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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 56)

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
This xm is just making me mad...Angry.But i have to come here na to read the update...
It ws in one word AMAZING...And the answers r...
1. According to me the best thing about this ff is Mayur's friendship EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..and ur writing style....Big smile
2. I dnt remember all the parts but for me the convo bw MN and Sayank after the adi fight and  specially this part ws fab..Day DreamingDay Dreaming.I truly njoyed the dialogues and style...
3. Worst or bad thing is Mayank as a drug addicted...UnhappyUnhappy
4. Now i want to read the nxt part with nupur's reaction...
Cont soon and will give detail cmnt after xm...Hug

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Hey i read all the parts i must tell it is a gr8 ff & i luv it.......i m hungry for more.....Lol.......continue soon and do pm me.......
bst thing of this ff-its different
best dialogue-the drama part of the last update.......do continue sooon

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

it was the bestest update of urs.........Smile i just loved it dearest.........

whole scene of stage performance was dam gud.......
but sami should not have do ths........y he came between both of thm...........Cry

aab maza ayyeiga doonoo ko........specially mayank......LOL

u r too gud .........tumhara update padh k m really happy........

now update sooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......................Tongue

plshhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................

love ya dear..........
waoo
thnku sooo mcuh dear ......u was watching ur expression n u dont know i i was feeling .....
thnku so much for liking stage part ...it took sum much to make it perfect .....
aay hayy....sami kyun aaya...takay kuch k kuch hi hojata....
 
update soon???ShockedShocked hay Allah .......pata hai how much busy im ...but phir bhi not fair janu..
 
i'll update soon
glad u liked it ...
tumhara coment per k im realy happy ...though u were late
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

wow..........this is the best part of this ff.........par ab kya hoga......tu itne suspence par kyun khatam ki.....plz yaar jaldi se update kar dena
thnku soo much dear
lolz...yeahi tu maza hai supense per khatam kerna....
oki i'll try n update soon
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahakmev

fantastic
 
thnkus soo much dear
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Superb upd8

loved it

cont soon
thnks dear
glad u liked it
 
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

Another Awesome Update Fiza...
Loved It Dil sy Heart
and i loved the friendship and trust on each other..i loved every thing of the FF...
and to pick one dialog its so diificult yarr..
as i said before u have great writing skills...
loved ur humour..
and i didnot find anything bad in the FF...
and i want more samrat teasing moments...
and u r doing very good justise with ur FF...
so everything is perfect...

thnku soo much moona
ahhh....im soo touvhed n honurd by ur comments always.....Embarrassed
thnku soo much for ur love n support .it really feels sooo gr8 to know tht..Big smile
gave me strength to wirte more n experment more....
 
sami's teasing  monment hmmm..cool ideaWink
 
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire_girl

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hayeeee..mai kya comment karun..mai to abhi bhi uo college ke stage pe khoyi uyi hoonDay DreamingEmbarrassed
itna sona part uo bhi mere liyeEmbarrassed..
thank you shank you jee
nahi ab aisa nahi karungi..LOL
OMG...ab mujhe bhi play ki reharsal karni haiWinkROFLROFL
hayeee...uo dialouges then?Shocked..mayank to apni baat keh raha thaLOL
nupur kokuch kuch huya naEmbarrassedROFL
dekho jaldi se nupur ko kuch kuch karwaoROFL
i cant wait for thatEmbarrassed


acha now coming to the questions

    what is the best thing abt this ff.......the frndship bond..between mayank nupur and also sami..Big smile so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt....chapter 10..mujhe is part ka har dialouge acha laga..balki best laga...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
    worse or bad thing...mayank ki uo buri halat..mujhse dekhi..matlab padhi nahi gayiCryCry
  1. a moment u want to read...samarat and mayank moment after mayank realize his feelingsEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
par hume kya milega is questions ka answer karkeROFL..ek romantic and mayurish OS to milna chahiye atleastEmbarrassed

love
tasfia


 
 
hey ...u liked it tht much...u know its first time tht i have read my part after updating three time...after reading ur comments
chalo ab tu colloge jao tu her play mein part lay layna shayad kahin koi mayank mil jay LOLLOL
 
glad u like it dear 
 
oki sayank moments in demad..i'll try to add them wasy thy r part of upcuming updates
 
tum ko kuch nhi milay ga..yeah mera inaam tha 10 chapters likhny ka
 

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