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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 4 (Page 53)

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
just woke up .. sweety you updating..,

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Yayyyyyyy,,Wohooo Coffee time
Come on Muski
We are here..Bring it on!LOL

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp


KOI HAIN KYA.???? to join muskan ????
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part 32

She pointed at the nose mujhe yanha bhi lagi, he placed a soft peck on her nose, geet was getting naughty now she pointed at the corner of her lips yanha pe bhi he leaned closer to her & she parted her lips hopefully. He leaned closer his breath fell on her lips sending beautiful sensation down her spine. He smiled & looked at her eyes it was filled with mischief & a tinge of desire building in with his closeness. She smiled making a baby plead. He caressed her lips & kissed her cheeks. He went & sat on the chair crossing his hand over is chest watching her. He could read her face like a book, she was definitely disappointed & little angry too. He was loving to see  her angry face.
He pretended to ignore her angry & asked her in stern voice - why did u woke up so late today
she promptly answered - u didn't let me sleep the whole night
he lifted his eye brow!!!! she bit her lips & walked away. He extended his legs & trapped her & pulled her closer..umm...she strife to let go.
He put his hand around her waist & pulled her still closer still in stern voice - what did I do?
She gets perplexed - woh aap nahi aap ka jacket, mujhe raat bhar yanha wanha pata nahi kya kya  he kept smiling listening to her blurt out the whole truth so innocently. She felt odd & ate her words. He still maintained a serious look - kanha yanha wanha? Aur kya kya?
She was about to point at her curves & immediately moved it away woh woh mujhe nahi pata & tries to move away from him. He pulls her back - aur kya kya? Still bamboozling her with his grin.
She fluttered her lashes in disarray not able to face him nor able to hide her confusion. She immediately covered her face aap jaan ke chade rahen ho mujhe
he smiled & tickled her, she jumped with his touch that send shudders down her spine.  Umm chodo mujhe, mujhe tickly ho rahi hain. Still hiding her face, he laughed & tickled her more, she tried running away but he held her back tightening his grip of his legs & his long fingers knew its way around her delicate slender waist. She hugged him & hiding her self I love u ..pantingly she said still feeling the frisson. 

He dropped her home & told her to give his jacket back. She shook her head. He smirked & left, she ran inside feeling shy.

Finally the HP team went back with out creating much fuss. Now it was maans turn to keep his promise to take her for the movie. Geet went to maans office the next day
geet - aapne promise kiya tha
maan mockingly - kya promise?
She made a baby angry face & turned away.
He slowly slide two tickets of jab we met  noon show. She jumped up & kissed him. Love you love you love you ...ur the best. I LOVE U a lot....aapko promise yaad tha
he wondered how could he forget anything related to her.

She was very thrilled to watch the movie...wat cracked her up was karena's name Geet in the movie. She was on cloud nine. She cuddled cup close to him nibbling into the pop-corn sipping his coke. She would in between ask him to feed her & bite his fingers in the bargain. He was so used to her mischief's now. She totally loved the movie & kept laughing through out. Post interval, when in the movie there was a close hug she was taken a little back trying to understand the feeling they portrayed & the feeling she feels. She was bit confused. What freaked her most was the lip lock scene between the casts at the end of the movie. She looked at the scene & then looked at him. He knew exactly what was in her mind. Their eyes locked & their fingers laced felt tighter. Her cheeks turned red feelig a desire building in them.  They looked away as the lights went on. He got up & straighten himself. He helped her rise. They went to the parking lot & she consciously sat behind feeling flushed. He held her hand & made her hold his torso. Suddenly few guys in another bike pulled geets duppatta off & teased them. Geet held him tighter & cried. He was fuming in anger. He raced & stopped the bike in front of the those guys.
Geet - rehna ..maan shot a stern look to her. She crossed her upper part of the body & looked down. He removed his jacket & gave it to her. He got of the bike his eyes was spitting fire, he stretched out his hand & said - duppatta. He hated the sight of her bit of cloth wrapped around the fist. The pillion rider mocked & tried to irritate further by taking to kiss the cloth. Maan placed a kick between his nose & lips making his lips & nose bleed with the thrust  & knocking him off the bike.

Geet remembered the last time when some guys had teased them, he actually shouted at her & today he was reacting so differently, first time she was seeing him being so possessive about her, she could read in his eyes he hated to see the bit of cloth in that hands. How much he hit that guy, other guys didn't even dare to attack maan seeing the plight of their friend. They just backed off & dragged their friend from the pool of blood he was piled into. She felt nice actually loved it, she knew he loves her cares for her but never voiced it, but his actions always meant more, but it was way more than she could ask for.

KC making a difference already

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Yayyy Me First heheLOL
Awesome Update
Loved it
U are just superbbb
Hayee the beginning was sooEmbarrassed
Hehe.Maaneet closeness and cuteness..AwhhEmbarrassed
Pheww Thank god Hosiarpur team went
Awhh loved how Geet confessed abt the
And the tickling scene was sooo cute..hehe
OMG..Jab we met?
Haha and the kiss
Not good for GeetLOL
And the last scene
hayee guys cheddin geet..
Fight maan
loved it
Awesome update di
Continue soon
Thank u
Luv ya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 January 2011 at 5:10pm

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
Great part!!!!

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Good and  short .Love to see Deewani is maturing .Wants to know more when she is fully grown physically and mentally .

Lovely update.Clap

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Im running out of praises for you :-)

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