fed them sweets. The whole day Maan was held up with her relatives. While Geet was waiting to talk to him. He didn't even get time to change. Here thai ji was busy teasing her..aise bhi kya jaadoo kiya hain daamdji pe tumhe chod kar ek pal nahi rahten. Geet murmured ..ek pal subhe se meri taraf dehka bhi nahi. Isse aacha ghar pe the. Sab se baat karten hain mujhe se baat nahi katen. Main bhi nahi bolongi.
Thai ji - Geet bolna
she snapped nahi bolna mujhe
thai ji - isse kya huwa.
She went to the room, banged the door & locked it. Maan came out the washroom just wearing his tracks. His chest, his abs, his 6 packs.. wet & his scent filling the room. Her eyes widen like it was craving for it. Actually it was craving for him. He smiled & inched closed to her with clear intention of desire in his eyes. She murmured aab tho main inse naarz bhi nahi rah sakti. She tried to looked down & inched back. His eyes were looking at her like they could see through her cloths. she blushed, not knowing quite how to respond. He closed in on her then, towering over her until she was backed right up against the wall with his arms either side of her, trapping her there. She opened her mouth to complain his ignoring her the whole day which he never did though. He simply leaned in and captured her mouth with his.
The impact had been percussive, explosive and earth shattering. He seemed to pause for a moment in delight before the pressure of his lips increased. He flicked his tongue against hers and then ever so gently captured her bottom lip to suck lightly on it. He scooped her up to hold her tightly against him, his lips gaining in urgency, and geet let out a soft little whimper. Before she knew they were on her bed laying completely into each other, just them. He was passionate, like he longed for her more than she did. He touched her all over like he was complaining, like he was missing her.. same emotions that filled her. How could he feel wat she feels always she hugged him tight arching her back as his tongue softly danced over her curves & making their way to the hollow of her throat giving her no room to think anything but the ecstasy.
By week end they had settled down in her house. She even went to college couple of times to collect her exam schedule  & books from the library. She wore saree even to the college. Her friends teased her . But she didn't mind, actually didn't matter, she wanted to wear it for him. He loved her in sarees not that he said it in words but she knew it. He dressed her lovingly every single day least did they know. Its been 3months & still every single day he decides on her sarees, he helps her with fleets. He selects her bangels. He is so much into her every thing.
But he never spoke to her. She was now missing it, especially when she hears him chat with raji, cracking jokes, giggling GGGRRRRR she was definitely jealous. She wanted to hold his collar shake him & tell him to break this khamoshi between them, especially when she loves to talk so much. She can't believe that they are married for 3months not even a full sentence. How can that be.. yah right.. when ever she is with him invariable his mouth seals hers. Nahi .. he has to talk to me like he talks to every one.  She made a big fat face & sat flipping the pages.

11.30 pm he came into the room, she pretended to study. He changed & sat in the bed for a while rolling restlessly. She was just waiting for him to say one line. She checked the time it was 2am ..uff how mean. Meri bina hi so gaya, she turned to look he was no where she got restless & looked around, she went out of her room, checked in the hall, then she heard some vessels chime in the kitchen. She followed the sound, he was mixing some thing in the glass. He turned & jumped back almost dropping the glass in his hand. She stood their wondering wat he was up to.

He extended his hand gave the glass to her - horlicks
her eyes almost popped out. How could she remain angry at this person she thought. Always he had his sweet way outs without even saying a word. He waited for her.. she could barely concentrate now as if she was before. She pretended, she has studied a lot for the day. She closed her books & lay next to him on the bed.
He smiled at her as his hands began to stroke her skin. He moved to lie closer to her and his mouth began to explore her skin. He started with her face, his kisses moving across her cheek to linger at her mouth. His tongue dancing with hers and generating a heat in her like relaxing her. He kissed her throat and her neck, moving across and down her collar bone. He licked the swell  and tickled her with his tongue. 
Geet groaned and squirmed and at last he chuckled as he moved on again. Into the valley and down over her navel, kissing her stomach. He parted her legs, and she watched in fascination. The feeling of him in was irresistible. Her eyes dilated and the husky sound of her voice was alien to her ears. She was in love.. in love with him. It didn't matter any further if he actually said those words ..actually any words.
Geet could feel her muscles tightening in response to him, her body preparing itself for the most intense moment of the night for her, she knew they were just starting now. He drove her wild with longing, loving the sounds of her sighs, sobs, gasps and whimpers.


Geet & Maan both longing to say I love u
thanxs a lot for all the beautiful comments
To khamoshi' I am speechless'.Hope u like it..
please please tell me how you feel

Edited by muskanp - 17 April 2011 at 5:16pm

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yay! me first!! Big smilePartyDancing yaaaaaaay!
n the update was really nice!
lol geet jealous of raji!LOL
n maan was getting horlicks for sweeeet!
really loving it!


Edited by dimpzz - 01 March 2011 at 2:16am

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