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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 4 (Page 87)

rs12345 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged

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-eiya- Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
diiiii...toooo gud...tooo   cute....awsm...luvd it...i really loved d bonding between them.....diiii i reallly hv to find words to appreciate u....u r just out of d world..i love to read ur ff,,,d feelings that you potray through words r just marvellous.Clap.Clap...diiii  actually thank u...i really had some prblms in understanding certain frnd tried her best to make me understand(she failed in doing thatLOL).........but all that went off d air whn i started reading ur a bigggggggggggg thank u nd HugHugHug.....

she pulls out his chain from her neck - see I have the license to drool over uROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

Edited by eiya22 - 16 January 2011 at 10:54pm

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
wow.. awesome update.... just loved it.....

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18mypride IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Hi Muskan, Smile
Main previous update padhke kar pareshan hogaee ke geet ko kya hogaya kissbaath se pareshan hai ... samajh nahien aaraha tha..aur rohpadi... CryGeet b'day ke din ILOVEU bhi nahien bola aur udaas liye mainne comment bhi nahien kiya...
ab pata chala mera muh band hi nahien horaha tha khushi se ... 
she hugs him hiding her face into his bare chest - lekin main tho aapki wife hoon na. Humne to shaadi ki hain na. he held her closer for a yes
she looks down feeling embarrassed how do I hold myself back. He hugs her dementedly, don't hold back, you don't have to hold back. I will always be there for you. 
she hugs him feeling so comfortable, like her old self. He sighed in relief & kisses her forehead. schweet na geet ne apne feelings izhaar kiya... aur maan ne kitne ache sambhaliya aur uski wify pehle jaise comfortable hogayee!!aur I LOVE U bhi kaha geet ne, now even am sighed!

Geet - I love you, I love you a lot.
Resting her cheek on his chest. Her hands now naughtily snakes his back feeling his sweat & every rumple of his muscle. Aap bhut hot ho. He blushes hearing those words from his little wify.
They spend rest of the birthday romancing more of little wify drooling all over again on her sexy husband. 
 MUSKAN i like the way u call as his little way!TongueTongueTongue
hmmm successssss kyun nahein MSK hai aur woh bhi geet ke!
maan - choice is urs. I will not sell my 50%
she pulls out his chain from her neck - see I have the license to drool over u
geet - aap to isme main bhi hot lagte ho
maan - yeh tumhara HOT HOT kuch jada nahi ho raha aaj-kal
hayyy ab party.... mujhe lagta hai geet nahien jayegi par maan woh bhi party mein bagair geet no way... afterall yeh sab geet inspiration hai na..... ab muskan hi batayegen!Embarrassed
Muskan geet MAAN kehkar kab bolayegi...suspense hai kya?.. ya phir officially shadi hojanapar..main intezar karungi..kyun ki main toh aap ki deewani islikhne ke andaaz pe..GOD BLESS U!

Edited by 18mypride - 16 January 2011 at 10:57pm

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ZahariliBichoo Senior Member

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Muskaan the depiction of Geet's innocent feeling is excellent. Brought tears in my eyes.  Aww specially reading this...
" Geet - mujhe pata hain phir bhi yeh sab galat hain, lekin mujh kuch nahi samjh aata, mujhe nahi pata aap kaise feel karte hoo, pata nahi even u feel the way I started to feel for u. pata nahi if u even know wat feelings I am talking about. Mujhe kuch nahi samjh aata. I don't know how to hold back myself, the moment I see you I just want to feel u in all the way possible. I love you I really love you. Mujhe aap ke bahon main aacha lagta hain. I feel like spending the whole day & night in ur arms. I feel I love u even more now. 
Tears fell from his eyes, she immediately cupped his face, it was craziness how did even she know tears rolled down his eyes. Before it reached his cheek she kissed it away - aapko meri baat buri lagi?"

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kellz Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
. Aap bhut hot ho lolz of he does he's MSK
wow geet is 14? she's young
love teh little wifey and hubby moments

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Lakshmi86 Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
what a lovely update!!!!!!!
Hmmm Geet is growing..........
i loved her innocent moves of telling all that she feels for Maan,
simply amazing yaar.................
hot hot ka chakkar was too good,
i know Maan will definitely take revenge on her, saying she is extremely beautiful.................
Hmmm business ka toh kamaal hogaya............
Maan is simply superb.............

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
tat was a hotty,cutty,sweety update
loved it
precap sounds interesting
can't wait for it.......

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