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~khamoshi~
Part 16

 
Geet was really upset. Then she thought did he misunderstand her. She got confused. Did he think she wanted to go.. oh god how could he misunderstand her. Even if she wanted how could he let her go. She hated it, hated every dam thing, one month away from him & he just coolly agreed. He came & hugged her from behind. She snapped & turned away. It was the first time she snapped in anger. He definitely didn't like it. He got angry & just walked away. She expected him to love her pacify her, but instead he got angry. Ek tho mujhe aapne se dor bhej rahen hain, uppar se he is not even talking to me. She got frustrated & cried the whole day hiding her face in the pillow. Mujhe nahi jana. Mujhe nahi jana. She didn't know wat was she more upset about him sending her away or his being angry at her. But all she knew was she didn't want to be away from him. But now she was angry at him, but hated herself even at that state of mind she wanted to be with him.
 

Maan came in at night to see she had hidden her face in the pillow. She heard him pulling the suitcases. She hated it more knowing he was packing her bag. She pulled the spread & hid herself deep in cursing herself. Shaadi ki 2 months main sara pyar ccho ho gaya. He probably doesn't love me.. actually he never loved me... it was just attraction. Ummmm....she cried more hating all this. Kya zaroorat thi mama ko phone karne ki. Sab kuch kitna aacha tha..kuch bolte nahi the phir bhi kabhi nahi laga ki nahi bola.. main unki har baat samjh jati hoon.. who kyun nahi meri baat samj payen. Kyun nahi samjhe ki mujhe unki saat rahena hain. Why why r u sending me away. Did he lose interest in me.

 
Maan finished the packing & went out. She cried louder seeing him being so cold. Maan went down & told Daadi about her exams & the trip. Daadi was ok with it. Later at night when Geet went to the kitchen to arrange for dinner with her swallen eyes.
pammi - itne dino taak jane ki kya zaroorat hain
Geet murmured dehko inhe bhi lagta hain, aur woh hain ki..uff..how can he send me.
She smiled weakly & came off.
 
 
After dinner she was frustrated & irritated to the core. She gave up & decided to tell him she really didn't want to go & she definitely can't stay with out him. She ran into the room & hugged him & started crying madly. She couldn't speak anything she choked crying. He was angry with her snapping away like that in the morning but couldn't have remained so wild after seeing her tears like that. She had never cried like this since they got married. He hated himself to have done this to her..He passionately swept her expressing all his care & love; made her lay on the bed. She didn't let go of him crying & hugging him. He undressed her still lying close in his arms. She couldn't stop crying madly. He kissed away her tears. She was going nuts, she felt herself so inseparable from him. She didn't care any more whether he felt the same, at this moment she knew she couldn't have stayed away from him. His lips teased her exposed skin pleasing her calming her, but she was no where near stopping. He pleased her thoroughly kissing, around her curves. His hands tried to hold her hand but she didn't let go her grip around his neck. He wondered why was she so disturbed, may be because of his temper in the morning he felt guilty. He couldn't see her so stressed he made love to her more passionately than ever, more lovingly than ever. He just kissed her as he entered. Her grip around his neck tightened. He was so soft & caring. He moved in rhythm to suit her to sooth her.

She moaned in pleasure still the pain of going away was not letting her but his love & passion drove her out of the tears making her cry & moan under him. They reached their flood together like never before, more in love & care. She hugged him fearing of the next day.

Next day Maan got ready while she was making a big grumpy face. He pulled out nice blue saree for her. She didn't want to get ready. But every thing was so leading. She went into the wash room & got dressed. Inhe tho kuch pharak hi nahi padta main jaa rahi hoon, ulta mujhe bhagne main lagen huwain hain. Kal unhe raat ko bol sakti thi na.. nahi... ulta masti kar rahi thi unke saat. She was taking longer than her usual self. Maan was restless pacing outside the bathroom. He looked at his watch couple of time. He didn't want to miss the flight. As she walked out she saw him pacing, she murmured he is so restless ..as if he is just waiting for me to leave.

 
He immediately ran to her & got her dressed. She hated it all. She halfheartedly got ready. While he was setting her fleets & helping her with bangels & bindis. He looked at her lovingly & admired her as always he kissed her forehead & hugged her. She felt like a lump forming in her heart. They both walked down the stairs while Nakul got the luggage.

 
 
Geet bend down to take Daadi 's blessings even Maan did. She wondered why he did.
Pammi - mujhe abhi bhi samjh nahi aa raha tumhe jane ki kya zarorat hain
he shot a stern glance - how can I let her go alone
she was shocked beyond words. She looked at him in awe. She couldn't believe wat she just heard.
Pammi - teehk hain usse drop kardena, wanha 1month rahne ki kya zarorat hain. Woh tumhara sasural hain, aise aacha thodi lagtha hain
Maan - agar Geet apne sasural rah sakti hain tho main kyun nahi
pammi - lekin
Daadi - lekin wakin kuch nahi, just take care of her
Daadi caressed geets cheek - exam aache se likna

Geet felt her heart may just drown ..sink with the love & passion he holds for her.. how wrong she was all the while.... Maan is coming with her to mumbai & he will stay in her house for a month. The Maan Singh Khurana... OMG...wat about his work. He is leaving every thing just for me.. aur main soch rahi thi.. chi chi babaji ..she had tears in her eyes, tears of happiness & tears of guilt. She looked at him all puzzled & feeling guilty ashamed. He knotted his brows why she still upset. He looked at her for a moment & hugged her in front of every one realizing wat she was thinking until now, wat probably she was thinking until now..OH GOD I should have told her.. I am such a idiot.. she was crying whole night becuase she thought I am letting her away from her..OH NO... How could I ' he hugged her tighter. Her tears flooded his shirt.. her heart was filled with love for him & now it couldn't take it anymore. As they sat in the car ..he squeezed her hand that rested on him sorry she shook her head & kissed him. Tears of happiness & love.. happiness to see her love in him the same passion in him the same madness that she held in her heart for him. She didn't even know how much more she loved him now, if that was ever possible.
 
 
PRECAP
Maaneet in Mumbai
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thanxs a lot for all the beautiful comments
To khamoshi' I am speechless'.Hope u like it..
please please tell me how you feel
Love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 17 April 2011 at 5:08pm

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loved it to the core
thanks a lot 4 this wonderful updateSmile

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lovely  update.

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awwwwwwwww how sweet of maan
he'll be going with her to mumbai!
love him!
really sweet update!

love
Navpreet


Edited by dimpzz - 19 February 2011 at 12:27pm
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how can u not speak for 2 months???ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked

 
thats khamoshi i guess.....
 
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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 19 February 2011 at 12:26pm

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Nice update...really lovely...So Maan is also going with her...but if he stays with her how will she be able to concentrate on her exams WinkLOL.....they always don't get enough of each other.....I don't know how will she write her exams...lol....anyway...so this is sort of Honeymoon for them since they missed their actual one....good....lets see how this will be....Tongue

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love their love
awesome update hun
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