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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 52)

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Hello guys

Im back as promised …here is another part may be increasing or relieving ur apprehensions….ok I want u all after reading scroll down to my note plsss….

 

N congratulations to all of u …al made it possible..v complelted 50 pages…..

 

Rplyd to u all

Love u

 

N this on is for my JANU bacha cuming back …u don't know how I was feeling …ask maha ..mein us k office mein bhi deemagh kah rahi thi……pls don't dare to do it again..there r many of us who really love u …

 

Fiza

 



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CHAPTER:10

 

DAY THREE

 

Slightly annoyed with his unknown feelins, slightly with Nupur, more on himself?.n else on God knows why?.he moved inside the colloge yet another day without her?..

 

Lost in himself ?he went in side the class n  throwing his beg on his usual seat?.n found all guys busy in chating

 

Mayank: yeah abhi tak class kyun nhi shoro hi?

Nupur: putting her hand on hs shoulder?n jumping next to him?..stupid sharam ..aj colloge drama ke rehearsal hai tu class off hain?.

Mayank: ohhh no ..tu mein colloge kyun aaya hoon?I m leaving

 

Nupur: chal na auditorium chlaty hain?.maza ay gay

Mayank: im nt in a mood?.mjhy jana hai

 

Nupur: tuhy hoa kiya hai?.itna wired kyun horaha hai?.jab se sam aaya ya hai tu meri koi baat nhi manta?chal na ..

Mayank: mjhy nhi jana bsss

Nupur: tjhy poch nhi rhin hoon ..bata rahin hoon?.she dragged him out

 

Maynk: her bar teray baat mani jay zaroori nhi?.naukar nhi ho mein tera

Nupur: she left his hand n got angry ??thik hai tu mein aklei hi chali jati hoon..tujhy wasay bhi aj kal meray baghair rehna acha lagta hai?2 din se tu mjhy avoid ker raha hai?.ek baat ko itna sir per sawar kerliya hai?.pata nhi teray deemagh mein kiya chal rah hai?.bye

Maynk: most welcum

 

She left n he was about to leav?..

 

Girl: lead is being performed by adi na?.wao he looks gud

 

With hs name echoing in his ear ?..he steps automatically shifted towards auditorium

 

Bth entered n get them self placed in front row?sami was also ther?

 

 

Smai: yaaar yeah kiya performance hai?.emotions naam ke koi cheez nhi hai

Nupur: han sach mein seedha seedha dialogues bool rahy hain?..she shouted?abay kuch tu intensity laoo?wht kind of performance is tht

 

Girl: acha ..itni intensity chaiy tu khud aao stage per?.aur ker k dekho

Nupur: wht

Girl: kyun ?waha se kahan asan hai?.ab aaker dkho na

 

Sami: ja  Nupur..comon show them

Nupur: yaar per us adi k sath ?woh bhi confession scence?.

Sami: common ?its just a show

 

She turn towards mayank?.who was behaving he didtn listen anything n was playing game on his cell

 

Nupur: mayank?shud I

Mayank: it on u ?.wht ever u find right?.he looked straight in her eyes?.wishing she say no..,

 

Adi: kya hua nups?.daar gain

Mayank; to him self?nups k bacha

Nupur: oye..nupur bhusahan kisi se nhi darti ..samhjay?.per urn t of my standard?tu tumhari jaga I'll perferm with Mayank?

 

Smarat's mouth droped n he send a flying kiss to GOD

 

Mayank: tera demagh karab hogaya hai kiya

Nupur: dkh mein us adi k ath romantic scene kerny ka risk nhi lay sakti

 

Samrat: aur bhao tumhary sath

 

Nupur: kya?tu chup ker

Mayank: Nupur mjh se nhi hoga?

Nupur: pls mayank ..meri izaat k faluda na nikal?plsss? she literallt pleaded

Mayank: ?.aww..i hate u

Samrat: array wah bhagwan?mjhy tu pata hi nhi tha ap bhi meri side ho?..wah

 

Nupur: scene kiya hai?

 

Girl: simple ..larka larki ek dosary se pyar keraty .un ke fight hoti hai ?..larki confess kerti hai?but larka many ko taiyar nhi?aur woh us ko reasons day ker manati hai?.aur phir us ko moo se slip hojata hai k woh us se pyar kerta hai?.

 

Mayank: wht ?.yeah kis kisam k scnec hai

Sami: bhai simple hai yaar?.whispering in his ear?ghusaay mein tu tum ho hi?.emotions bhi kafi natural hain?.dialogues sari hindi intense fimlo k combine kerlay na?.done

 

Mayank: yeah bhai k musrder k koi scnec nhi hia

Sami: nhi colloge play hai..no violence. better luck next time abhi yaha concentrate kero ?..

Sharma khandan ki izzat ka sawal hai?.VIJAY HOO

 

Mayank look at him n disgusted n disbleived

 

Adi: lights off

 

 

She came upto him n said "ready"

 

Mayank:Nupur mjhy nhi kerna?..

 

Nupur: Shut up ?mjhy adi ko dkhna hai

Mayank: Teri her baat aj kal adi se kyun shooro hoti hai?.mocking

Nupur: Kya ?

Mayank: scnec keray

 

Nupur: tumhara deemagh karab hogaya hai ?..wht do u think of urself?.poray colloge k samany tamsah bana diya ..aur phir khudi hi wired behave bhi ker rahy hooo

 

Mayank: tamasha mein banya tha..ya us ny?.woh is se bhi zayada deserve kerta tha?per us ki kisi baat se lagta hai tujhy koi farqa nhi parta

 

Nupur'; han nhi parta ?he doesn't matters to me

Mayank; but mjhy parta hai?.h

Nupur: kyun?

 

She looked straight in to his eyes with so much intensity tht they forget they were on stage and are perferoming ..there cnflicts n there un answered questions came infront of them

 

Mayank: yeah kasa sawal hai?tu meri doost hai kya yeah kafi nhi hai ?.

Nupur: nhi?kyun tu is se zayada agay bahra chukka hai

Mayank: mein ny asa khabi nhi kiya

 

He was avoiding her eyes...........though she was just delivering dialogues?.

 

Nupur: acah tu meri traf dekh ker baat kyun nhi kerta ??itna ghusa kis baaat per hai tujhy ko ?.bool na.

Mayank: kisi per nhi

Nupur: acha tu mjhy se bhag kyun raha hai?.na coologe mein mjhy se baat kerta hai na?baad  mein

Mayank: ek din baat na kero tu problem tujhy horahi hai?.mjhy nhi?tu nhi rah pa rahi

Kyun?

 

Nupur: tujhy pata hai kyun?tujhy pata hai tu meray liyan doost se buhat zayada hai?tujhy yeah bhi pata hai k mein teray lyan kiya hoo?.tu sirf darta hai

 

Mayank: MJHY KISI SE DAAr NHI LAGTA

Nupur : tujhy khud se daar lag rah hai?.apni feelings se daar lagraha hai ?

Mayank: I don't feel anything ?.

 

She took his hand on placed it on her head?he lloked at her in a shock?.he does nt want to do this

 

Sami: ohh freak?..yeah tu kuch zayada horha hai?.bhai gaya

 

Nupur: tumhain pora laga us din us k meray pass hona?han ya na

Myank: mjhy nhi pata?

Nupur: jab mein pass nhi hoti tu?u miss me ?

Ha ya na?.

Mayank: im nt answering ur stupid questions

Nupur: jab tum meri ankhoon mein dkhty hoo tu tumhain sookon milta hai ?han ya na

Mayank: enough Nupur?

Sami: freak?bhai  woh Nupur nhi hai..charcter hai

Nupur: tum mjh se pyar kerty hoo.,?han ya na

 

This word was enough to make him gooo..mad..he doent wants to hear it from her mouth at least?.he looked in her eyes with so much intensity tht  scared her like hell?he graped her shoulder n pull her towards him?..so close tht she can feel his breath on her face

 

Mayank: kya ?kya ?problem hai ?..han nhi pasand?.mjhy nhi pasad koi bhi..KOI BHI?.nhi dkh sakta kisi ko bhi tumharay asa pass?.tumharay sath ..yeah haq sirf mera hai..bs?tumharay ghusay per?tumharay narazagi per?tumhary nakauroo per?tumharay her pall per sirf mera haq hai?. Mein tum se door raho , pass raho?.tum se bhago na bhago?.tum se laro ya na larooo?..tum per sirf mera haq hai?

 

Jab mein ny apni her baat, apna her dard , apni her khushi , apna her kahwab sirf tumharay sath share kiya aur khabhi kisi k sath nhi tu tum kasay ker sakti hoo yeah?

 

Nupur: mjhy dard horaha hai

Myank: mjhy bhi hoa tha?aur is se bhi zayada ho tha ?jab tu ny us se kaha k ?its ok?..forget it ?..

Nupur: mein ny asa nhi kaha?.

Mayank: mein ny khud suna tha?tum ny us ko mjhy per sahi mana?.us ko mjh se upper rekha

Nupur: tera deemagh karab hogaya hai?mein tujhy se upper tu khud ko nhi rekh tu kis aur k kasay rkh gi??

 

Tujhy se upper na tu khbhi koi than a khbi koi hoga?..is se bara scah aur kuch nhi hai.. yeah tujhy samhj nhi araha ?kyun daar rah hai

Mayank: mein tjhy khona nhi chahata

Nupur: aur mein tujhy pana chati hoon

Mayank: aur sab kuch agar complicated hogaya ?..sab ulhaj jay ga?

nupur: jab hum ny ek doosray ke zindgi sulhjai hai tu?.hum jab tak hum hain?.sab thik rahy gay ?

mayank: rishty badl jay gay

Nupur: ehass tu nhi ?yeah rishta hamesha ehass k hai ?hai na?.

 

 

Wht they were saying to each other .they don't know?..wht was displaying in each other eyes was sumthing too deep..to deep to make the lost inside each  other?..they were just seein in each other eyes?..nupur was confused to ths this in his eyes..wht has gone inside him?wht he is delivery ?she was finding her self going weak ..losing her all strengths?.he was finding peace?.peace he was hunting for soo long ..he dint want to stop this moment ?his restlssnes , his questions where answered?he forgt everything the only thing he was cherishing was the moment ?.

 

His hand when moved from her shoulder to face he didn't knew?.he was getting closer to her?n when her hands sloded around him she didn't knew?....soon to tighly embrace her in his arms?..she  rested her head on his chest?encircling her arms around him?n he pulled her more close?.

 

 

 Samrat was watching all this sum where in tears?..but he knew he need to break it else it will turn too embaracing  n awkward n mayb can worse the situation?..he came out of his world n shouted

 

Smarat: superb yaar?.lights?.he claped

 

N every1 joined them?they broke apart in shock..wch was more on Nupur?mayank moved away n looked towards the audience ..sami adi n all other joined them on stage n wished them n mayank silently left the place in rush ?but Nupur was sumwhere frozen at her place

 

 
 


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it was the bestest update of urs.........Smile i just loved it dearest.........

whole scene of stage performance was dam gud.......
but sami should not have do ths........y he came between both of thm...........Cry

aab maza ayyeiga doonoo ko........specially mayank......LOL

u r too gud .........tumhara update padh k m really happy........

now update sooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......................Tongue

plshhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................

love ya dear..........


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As we are at chapter 10 I want u to answere sum of my questions…tht will really help me as they help me at BYLM time..

 

  1. what is the best thing abt this ff
  2. so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt
  3. worse or bad thing
  4. a moment u want to read…except…there confession marriage n truth reveal..as all of it is part of ths ff but at certain time

 

plssssssssss to answer me …im dying to read abt this….but don't forget to coment regarding this part to

 



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  1. what is the best thing abt this ff
    i love the relationshp with blind trust........Smile
  1. so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt
   

Mayank: kya ?kya ?problem hai ?..han nhi pasand?.mjhy nhi pasad koi bhi..KOI BHI?.nhi dkh sakta kisi ko bhi tumharay asa pass?.tumharay sath ..yeah haq sirf mera hai..bs?tumharay ghusay per?tumharay narazagi per?tumhary nakauroo per?tumharay her pall per sirf mera haq hai?. Mein tum se door raho , pass raho?.tum se bhago na bhago?.tum se laro ya na larooo?..tum per sirf mera haq hai?

 

Jab mein ny apni her baat, apna her dard , apni her khushi , apna her kahwab sirf tumharay sath share kiya aur khabhi kisi k sath nhi tu tum kasay ker sakti hoo yeah?

I LOVE THT DIALOGUES........IT CLEARLY SHOWING THE INTERNAL PAIN OF MAYANK, HIS UNSAID WORDS, HIS LOVE TOWARDS NUPUR......., HIS POSSESSIVENESS.........I AM SO TOUCHED FIZA.....

  1. worse or bad thing
 CANT IMAGINE MAYANK AS A DRUG ADDICT......
  1. a moment u want to read…except…there confession marriage n truth reveal..as all of it is part of ths ff but at certain time
WANT TO  KNOW HOW MAYANK CHANGED.......HOW HE BECOME ADDICT......WHT WAS THE REASON.......


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wow..........this is the best part of this ff.........par ab kya hoga......tu itne suspence par kyun khatam ki.....plz yaar jaldi se update kar dena


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Superb upd8

loved it

cont soon

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