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spark's fly- AR FF~updated- pg 33~ (Page 25)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
oye hoye
kya meeting thi
awesome part...........Clap Star
loved it
nd i loved d line "hum toh aise hi h adjust krlo"
gosh superb
amazing ridz nd muski convo...........LOL
both rocked in update
continue soonnnnnnnnnnnn


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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
awesome update

thanx for pm
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Amazing !
Kaha  Mile AR ?'
Baat bhi nah ki :( 
Chalo thik hai!
Awesome update !
Cont soon !

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
WOW! omgggg. omggg. omggg. kins. like that was SO GOOD. SmileBig smileTongueWinkLOLClapStarApproveCoolThumbs UpHeartHugPartyDancingDay Dreaming
first of all what is wrong with me! i realised that i didnt comment on ur 4th update! :( so im gonna do that and this together! :) okay so i have a list of things that i liked so im just gonna yeah youll see:

from update 4 i reallyyy realllyyy reallyyy liked:
1) how the whole group got along so well
2) how you made them all connect in some way like how rahul works under atul and atul under abhi but they never really spoke or became friends till now, (i REALLYY liked that part)
3) i love how you kept atul and armaan still like really good friends cuz i just loved their relationship in dmg and its nice to see this back here :)
4) i also like how you waited to introduce muskaan and ridz, really good cuz when i read the 5th update i was like Shocked hahaha :)
5) AWWWW anjis getting married to atul :) so so so so cute. cant get over thattt.

from update 5 i LOVED LOVED LOVED these things:
1) how you introduced your update with the whole gang meeting and getting together so much that theyre all really close now
2) how you tied in the wedding into this update i LOVED that like omg. not even jokinggg.
3) i love how nikki liked the wedding plans it was cool cuz we all knew that ridz and muskaan did it all :)
4) um okay the next couple parts were my most fav. like so fav that i had to read it 4 times. no joke. and seriously i loved it like this has to be my fav update! it has to. i loved the way you made ridz in this ff, she seems like a fun like idc about you- im doing my own thing kinda person.
5) love the idea that she wears more than just salvars, and although i love thattt i think this was really nice like i love how you said that she came down laughing with a messy bunn and jeans and a white top. reallllyyy goodddddd
6) LOVE the scene between muskaan and ridz
7) like seriously i loved it
8) anji was funny and how she was trying to like stop them from acting that way cuz the whole gang was around watching them fool around
9)
"They turned to leave while ridz turned back and grinned at them all saying

Ridz: hum thode aise hi hain…. Adjust karlo!!

She winked, bading bye to the gang they left, shouting orders across the hall……"ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked o. m. g

UM where did you come up with this stuff? Winkyeah so um that was my fav quote. like omg omg no joke i loved that. im just trying to calm myself while writing this cuz everyone else who posts on here is gonna think im crazy but w.e cuz seriously that was my FAV part like you made her sound so confident and so not like the ridz in dmg which i really liked.HugThumbs Up you told me that this ff would be different and kins, you have done better than what i had thought it would be like. i love it so much omg. youre doing such an amazing job! :) im so proud of you. EmbarrassedHeartand i definitely cannot wait till you update again! :) loveee youu and keep it up you amazing girl!!!<3 k im gonna go read my fav part again byeeee :)LOLSmile

-Praniti :)ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap


p.s i also love how you still didnt introduce the ridz and armaan, makes it look like theyre slowly gonna hangout together with the group and all and then fall in love, ahhh<3 so cute.




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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
yupieeeeeeee finally AR met cool
hope they talk as well
continue super soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:19am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
awsum....lobed it.....
 
thnx 4 makin AR meet...
 
thnx 4 da pm n continue soon
 
AMOON

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