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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 67)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Fiza, i can understand ur problem.
u feel d same what i felt months ago!!!
its fine.
take ur time.
love u.Star

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
fantastic update Fiza.
so beautiful................n hilarious.
OMG!!!! mayank nups k dad k pas chala gya solution dhundhne..............LOL
it waas really hilarious.
i love d way u write mayanks realization.
it was superb.........pefect.
bt last scene was most hillarious..........cherry on the icecream (actually i love icecream more than cake :P)
waiting for next update.
oops....tu to abhi chuti par hai na...............ok, 10days wait karlungi............lekin uske baad Evil Smile ....... samajh gyi na?
better!!!
yah, u forgot to pm me!!!! how could u???Cry
bt thanks for the scrapROFL

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Hey fiza
I'm so so so sorry for being irregular wid my comments on ur ff's

had exams n was busy
just read d promo

seems interesting

Cont soon

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Part 11
man wht an upd8

loved t

Simply amzing

cont soon

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
It's ok yaar

take rest
hope we get an update soon

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
read ur all updates in take. They were superb. Pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

FIzaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hai ALLAH
what a beautiful update dear
i m loving it..................

awwwwwwwwwwwww so not only mayut but also nups has something special feelings for him

hehehehehee accha hai bhai- asise he chalte raho.LOL

both were thinking that if they will confess their feelings then may be it will ruin their frship
payar k mamle main sab log aksar aisa buddhu bsan jate hai- pher mayur kyun nehi bhai???????


fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa the best part of this update ummmmmmmmmm nehi the best part of this whole ff was  mayu and nups dad convo

it was very  beautiful, entertaining, lovely and  wonderful
i just loved each and every word of this convo

By GOD nups ka dad tou F.I.L se jaida mayu ki jigar ki dost lagti hai..........

yaar u wrote their whole convo very nicelyyyyyyyyyyy........

hahahahha wakei ye Mr. Sharma  ki sharm kaha gaya- r a kuch tou sharm karo apni honewali sasur ki samne.


fantastic job fiza
mind- blowing
keep it up dear
now i m eagerly waiting for next update
so do update next part soon
take care
love ya


hey meri jaaannn.
 
lova ya sooooooooooooooooooo much glad u loved it
 
han yaar pyar k mamaly sab asay hi hota hain....aur phir asay na hoon tu story kaun read keray ga
 
im so glad u like there converstion....just want to potray fathers can b like this also n there r fathers like tht.....
 
thku janu
n will update ASAP
lov ya
fiza
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

wowwwwwwwwwwwww doc.....................Clap.
wht a update it was yar...........Smile
atlast both r fall in love wid eachother....Day Dreaming

best part was.. the coversation between mayu and nupurs dad...loved it
u ebeautifully portriat their relation, it was funny, ful of emotions, love, care,etc..........Big smile

Mayank: haha ..ms Nupur bhushan 'ab tum ko batao ga ..weddin per kaun kis k ghonghat utha ta hai'lolz

 N he recived a tight slap from nupurs dad..larki k baap k samany asi baatein kerat hoo'sharam tu ati nhi hai na

 He felt shy 'evnt at his thought..where its going all of a sudden

loved that part.......ROFL

mindblowing doc.......Wink

do update soon ...cant w8 more.....Tongue


love ya.....


thnks doc for liking
 
u made me wait so much to coment now wait for an update
yes the r in love but.....
glad u felt all the enotions in it wch i wana portray
 
thnks for liking
lov ya

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