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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 4 (Page 14)

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~deewangi~
part 30

He cups her face & places a soft peck on her forehead & she actually blushed, he noticed those cheeks turn deeper & her eyes looking down & not meeting his gaze. He teased her - kya huwa
she shook her head & hid it inside his arms.

Maan reluctantly took her home in the bike. He didn't want to give any chance to her HP relatives to speak about them or hurt her with their harsh words. While geet was finding it odd to hug him in the bike. She held him half way & then she felt some thing different, some thing ticklish, she removed her hand feeling conscious. He braked at the signal & she fell on him
maan - KYA KAR RAHI HO
she feels embarrassed & keeps quiet, just before moving on in the signal
he pulls her hand around his waist - pakad ke beto
she feels her heart beating differently, his touch send currents down her all of a sudden & she slowly pulls her hand away. Next signal she almost losses her balance & falls on him again.
He parks the bike in the side & yells - What is wrong with you?
She turns pink & her eyes moist still not daring to meet his
he holds her arm & jerks her - tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho?
She still looks down wondering what to say, even his hold in her arms makes her feel some thing some thing which she is not able explain
Maan really gets wild - GEET
she snaps crying - aapko choone se mujhe kuch hota hain & moves his hand away.
He almost smiled but didn't, he didn't want his little wify to feel conscious, he wanted this transparency to be always there in their relation. He hugs her close wrapping his strong arms around her head and softly whispers mujhe bhi hota hian. She immediately smiled - sachi main. He nodded resting his chin on her head. I love you, love you a lot and kissed his chest.
Maan - challen
she shook her head - mujhe aise hi rahena hain
he laughed - pakad ke betna
she sat behind blushing. He could feel her blush with the heat that wrapped him actually he blushed too. They reached the Handa Hawali, geet got off & kissed him good bye. He was all while conscious.
Geet - kal subha aavoge na
maan - tum aapne family ke saath time nahi bitavogi tho aacha nahi lage ga
she makes a baby face
maan - samjho na
she still makes a baby face knotting her duppata
maan - please
she looks down feeling really sad
maan - aacha next week I will take u for a movie
her eyes glittered in joy - promise she screamed
maan - umm
brij came out hearing her jump & scream.
Maan noticed brij - tum andar jaavoo geet
she looked down & went in
brij scanned maan top to bottom. Maan maintained a stern straight look not getting intimidated with his stare. Instead maans calmness was irritating brij. Maan turned his bike & was about to leave when brij held maans bike. Maan switched off the ignition & removed his helmet.
 Brij - kaun hain tu?
Maan scanned him top to bottom - aapne se bado se baat karne ki tameez nahi sikha tumne?
Brij was taken a back.
Maan pulled the sand of the bike with his right leg & swinged the left leg around & got off the bike. He walked into the his personal space with his broad shoulders almost shadowing the entire body of the 18yr old brij. Maan hated him because geet disliked him, feared him. The hatredness was visible in maans eyes. He could burn him alive with his fury. Brij trembled few steps back feeling intimidated.
Brij gathered all his wits & said it in a stern voice - meri bahen se dur raho tum
before he finished those words maan placed a hard punch on his face making him bleed from nose & mouth. Brij was furious & he raised is right arm to punch maan blindly in rage, maan held his hand & turned it behind him holding in a firm lock. Brij struggled to free himself. Maan pulled the red scarf from his neck & wiped the blood from his nose & mouth. Aaj tho kah diya dubara mera aur geet ke beech anne ki kosish ki tho & pushes him away & throws the garment on his face. Brij was about to get up & fight back when Mohinder's car just came in & stopped in front of maans bike.
Mohinder doesn't even notice the bleeding brij he straight walks to maan & puts his hand around him - so young man how are things shaping up
maan - all well papaji
mohinder - I am really very proud of you. I keep hearing about ur achievements. 
Maan felt so warm. Papaji invited him to have coffee. He was not sure but couldn't have refused him. Brij was fuming with-in seeing how his uncle spoke to him about business matters.
Rano saw maan with papaji & she also welcomed him with love. Maan was comfortable now.
Mohinder - woh noida wala project kaise chal raha hain
maan - its about to get over
mohinder - thats great
maan took the coffee & looked curiously for his cuty. He could hear her giggled & laugh in her room.
Mohinder - I feel you should start bidding for small construction projects.
Maan - ji, lekin all of them ask for initial security deposit. I haven't saved enough for that yet
brij carefully overhears their conversation
mohinder gets really annoyed & walks to the study
maan understands his concern & follows him to the study - papaji mujhe kuch chahiya hoga tho I will first come to you.
Mohinder - tum sirf formality ke liya papaji kahte ho!! mante nahi ho
maan hugs him struggling to voice out his emotions. Rano watched them from the door & smiled. She knew mohinder saw himself in maan. He admired maans spirit & sincerity. Least did they know he did every thing only for their daughter, probably their love would have just multiplied for him then. They did know he is man of few words.
Meanwhile brij gets darji to study to enquire about maan. Darji clears his throat as he walks in. maan & mohinder break out of the hug & rano takes the pallo over her head & leaves to the kitchen.
Darji - yeh kaunh hain beta
mohider proudly claims he is like my son
darji curiously scans him - javan ladki ko ghar main rahk ke aise kisi javan ledke ko ghar pe bulana teehk nahi hain
mohinder hates such talks, maan feels really odd now.
Mohinder - aise koi baat nahi bavoji
darji - mujhe tho iski niyat hi teehk nahi lagti
maan looks down & tries to leave
mohinder holds him back
darji - kal yeh humari ledki ko lekar baag gaya tho
mohinder - yeh aise kuch nahi karenga bavoji, waise bhi isse geet pasand hain tho mujhe koi aitraaz nahi. Maan was shocked to see papaji showing so much of trust & love for him.
Mohinder - bavoji maan bahut hi naik ladka hain. Studies ho, business ho (brij murmured rubbing his chi mar peet ho) sab main aacha hain aur bahut samjdar bhi hain. Mera bas chalen tho abhi shaadi paki kardoon. & laughed patting maans back.
Darji - aur parivar sab kaise hain
maan felt really scared if they would get to his parents details
mohinder - sab aacha hain bavooji khandani hain, delhi ke izaadar families main se hain, chiraag lekar doondoge tho bhi aise ladka nahi milega.
Maan was overwhelmed with so much of love & respect. NO one ever has treated him with so much of respect & he knew mohinder meant all those words. He thought geet & her parents didn't belong to this world, they were definitely from a world of their own just love, love & unconditional love !!!
darji's perspective towards maan did change a bit but brij couldn't have accepted all this.
Maan smiled & took their leave from their.
Mohinder - think about bidding
maan - ji papaji

PRECAP
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OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGG YAYYYYYY i am the first one to comment for the first time ever!!! *woot woot*Dancing

sorry di, got a lil carried away.....the last time i was first, was in madhoshiLOL
omggg can geet any more ultra freaking adorablee?....i just adoree how you portray even the most teensy weensy change in their feelingsClap....i can never get tired of saying how brilliant of a job you are doing with this ff....the mixture of innocence, trust and love that you portray with their deewangi truly touches one's soul!!Embarrassed....for the gazillionth time diLOL, you are absitively posilutely amazingly fabulously awesome!!!Star
 
aww their kuch hota hain scene was shoooo cutee....mujhey bhi bohot kuch huaLOL.....awww so little wifey now has started having those feelings, eh?Wink....and maan's response was shoo cuteee...and omgg their hug was soo freaking cuteylicious!!....*haye* rab ne bana di jodi!Embarrassed
 
urghh stupid brij....yaha bhi aagaya taang adaa neAngry....GO MAAN!!!....loved the punchLOL....remember di, that arjun deserves a bigger one and much more in TMWinkLOL....who does he think he is trying to order msk?....gadhaLOL
 
awww Geet's parents are shooo sweet, just like her....they have given such unconditional love to maan and loved their trust in maanEmbarrassed....you have described every relationship soo beautifully, omgg i can't stop awwwing!Embarrassed
 
fab update di!!....and even though just updated, pweez continue and update soon!LOL....you don't know how hard it is to wait di for these addiciting updates of yours!LOL
lovee you!!


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