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~khamoshi~ Maaneet thread 2 (Page 13)

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hw much more tym i hav test at 2 hehe i m in a rush jaldii karona plzzzzzzzzz begggg uu lol

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Part 10

He parted his lips to say sorry about what pami did, she just took those lips into hers & kissed him hugging him closer. A slight blushed touched her cheeks as she closed her eyes. He felt so happy & eased. His hands went around her bare waist sending in shivers down her closing them in a heat of desire. Soon the soft kiss turned into a passionate long kiss, their tongue danced  & explored while his hand knew exactly where to move. His hand moved under her blouse & then slipped in front cupping the soft globes & teasing them with his thumb, she arched backward & leaned on the couch. They were losing all over again into each other oops office!!! adi knocked the door maan snapped out & straightened himself. She looked totally flushed & stood up setting her saree. She looked at him & pulled him back. He narrowed his eye brows, she pointed at his lips before adi came in she quickly wiped her lipstick mark with her pallo. He smiled & went back to his chair.
Adi - good morning sir
maan still lost in her - umm
adi - the client meeting is scheduled for tomorrow
maan - mail me the detailed project plan
adi - ji sir
adi takes his leave & goes out.
Maan made a call to papaji from her phone
papaji wondering whoes number it was - hello
maan - ji.. maan
papaji - yeh koi naya number hain beta
maan - yeh geet ka number hain
she shied & looked at him
maan - ji idhar hi hain deta hoon
she comes near him delightfully
geet - ji papaji
maan tickles her, she falls on his lap, she gets up at once. He pulls her back into his lap & holds her around the waist. He turns the remote to close the blind.
Geet was really excited to talk to papaji about pugphere but conscious about sitting on his lap.
Maan gets naughty kissing her back she shakes & giggles on the phone
papaji - kya huwa, hass kyun rahi ho?
Geet controlling herself - ji kuch nahi.
Meanwhile his hands find there way back to her curves she gasp feeling really aroused with his touch
papaji - tum teehk ho na
geet softly panting - ji
she made a pleading face at him, he simply ignored it & stormily continued to kiss, she cuts the call at once & kisses him back with same flavor. He was shocked but loved it. Her phone rings. They both knew it was papaji. He took the phone & gave it to her. She kept it aside & continued to shower kisses on his cheeks. He knew she was not picking the call fearing his naughtiness. He removed his hand from her waist & gave the phone to her & kept is hands up in air. She smiled & took the phone. She took his hand & kissed them one at a time & rested them around her waist. He smiled naughtily, she blushed.

After the call she cupped his face & adored him. He looked at her curiously. She softly kissed his eyelids one after the other & slowly got off his lap. Her eyes were in so much of love he could read them, he knew what she wanted to say but said by kissing his eyes.

They came back home. She went to the room & freshened up. She heard a click at the door she knew it was him & wat was in his mind. He lifted her & took her to the bed intending to make love to her all over again. She blushed for a yes and helped him undress while his hand moved freeing her from the  saree & then the blouse. She wanted him just as he wanted her. He removed that inch of space, brushing her mouth gently against his in a kiss that was as sweet as their first one. Her breath became faster as maan moved his fingers to her neck & gently began stroking the tender skin beneath her ear. Slowly, so slowly it nearly drove her insane. He replaced his finger with his tongue & trailed the tip  across her collarbone, then drove to the deep valley. She moaned maan driving him to insanity wanting more, so much more. His mouth moved down over the curve of her *****, teasing, tempting. She arched toward him. As he moved in she wrapped her arms around his neck pulling him closer for  a  deep wet kiss. He gradually moved into a pace soon driving in all the way deep & hard. There was no pain, she was completely ready for him, her softness yielding instantly to him. She loved the heaviness  of his body on hers, the roughness of his stubble on her soft tender cheek, the smell of his sweat and  the steady strokes which filled her. There was never room for words between them as the rhythm  caught them they sunk into the flow & lay panting catching for lost breaths. They did have to break for  lunch & then dinner but nothing stopped them back to get close again to be complete again.

Next day geet got up early & went to the wash room slipping into his kurti. She came out after her shower. She looked into the wardrobe selecting a dress. She picked a suit he surprised her by moving her wet hair aside & kissing her neck. She smiled & tilted her neck making room for him. His hand slipped under the kurti & pulled it over from the neck she hid herself in his bare arms. after they had their morning share of love making. He choose a deep read saree for her. She blushed & got dressed in that saree. She went down to the kitchen & helped nakul with breakfast.

Maan came down to the breakfast table he looked little disturbed. She served his breakfast & wondered wat bothered him. Rano & Papaji just walked in to take geet for pugphere. Maan & geet took their blessings. Daadi welcomed them & offered some tea. Maan excused himself & went to the study. He looked into his laptop & found it very difficult to concentrate. The thought she will be gone was eating him. He hated the feeling. He never expected it would matter so much, he was any way going to pick her up latter in the evening today then why was he feeling so restless. He closed the laptop & stood near the long window. He could hear the conversation of daadi with papaji. they were just taking her to the their relatives house in delhi & maan had to pick her from their.

They just told geet to get her purse. He couldn't see her go, he punched the rim of the window. He wondered why was he being so immature. It is just matter of few hours. He could hear her running up the steps to get her purse & then latter walking down slowly. He hated it all. He just closed his eyes probably a tear too formed when a hand slide around his waist towards his shoulder. She hugged him with tears in her eyes too. He immediately turned to hug her really madly like he was not going to let her go.

She hugged him with no desire to go. Their heart exactly knew what they felt & their eyes still granted a permission with a promise to be together just in few hours but the few hours!!!!OMG..that seemed so long they again wrapped their arms around, until daadi called for geet.

already missing each other uff!!!

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thanxs a lot for all the beautiful comments
To khamoshi.. I am speechles....Hope u like it..
please please tell me how you feel

Edited by muskanp - 13 January 2011 at 9:41am

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
awesome update dumbstuck with their expression of love thro silence.....loved it

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Preethi-Premi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Ithni khamoshi!Heart
Muski... how do you pull it off! Hats off!Clap please update soon dear....

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woooww..nic love.....n loveee

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
wow ....... very nice 

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
loved the silence...
their silence is so expressive!!!!
li used to love their messaging!! start that
hey muskaan looking forward to their honeymoon!!!!

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