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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 4 (Page 36)

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~deewangi~
part 31

Maan smiled & took their leave from their.
Mohinder - think about bidding
maan - ji papaji

while going out raji bumps into maan.
Raji - chikna tuition sir
maan - excuse me
raji blinks & looks at him for a while, she couldn't stop her gaze travel to his chest that was exposed between his opened jacket & unbuttoned t-shirt. 
maan clears his throat & straightens himself & leaves from there.
Raji runs to geets room - tera maan sir to bahut hi jyada HOT hain
geet gets confused where did she meet him, just then she hears his bike leave.
She gets upset & calls him immediately.
Geet - aap itne der tak ghar main the, mujhe se millen nahi, mujhe bole bine challen gaya, main nahi bolti aap se.
maan - geet
geet - kaha na nahi bolti to nahi bolti
maan - lekin
geet - meri kati hain aap se
maan - aise nahi karon
geet - kanha na kati tho kati
maan hates when she says that - TUM KATI NAHI KAR SAKTI
she immediately gets scared - teehk hain kati cancel, lekin main nahi bolongi
maan was still angry & speeding up
geet - itni teez kyun challa rahen ho aap
he stops at once with a skidding sound. She almost jumps off from her bed & runs down madly tells & the driver to take her to maans place.
Maan removes his helmet & parks the bike.
Maan - geet main teehk hoon, tum kya kar rahi ho, GEET!! GEET!!!
he looks behind hearing a car stop across the road, she came running aap teehk ho & hugged him checking him, his face, leg & hand maan stood dumb stuck to see her without chapals, without dupatta her hair friable she was panting meri galti hain mujhe hi aapko bike chalte time paresan nahi karna tha...she kisses him all over aap teehk ho na. He hugs her tightly ..main teehk hoon she was going insane worrying fearing for nothing. He held really closer than ever before, he tried to calm her down she was breathing hard & her heart was beating crazily. As she calmed, she again asked aap teehk ho na he nodded.
They broke out of the hug hearing a car stop near them. Mohinder & rano rushed to the car in which geet came looking for her & then noticed geet standing with maan near the bike across the road, they rushed towards them
mohinder - kya huwa?
Rano - why did u leave like that?
Mohinder - why are you crying
geet was still looking shaken up
maan -kuch nahi papaji, she heard my bike skid in the phone & she got scared
rano - sach main deewani hain to
mohinder - dehko woh teehk hain puttar
he hugs both the kids & pats their back.
Rano - ghar challo, sab log pareshan ho rahen honge
mohinder looks at maan - be careful, bike dere challana
maan - ji
they walked towards the car maan removed his jacket & put it around her & pulled her hair together & tied the with her band. Rano was so thankful, had darji seen her like that he would have created a major scene.

Geet came back home wearing his jacket. Rano told her go to her room straight. She went to the room & raji came running to her - tu maan se milne gaye thi na
geet kept quiet
raji - mujhe pata hain, yeh uska hi to jacket hain
raji smells his jacket -umm!!! kitna muscline scent hain
geet consciously smells the jacket, she finds nothing in that & puts it on the bed.

Later at night she hugs the jacket close to her. She felt him, she felt he was around her, now she could smell that masculine scent raji spoke about, she knew this was maans scent. She spread the arms of the jacket & made it wrap around her. She began to imagine it like his hand, as the sleeve fell on her curves she shied & turned to hide her face in the pillow, now lying on top of the jacket giving her feel she was lying on top of him, squeezing herself on it. She kissed the jacket & hid her face in his chest. She played the whole night around with his jacket, it made her feel very excited & high a different feeling of ruttishness but she quiet didn't understand what she was feeling. She just felt nice about the whole feeling.

Next day she couldn't wake up. Thai ji screamed at rano
thai - kitni der taak so thi hin javan ladki
rano kept quiet & closed geets room door
it was around 12 noon thai ji went to geets room & woke her.
She was still cuddled up in his jacket under the spread. She opened her droopy eyes wondering why thai ji was screaming least did she know it was her sleep!!!! geet hated to hear harsh words first thing in the morning. She got upset & went running to rano - mama subha subha thai ji mera room kya kar rahi hain?
Rano - puttar aise nahi bolte
mean time thai ji comes to the kitchen yelling - kaisi ladki hain kuch hosh nahi, aur yah kya koi jacket lekin sotha hain kya?
Thai ji snatches the jacket from geet
geet gets wild & pulls the jacket & pushes thai ji away & screams - dare u touch this jacket
thai ji raises her hand on geet. She gets really upset & looks at rano, that even she didn't stop her. She changes, takes her cycle & goes to maans house. She closes herself in his room & cries.
Thai ji to rano - tumne geet ko bahut chut de rakhi hain
rano was helpless & worried. She didn't know where geet went. It was nearing 6 in the evening & rano didn't have a clue where she was. Even her phone was in her room. Rano called maan
rano - beta geet wanha hain kya?
Maan immediately comes out of his office & looks around - kya huwa mama?
Rano narrates the whole incident to him. He gets mad - aap ko thai ji ko rohkna tha mama
that was the first time rano heard him so abrasive. She began to realize the depth of his feeling, she always knew how much geet was deewani behind him but now she could see he was no less a deewana.
Maan - mama main dehkta hoon.
Rano - uska phone bhi ghar pur hain, uske papa 8 baje ayengen usse pehle who ghar nahi...
maan - don't worry, I know where she will be.
He immediately rushes home & goes to his room. She had pulled out few of his shirt & lay cuddled up in them. He smiled looking at her & went slowly towards her.   He pulled her curls behind to see her face, he couldn't see the trails of tears, he wiped them & kissed her cheek, she made a baby face & yanha mara. He kissed the other cheek. She pointed at the nose mujhe yanha bhi lagi, he placed a soft peck on her nose, geet was getting naughty now she pointed at the corner of her lips yanha pe bhi he leaned closer to her & she parted her lips in hopefully '.
 


PRECAP
maan teasing geet!!!!
~PREV    PART 30    NEXT   PART 32~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 14 January 2011 at 4:37pm

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nice update

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Awwww.......

sho shweet......! she is so innocent,but naughty!
Maan teasing her.......hmmmmm......m quite curious now!
update soon di....


Edited by princess163 - 12 January 2011 at 9:36am

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awsome update yaar..loved it ... geet is getting naughty more... why the village parties are like that ? loved rano and mohinder ..they are so sweet .. i wonder whether she ll go to london for studying her interior designing ??? pls continiue soon,,

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AWESOME UPDATE AS ALWAYSTongue

par iss rajji ka toh mai *muh* tod dungi agar yeh galti se bhi mujhe dobara maan ke aas paas nazar aayi... Maan bas meri geet ka hai... kutti kamini rajji.... aur iss thai ji ko dafa bhi karo iss yahan se....Angry these bloody gavar villagers, delhi mein rehne layak nahi hai yeh logLOL


Edited by Manpreetmann - 12 January 2011 at 11:11am

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mindblowing....geet is so cute....maaneet r so damn cute....can''t wait to read further.....geet getting all naughty n bolder....do cont asap....

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