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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 4 (Page 70)

muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged

part 33

How much maan hit that guy, other guys didn't even dare to attack maan seeing the plight of their friend. They just backed off & dragged their friend from the pool of blood he was piled into. She felt nice actually loved it, she knew he loves her cares for her but never said it, but his actions always meant more, but it was way more than she could ask for.

Maan snatched her duppata from his hand. She stood staring at him walking towards her,his eyes was still fuming in anger,  she expected his obvious move to give the duppata back to her, but he didn't. He walked pass her towards the vendor selling butta(corn) he took the burning wood from the vendor & set a blaze on her duppata. She ran realizing his intention - aap yeh kya kar rahen ho?
He shot another stern look to her. She stepped beside him away from the burning material. Lekin he waited for it to burn completely & then dropped it down. He threw the burning log away & cupped her confused face - how can I let u wear wat he touched. he was still in so much of pain, she couldn't understand why  though. She hugged him with all her love that instantly calmed him down.
Maan - I am sor...she closed his mouth with her hand..he was sad about her duppatta but could think about she wearing it after some one had touched it. 
geet - kaha na no reason. U don't like it, that itself is the biggest reason. He kissed her hand that covered his lips, she blushed with his touch & pulled it back immediately feeling shivers electrocuting her.

Geet was realizing more about their relationship as she learned more about wat was being physical actually meant. She couldn't stop falling head over heal all over again for Maan. Every thing about him just made her his deewani. She was not able to understand the sudden attraction that began to intensify in her. The more she learned about the worldly aspects of a couple she felt the urge more to experience it. She wanted to feel him in every possible way. She was not able to voice it, because she also learned they were too young for all that, but the temptation was too much to handle with Maan being for handsome. She began to distance herself to control herself so that she doesn't say or do something unacceptable. the insecurity also build-in if he felt the same urges. Some where she knew the answer to it but some where she also felt insecured. His not being vocal about his feeling was also taking a toll on her.

Maans noida project was a great success. He had totally impressed his clients & Mr. Sharma to an extent that he offered him a much bigger project with a partnership this time. KC got enough funds now to modernize. Maan invested on getting the staffs equipped with computers. He didn't let go any of them since they never left KC, but his feeling & respect for them was never known to them until they all received training on using computers & a revised pay check. But he was still a strict boss with least expressions to understand.

She was 14 & he was 19 today. She presented him a latest model of mac laptop & a omega watch.
Maan - tumne kya liya
she looked dull - mujhe kuch nahi chahiya tha
he was watching her for few days he knew something was bothering her but didn't know wat. But her being so reserved on her birthday was making him wild & worried. More wild. Actually a feel of distancing was sinking in. he hated the feel but felt may be she is growing & may not be being herself anymore. They cut the cake & fed each other. He could see she was not looking at him anymore the way she used to. Oh my god the reality...she probably doesn't love me...probably she feels this relation as a burden already. These thoughts just made him mad. He just left every thing & walked away. He went to his empty karate gym & ripped his shirt away & began to work out insanely. The thought killed him, he was dead scared to think of a life without her. He couldn't force himself on her. But wat will he do without her. His life will be meaningless. He kicked punched he just kept on exerting himself his heart seemed to drown deep into pain & suffocation. He can't see her in this pain. She probably wants to stay away ...nahi aise nahi ho sakta, how can she ...why can't she, its her life, she can choose to do wat ever she wants.

Geet searched for him, she didn't know wat was it bothering him. She ran to the gym. She stood frozen to see him looking sizzling hot, his bare upper body dripping in sweat, his six packs which she never noticed until now. His perfectly toned body making him look so manly. She got carried away & walked towards him really close. He knew she was right behind him. He was not sure if he wanted to confront her or he could confront her. He couldn't bare to see anything but love in those eyes.

She so much wanted to touch him. She raised her hand to feel those sweaty skin on her fingers, she held back & turned her back at once. Tears welled down her eyes & she tried to drift away. He pulled his hand in front of her & stopped her. She immediately hid her tears.
Maan - kya baat hain
she smiled weakly - kuch nahi
he held her arms in a jerk - I can't see tears in those eyes u know that & that too because of me, I rather die she closed his mouth & looked at his eyes with so much of pain. He was shocked to see her eyes with so much of love, their eyes had not met, actually she never let them meet totally unlike her though.
He cupped her face instantaneously looking into those eyes trying to read them. How could he not see the love, yes she did love him, then wat was it, why was pain in those eyes. Wat is she holding back. So many questions running in his mind.  But he couldn't ask any thing after seeing those eyes.

She melted then in his arms his sweaty masculine scent, his toned body  & her urges took over her understanding. her hands slipped around his torso softly desperately towards his upper back. She passionately kissed his chest, sending shudders down him. Geet he bit back a groan. He could feel himself almost exploding, dam she has just kissed him nothing more, how could he, but things were always different with her. His body reacted way too illogical with her around totally out of his own control. He didn't hold her he lay his hand on either sides wanting desperately to hold her back. She nuzzled close to his neck his hand automatically hugged her closer he closed his eyes losing himself. His head bend closer to hers. Their heart raced loud enough to echo in the empty room.

geet crying & maan not able explain

~PREV    PART 32     NEXT   PART 34~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
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Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 16 January 2011 at 8:59pm

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged

first to comment........yipee........yipeeParty  Party

loved the part

He threw the burning log away & cupped her confused face - how can I let u wear wat he touched. he was still in so much of pain, she couldn't understand why though. She hugged him with all her love that instantly calmed him down.
Maan - I am sor... she closed his mouth with her hand..he was sad about her duppatta but could think about she wearing it after some one had touched it. 
geet - kaha na no reason. U don't like it, that itself is the biggest reason. He kissed her hand that covered his lips, she blushed with his touch & pulled it back immediately feeling shivers electrocuting her.

its too cute nd sweet...........

gr8 update,can't wait for next part di.............

con asap

Edited by dia_ditz - 15 January 2011 at 11:59pm

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Rocks.Dhara IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged

ooopss wat happen now that geet crying nd maan not able to explain...lolz

mushki can't wait for next part..!!

pls update waiting..Wink(vaise prats tu kab wait nahi karti...lolz)

Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 15 January 2011 at 11:58pm

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged


PLZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let there be no MU between MAANEET and they're deewangi reache new heights

Edited by shaaranya - 15 January 2011 at 11:55pm

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SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
I want to say something to geet.."geet! Tu bhi na.. Jhali hai puri.. Jo bhi man me hai regarding being physical and all .. Seedha bol de maan ko.. Tu kyu dar rahi hai.. Wo apne aap handle karega tere doubts ko.."

i want to say some thing to maan too"msk.. Be prepared.. Ab sherni ke mouth me hand diya hai to.. Handle her too.."

hehe.. Awesome update di.. Lets see how maan handles her this time...

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 16 January 2011 at 12:00am

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged reading it now..!!!:-)

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VSai2008 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it..
hope they speak their heart to each other
do continue soon
please update khamoshi too

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
awsome update yaar
loved it ... 
geet is so sweet...
precap is so interesting yaar.. but y maan cant explain ?

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