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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 70)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

rocking update Fiza!
finally he realised his love Heart
i hope Nupz bhi jaldi samajh jaye Wink
luved susar damaad convo LOL
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile
yes finally
thns for liking
gald u all liked tht part ...i tried sumthing diffrnt
will upadate soon

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

fantastic update Fiza.
so beautiful................n hilarious.
OMG!!!! mayank nups k dad k pas chala gya solution dhundhne..............LOL
it waas really hilarious.
i love d way u write mayanks realization.
it was superb.........pefect.
bt last scene was most hillarious..........cherry on the icecream (actually i love icecream more than cake :P)
waiting for next update.
oops....tu to abhi chuti par hai na...............ok, 10days wait karlungi............lekin uske baad Evil Smile ....... samajh gyi na?
better!!!
yah, u forgot to pm me!!!! how could u???Cry
bt thanks for the scrapROFL
nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
 
yeah kasay hogaya...i forget u..im sorry ..i was like y suja didnt coment wht happen ....n thn i thought i didnt pm her..
u know my menatl status na...so maaf kerdo behana
 
lolzzzzdekh sedha papa l pass.....
glad u liked it
more glad  u like dthe way i wrote
hey so u like cherrys more hmmm...
 
ya Allah ....itni sari damkiyaan...yes im trying to be back with a bang
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Hey fiza
I'm so so so sorry for being irregular wid my comments on ur ff's

had exams n was busy
just read d promo

seems interesting

Cont soon
 
thnks a lot for liking dear
no pls dont be sorry i undersatnd .....
conc on exams
ff tu bad mein bhi read kerlayna ...but yes i wait for ur comentsEmbarrassed
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged

HELLO GUYS  

I know I have made u wait pretty long but I promise a quicker update this time..mayb in a day…

Ths chap u may find as filler just try to go with the flow ..it was needed I cant jump to thinks…..

 

Rplyd to all

Thnks for love n support

N tolerating my mood swings

This is a belated gift to mona darling on her birthday

Lova ya

fiza

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 22 March 2011 at 4:29pm

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The most awaited chapter….the reason of there separation

 

CHAPTER 12

 

Finding his way in life he was happy n content now with his feelings….he wasn't fighting ..he haven't done anything wrong…I hope she also thinks like that ….

 

He was walking towards  his hostel….hiting the stone…climbing up bench balancing himself with his hand in air…..jumping off it….playing with leaves..cherish evry heart beat of his wch is delivering an emotion he is feeling serene with….

 

Un aware of wht is waiting for him at hostel…..while smiling like an idiot he enter this room ….n his smile in a second vanish seeing sum one …geining at him in a win

 

Samrat: aay aay….kya hua….tum itna kyun muskara rahy hai…pointing towards his heart ……n he following his finger…kya hai jo dil mein jo chupa rahy hooo…

 

Mayank: wht…wht…I m.am nt hiding anything…he shaked his head like a child

Samrat: oh really….kuch tu hoa hai kuch hogaya hai….

Mayank: why are u behaving life FM 99….

Samrat: mein tu hamesha hi asay hi behave kerta hoon …hain ……

 

He now start walking around him in a circle like a inspector…

 

Hmm tu kya tha woh….suddent pointing his finger…..u ..u..stop irrating n complicating my relation with Nupur…hum sirf doost hai…..changing his sound to emotional one….nhi dekh sakta mein tumhain kisi aur ka sath…..change of tone….Kyun bhi….wht is she ur girlfrnd, wifey….sis…he gave him a dead look ….behan hogi teri…

 

Mayank was glumping ….

 

Aur kiya tha..han…..tumhara deemagh karab hogaya hai…kisi rishty ki purity nhi dekhti…..n wht was this ….tum ny us ko mjhy se upper rekha…..oh so tht hurts…..mjhy is se bhi zayada dard hoa tha….uff…..mera majnoon…..n finally……yeahi sansakr diya thy…hugging a girl in frnt of 30 people….n thn hiding ur face….ufff mjhy se tu bola bhi nhi jar aha ….kya tha yeah kyaaa….mayank sharam jawab do …jawab doo….jawab dooo

 

Mayank: tera star plus k drama khatam

Samrat: nhi….tumhair flim shooro

Mayank: han tu …I was acting …intensity tu honi chaiy

Smarat: han han…ur absolutely write….u have red scripts so much…u were inside the character …wah

 

Mayank: aur nhi tu kiya…I have red it

Samrat: really…how cum u were reading it upside down

Mayank: wht

Samrat: ji…..is tension mein…tht u will caught ..kya ker kya kero….u where reading it upside down…..

Maynk: u wont spare me…

Samrat: not at all….pyar hoa….ikrar kab hai…he asked excitedly …

 

He smiled n threw him self on bed…lying on his back…while samrat joined him next lying on his stomach….

Smarara: bhai…..stop behaving llike a stupid love stuck person…speak up naaa

Mayank: wht

Samrat: bhaiii

Mayank: u where right bus…

Now as per promise u will make her feel urs…wasy wht a start u have taken….wht dialogue tht was

He cuped his face n he was making a disgusting face

 

Mein tum se door raho , pass raho….tum se bhago na bhago….tum se laro ya na larooo…..tum per sirf mera haq hai…

 

Mayankj: hath meray pass se

Samrat: common bhi get in practice….sum1 will be so more thn close

Mayank: aur yeah mein teray sth practice kero….yuck……

Samrat\: hello…im straight

Mayank: so am i..

Samrat: how does it feels

Mayank: digusting

Samrat: ufff…im asking abt ur hearts feeling…how does it feels to b in love

 

Mayank: he looked at him n smile….gr8…thnks tu nhi hota tu mein khabi nhi samhjta k meray dil mein kya hai

Samrat: no problem ….asay chotay motay ehassan kerta rehta hoon mein

 

 So whts the plan

Maynk: yaar I actually don't know right now….just for now I want to know her expressions n does she felt anything…or im just going out of way…

 

Nupur's house

She was back home but was all in silence..she knew her feelings very well but couldn't just figure out wht mayank was reciprocating ….did he..no he wasn't…but wht was…all questions where running in her head

 

At dinner she ws playing with food n her father was silently observing her expression..

 

 

ND: Nupur…koi baat hai

Nupur: she looked at  him n nodded in yes

ND: wanna talk….

Nupur: she nodded in nooo

ND: oki than….go to ur room rest for sumtime…n try to relax….everything will be fine just gave evry1 sum time…

Nupur: she looked at him in surprise as her dad knows everything …..

He get up n placed his hand patting her shoulder….

 

She went to her room n ly down…aimlessly watching the ceiling ………wht have u done Nupur how ur gonna face him…..ek sec whts the big deal I have hugged him endless time….so just relax n b normal it was nthing special

 

There mayank was restless walking in his room …..she didn't called him after reaching home …tht nt like her…..she was lost …hope everything is fine …

 

Smarat: tum khud phone kerlo na …behave normally …khud suitation k awkward bana rahy hoo

 

Mayank took the phone n dialed her no…she was so busy in her thoughts tht even didn't bothered to look who is calling…..

Nupur: hello

Mayank: Nupur…he say so as he was surprise….she always pick up phone n said stupid shrama ap kiya Hi

Nupur: her heart beat stop for a moment….han

Mayank: u reached home n didn't even informed me……had hai yaar

Nupur: oh im sorry ..mein soo gai thi

Mayank: nups ur fine na

Nupur: han kyun …

Mayank: paka sab thik hai….

Nupur: han baba..mayank I'll talk to u later….dad  is calling me ..bye

She hunged up the phone…n mayank was watching the phone lost…..

 

Mayank: OMG…..why I acted so irrelevant yaar…she is even not talking to me…she is avoiding me…uncle goes to sleep at sharp 1o aur abhi tu 11 baj rahy hain….OH God…..

 

Smarat: bhai yaar do u really regret ur fellings

Mayank: woh baat nhi hai

Samrat: acha listen when u got to know abt ur feelings didn't u avoided it…..today all of a sudden she saw oozing love frm ur eyes…wht do u want her to do dance in swertizland….make her comfortable first…n slowly express..by the time I''l b ther always to comfort her thought regarding any negativity ….

 

Mayank: its getting hell complicated …..

Smarat: sort it out

Mayank: I don't want to loss her….even my love always remain friendship …it doesn't matter…all tht matteres tht she always reamin besides me bus…..

 

At college:

The morning was different ..thing was difrent ..so as the scenes at colloge was also different …..

 

The two friend who always cum together ….where cuming from opposite directions…..n even if they by chance do so …they would have run towards each other n hugged …..

 

Mayank was cuming n was watching her playing with the strings of her back bag….he can read her nervousness n also her delima…..he smiled she is nt angry or sad…..he just need to make her belive everything will reamin the way it was….

 

Mayank: hey Nupur

Nupur: she got shocked at his voice……hey she only manged to saw tht..but looking at his smiling face she couldn't resit but smile back …he hugged her tight n broke it like he alwysa do

Mayank: so kaha thi tum

Nupur: mein mein tu yahin thi….

Mayank: kya hua….chalin class k lyan late horaha hai

Nupur: yup chlo…

 

Samrat: hey guys

Nupur: hey

Smarat: bhai tum jao..mjhy Nupur se thori help chaiy

 

Nupur: mar gay

Samrat:  hen ..he encirlcle his arms around her….tu kiya hua itni tension mein kyun hai boss….

Nupur: she looked at him…"like as if u don't know "

Samrat: kya …..hmm shak tu mjhy pehay hi tha…kyun k bhai k tarah tu ny khabi humgama nhi majaya tha….so I knew u kno it very well…..tu ab sab bol diya na….tu chil kero

 

Nupur: hhan ..us ko dkho na ..woh tu chill ker raha hai

Samrat: he laughed….agar tum ko lagata hai k us ko kuch nhi hoa….tu ur mistaken dear

She lokked at him smiled questionably

Samrat: no no no…if ur thinking tht he comfessed ..no he didn't ….but ya he was smiling like an idiot…couldn't sleep whole night ….was watching moon all dreamingly…..n whn u didn't called..he was hell worried abt wht he did n wht u thought..

Nupur: do he regret tht

Samrat: I think u better ask urself or him about tht …but ur blushing …yeah kiya hai

Nupur: smarat marao gay

Samrat: tum do ki shdi nhi honay doo ga….tum dono meri jan k dhushamn ban gay ho yaaar….her roz yeahi dhamki had hai….

 

 

She went inside an took the seat she always does

 

Mayank: wht happen y ru soo silent today…

 

nupur: nthing..conc on lecture

mayank kept loking at her now n than..he knew he needs to do sumthing he haven't done yet..a bit express nt awakrd..he smiled at his idea

the bell rung n he dragged her out before next class start

 

Nupur: kya hai

Mayank: subha

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: hum aj bunk keray gay…I want to go out pls…..

 



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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged

kya huA ...itna wait ker rahy thy breakup kaShockedShocked....so sadddCry

 
so here im making u all ...sevn days before
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFLAPRIL FOOLSROFLROFLROFLROFL


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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
well breakup ka tu maine socha hi nai tha...........TongueROFL

it was wonderful...late update aaya but dil lai gayaaa...........LOL

sami was to gud yar..........the way he tease both of thm loved it.........Clap

Now as per promise u will make her feel urs…wasy wht a start u have taken….wht dialogue tht was

He cuped his face n he was making a disgusting face

 

Mein tum se door raho , pass raho….tum se bhago na bhago….tum se laro ya na larooo…..tum per sirf mera haq hai…

 

Mayankj: hath meray pass se

Samrat: common bhi get in practice….sum1 will be so more thn close

Mayank: aur yeah mein teray sth practice kero….yuck……

Samrat\: hello…im straight

Mayank: so am i..

Samrat: how does it feels

Mayank: digusting

Samrat: ufff…im asking abt ur hearts feeling…how does it feels to b in love


that was the bestest part.......ROFLROFL.......

now mayank bunk the class.......Shocked tht will definetely a twist........Wink


w8ing for tht.........Big smile

lovely update doc...

love ya........HugHeart
Heart



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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Lovely part so the Both start Feeling for each other
Thats Great 
thanks for pm cont soon

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