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spark's fly- AR FF~updated- pg 33~ (Page 33)

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
hey kinnari...
loved ur update...
rahul aur muski kabhi nai sudhrein ge...when i was reading this part i was missinng our DMG gang.....:(
khair tu ne yadein taazi krdi..
thanks for the pm...
continue soon..
BEST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMS....
Love,,
Sharon dii...!!

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged

UPDATE 8:

Muski: chalo utho abb!!

Ammy: abb kya hain? Kya kaam baaki hain?

Nikki: SHOPPING!!

Abhi: wht?? No, no, no!!

Anji: yes! Yes! Yes! Meri shaadi hain n we're goin shopping!

Ammy: shaadi toh champ ka bhi hain! Bolna yar champ! Hum nahi jayenge'.

Atul took one look at glaring anjali and dropped any ideas of arguing

Atul: it wont be that bad also yar! Chalo chalte hain

Armaan looked at champ in disbelief, sighing he got up as the girls smiled victoriously!

Muski: yaayyy!! Chaloooo

Atul: haan par ridzi kahan reh gayi??

"Ridzi yaha hain",  saying so entered riddhima with two workers in tow as they heaved in gifts and other stuff

Ridz: kyun kya kaam hain?

Muski: shopping!!!

Ridz: sorry yar mein nahi chal sakti'.

Rahul: kyun?????

Ridz: I hav to meet a client today!!

Muski: kaun client?? Mujhe kyun nahi bataya?

Ridz: tujhe dhang se kuch yaad rehta hain kya? Mujhe isha se milna hain aaj'.. Wedding cards rmbr!!

Muski: oh haan! Yaane ke mein bhi nahi jaa sakti inke saath *pouting*

Ridz smiled at her antics and said'

"tu jaa meri maa, nahi toh mujhe jeene nahi degi, mein akeli hi chali jaungi isha se milne"

Muski: u sure? *excitedly*

Ridz: haan sure jaa!

Atul: par ridzi tu akeli kaisi jayegi?? Teri gaadi toh kaamse driver le gaya hain!

Ridz: KYA??

Anji: atuullll! Anji glared at him

Ridz: meri gaadi wo driver le gaya?? Bass meri gaadi padi hui thi kya? Jo uske saath meri gaadi bbheji?? Ughhh!! MOM'.MOM'..

Padma heard her daughter screaming in the hall and shaking her head went towards her

Padma: kya hain riddhi? Ghar sar pe kyun uthaya hain?

Ridz: meri gaadi kaha hain??

Padma looked at anji and atul cautiously, contemplating what to say

Ridz: maaa'.

Padma: koi kaam se driver le gaya hain!

Ridz: par meri gaadi kyun? Di ki gaadi dad ki gaadi dono the na! mein abb bahar kaise jau?

Muski meanwhile sniggered at ridzi'..

Padma: tumhe kahan jaana hain? Tumhare dad bhi bahar gaye hue hain aur tumhari di ki gaadi service ke liye diya hua hain!!

ridz: dekho maa, aap sabb meri gaadi use kare mujhe koi prob nahi hain, par uss gadhe shyam ko kyun diya? Aapko pata hain na ki last tym usne meri scooty use ki thi, toh mujhe gaadi phir police impound mein toota phuta hua mila tha!

Bhagwaan jaane wo meri car ki kya halath karega! I promise you maa agar gaadi ko kharojh bhi aaya nah toh uski khair nahi'.

Padma: riddhi beta galthi ho jaati hain

ridz: maa wo galti nahi thi, agar koi bhi scooty mein wheelie karne ki koshish beech sadak pe , toh aisa hi hoga!!

Ammy: wht wheelie in a scooty??

The guys guawffed at the mere thought of it

Ridz: haan aur wo bhi mere sccoty pe, poor darling! Usse aane toh do '.


**** SCREECCHHHH****


Riddhima heard her car scrrech to a halt and ran out as the others followed!!

From her car stepped a good-lukin, 20 odd something, tall , handsome guy, who grinned at riddhima

Ridz: SIDDDD''OMG! OMG! U're here! But when did u cum? Wht the hell r u doin here? N my car? Oh gosh! I missed you soo much'..

She hugged him as she spoke non-stop, as he reciprocated with a constant grin

Sid: OMG! U still are a blabber mouth aren't u? take a breath choco !! I missed u loadddss too'..



Edited by kangel - 25 March 2011 at 12:48am

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged

heyy

mee firstt.......

wow bechari ridyy aur uska car...scotty pe wheele...ROFL

how come sid ne entry marii??????

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Nice part.

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Hey Kin
awesome part dearClapClapStar
loved it so much but its too too short yaar
wowwww ridz loves her car so much
ughhhhhhhh yey sid phir se aa gya kab peecha chodega ridz n armaan ka........
thanks for pm
plz continue soonTongue

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
good 1

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
RES!

*edited*
aye haye...
yeh kiski entry kar di tune ???
but anyway Choco is a good name for Riddhima!
I guess she LOUVES chocolate!

And wheelie se kya matlab ??
lol...
she is sooo obsessed wid her car haan?
tht was funny!

i guess Choco won't be going alone to the client...
if u ask me then i wud like it if Armaan went along wid her...
but abb Sid ki entry ho gayi hai toh its gonna be sid...
ughhh...
yeh Sid humara peecha kab chodega ?? :P

Anyway i just LOVED it !
but madam itne CHOTE update se humara pet kaise bharega ??
Next time BADA update chahiye aur haan BOHOT JALDI !!!
not like this time...
warna joote padenge!

and haan whenever u update, txt me...
Love
Ms. Jallad :P


Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 25 March 2011 at 8:05am

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 2:53am | IP Logged
nyc update
continue soon..

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