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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 87)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

OMG!!!! Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
such a big misunderstanding!!!
oh nooooo!!! poor mayur!
bt d way u wrt their misunderstanding was great!
lovely update.
feel sad for them.
mayank was so sweet, but he did wrong...........so as nups.
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

Wah Wah ap itni jaldi kaise comment kya?
ap mahan hai suja ji.......................LOL
rofl
us ny coment kiya kafi nhi ha kiya
ss tu us ny read bhi nhi kiyaCryCry
mein itni bori hoon
now let me rply her

m really very sorry sistersCry
i am really very busy ths days.........as my working days r going more hectic day by dayOuch
sorry Fiza, tu buri nahi hai............buri to main hun, main hi time pe comment nahi kar patiOuch ......m really very sorryCryCry
bt i read ur ss..........n commented tooo........i thot u overlooked.
nw m going to read ur next update.

@ fari : i didnt aspect this from u..........as u knw very well, hw is my days nw! my mother is seriously ill in home n here i am tied with my works.Ouch

anywz Fiza, m going to read ur update, then comment.
ab thik hai??????????

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drfizaahmed

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
it was wonderful update again.Clap
nw m going to read mayur present, which is more interesting than thier past.Big smile
bt still u didnt show, what happened in mayank's past.Ouch
n i thot, it was d right way to glued ur readers with ur ff.Star
applause galClapClap
very nicely written.Clap
nw m realized, what she felt after saw him at mukti!Ouch
it was miserable.Cry
i love d scene, when mayank gets attack.Ouch...........it was beautifully written.Star
i could imagine his situation.Star
thats called a gud writerBig smile
nups-father convo was grt.Smile
her father  is a gem............hw easily he realized nups dried tears..........n hw sweely he concoled her.Big smile
mayu-nups father scene was also gud.Smile
mayank realized his mistake...........its a gud signSmile.
bt u gv me d shockShocked
mayank himself didnt knw anything abt d drugs?????????Shocked
then how he was effected?????Shocked
someone slow poisoned him????????Shocked
who was he/she?????Shocked
bt most important q is what was the motive?????Shocked
mayank was so vulnerable...........he totally lost his confidence............n  himself tooCry
cant see mayank like thatCry
it was so painful to see him like thisCry
ok............nw enof  Dead
nw m stop.
i knw, m talking toooo much.........asking toooooo many q's!!!!Dead
update soon,Smile
thanks for the pm.Smile
plz dnt mind if i'll reply  late.

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
nice updt
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged

back to present Big smile

awesome update Fiza!
poor Mayank Cry
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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drfizaahmed

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
So sorry yaar for d late comments

d update was really gud

I actually thought he was a mental patient

bUt drugs?strange!!!

Mayur scene was awesum

really awesum

cont soon
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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Editttttttttttttttttttttttt

Hi Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa

By GOD finally u updated mayors present part

Yeeeeeeee now going to get present situation of Mayur.

 

Wow finuuuuuuuuuuuu wht a beautiful update dear

Amazinggggggggggggg

Too good

Awesome

 

Hey fiza

I thought that Mayank is a mental patient''

But now I have found he is not mental patient- he is only drug addicted

But how he doesn't know abt it???? Strange!!!!!!!!!!!

Who gave him drug and how??

Its totally mysterious'''''..

 

I loved mayur part- awwwwwwww they missed each other loads

They suffered a lot W*H each other presence

I loved Nupur- the way she was trying to cure mayu is really very nice'..

 

Mayu and nups dad convo was very touching

I loved their relation'

 

And the last part was emotional too

Ahhhhhh my nups was crying

Hope everything will be fine soon

Wanna c them together


yupi
yes after so long i m back to present
 
thnks jani for loving it
ur words matter to me soo much
 
 
tu na
kya present k second chapt bhool gai us mein hi tha k he is a drug addict
hmm
i told u there loads more strangest things....one of wch is cuming in next part
 
thy r together.....dont u think sooo
thnks for liking it dear
will update soon
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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

if mayank didn't take the drugs then how could doc find the drugs in his blood? i'm so confused........but i hope nups will make everything all right.......
lolz
my ridi is confused
n im planning to make u more confuse......
n thn u all r gona hit ur head.....LOLLOL
joking ....its a mystry...wch will b resolve very soon
nups will make him cum back
dont worry
 
PS loved ur dp

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@Fiza
 
OMGGG..beautiful update
 
i loved every bit of it
 
do continue sis....
hey maria
thnks aloot dear
glad  u liked it
 

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