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spark's fly- AR FF~updated- pg 33~ (Page 26)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
awesum do continue soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged

heyy\kinari veryy nice and a hilarious part gal muskaan omg i coudnt stop laughing!!!!olLOL

thx for the pm

continuee soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazypt123

WOW! omgggg. omggg. omggg. kins. like that was SO GOOD. Day Dreaming
first of all what is wrong with me! i realised that i didnt comment on ur 4th update! :( so im gonna do that and this together! :) okay so i have a list of things that i liked so im just gonna yeah youll see:

from update 4 i reallyyy realllyyy reallyyy liked:
1) how the whole group got along so well
2) how you made them all connect in some way like how rahul works under atul and atul under abhi but they never really spoke or became friends till now, (i REALLYY liked that part)
3) i love how you kept atul and armaan still like really good friends cuz i just loved their relationship in dmg and its nice to see this back here :)
4) i also like how you waited to introduce muskaan and ridz, really good cuz when i read the 5th update i was like Shocked hahaha :)
5) AWWWW anjis getting married to atul :) so so so so cute. cant get over thattt.

from update 5 i LOVED LOVED LOVED these things:
1) how you introduced your update with the whole gang meeting and getting together so much that theyre all really close now
2) how you tied in the wedding into this update i LOVED that like omg. not even jokinggg.
3) i love how nikki liked the wedding plans it was cool cuz we all knew that ridz and muskaan did it all :)
4) um okay the next couple parts were my most fav. like so fav that i had to read it 4 times. no joke. and seriously i loved it like this has to be my fav update! it has to. i loved the way you made ridz in this ff, she seems like a fun like idc about you- im doing my own thing kinda person.
5) love the idea that she wears more than just salvars, and although i love thattt i think this was really nice like i love how you said that she came down laughing with a messy bunn and jeans and a white top. reallllyyy goodddddd
6) LOVE the scene between muskaan and ridz
7) like seriously i loved it
8) anji was funny and how she was trying to like stop them from acting that way cuz the whole gang was around watching them fool around
9)
"They turned to leave while ridz turned back and grinned at them all saying

Ridz: hum thode aise hi hain'. Adjust karlo!!

She winked, bading bye to the gang they left, shouting orders across the hall''"Shocked o. m. g

UM where did you come up with this stuff? Winkyeah so um that was my fav quote. like omg omg no joke i loved that. im just trying to calm myself while writing this cuz everyone else who posts on here is gonna think im crazy but w.e cuz seriously that was my FAV part like you made her sound so confident and so not like the ridz in dmg which i really liked.HugThumbs Up you told me that this ff would be different and kins, you have done better than what i had thought it would be like. i love it so much omg. youre doing such an amazing job! :) im so proud of you. EmbarrassedHeartand i definitely cannot wait till you update again! :) loveee youu and keep it up you amazing girl!!!<3 k im gonna go read my fav part again byeeee :)LOLSmile

-Praniti :)Clap


p.s i also love how you still didnt introduce the ridz and armaan, makes it look like theyre slowly gonna hangout together with the group and all and then fall in love, ahhh<3 so cute.






OMG! i gotta tell u i am blown away by the length of the commentBig smile
i'm so damn happy!! i'm litreally jumpin wid joy!!LOLLOLLOLLOL
aww u more dan enuf made up by the awseum comment

update 4 replies:
~ heehee....i dnt knw! it kinda felt lame aftr postn d part
~ dat evry one knew each odr sumhw
~ thnx....same hosp n all!!
~ i wanted it to be HATKE wen dey gwt intro'd nt normal!
   1st impression shuld b such dat ammmy will rmbr it awlyz
~  i knw i'm sooo excited abt deir weddingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 5TH update replies:
~  i wanted to show ridzi's proffesional side cum personal; side so d wedding n i really wanted atul-anji together!!
~ u read it 4 tymz!! OMG!! i'm grateful dudeWinkWink
~ Smile i wanted ridz to b vry much diff from wht she potrayed on-screen!
    i wanted her to be confident n all so i evn slightly changed the dressing style tooo
    and i can so imagine jenny in a messy bun n jeans n stufff.....Smile
~  lolz thnx! i wanted to show how awesum n friendly dey bth were! prankin n chilld out!
~ hahahahah! u lykd dat lyn? i wanted dem to gape at her attitude n all so used dat!

not at all...u make me triple excited abt wht i havta write further wen i see u excited!
DARE NOT LESSEN IT! cz it makes my day!!
told ya it'll be HATKE! wanted a breather from the original and wanted to create mah own charecters!!!

you told me that this ff would be different and kins, you have done better than what i had thought it would be like. i love it so much omg. youre doing such an amazing job! :) im so proud of you. EmbarrassedHeart

i havnt been happier pratz! dese words made me feel on top of d world....i am soooo freakin happy dat u luv it sooo much!! lovvvveee yyyyaaaaHeart
 
P.S : tht was exactly mah plan! i dont want it to b love at 1st sight, they understand tht and den they confess n happily evr aftr...not dat i dnt lyk dat! but just nt my idea! 

thnx for my OH-SO-LONG comment!!! every line made my gin wider n wider......

love
-KINBig smile

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by youth_showsfan

yupieeeeeeee finally AR met cool
hope they talk as well
continue super soon


dey will  vry soon
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
hey kinnari
wowwwwwwwwww this was awaited part..........bus itni si meeting..................awesome partClap.........muskan to muskan hai..............loved their bonding.........plz make AR meeting alone
thanks for pm
plzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jannat4ever

oye hoye
kya meeting thi
awesome part...........Clap Star
loved it
nd i loved d line "hum toh aise hi h adjust krlo"
gosh superb
amazing ridz nd muski convo...........LOL
both rocked in update
continue soonnnnnnnnnnnn


luv
jannat



awwww thnx jannat
heehee......thnx will cont soon
loveee ya
thnxc fr commenting!

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
hiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
finally AR meet
loved muski and ridzy
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
nyc part

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